October 20, 2008

Doing It – Part Two
Alex Hawk

“This isn’t a good idea, Emmet” Jack muttered as we crept quietly through the sleeping campground. It was about two in the morning, and needless to say, if we were caught it would be bad.

“It was YOUR idea!” I replied.

“Look, guys, we’re almost there, ok? All we gotta do is get into the cabin, grab what we’re there for and leave!” Jeff said.

“Why aren’t we doing this when they’re gone?” I asked for about the tenth time.

Jeff sighed. “There’s no point in a panty-raid if the people you’re raiding are gone.”

“Shut up, guys,” Jack said. “There’s the cabin.”

We paused behind a couple trees and looked at the cabin occupied by my sister Sally and her cabin-mates, Jessica and Molly. Our goal: sneak into the cabin wearing improvised masks, grab their underwear and sprint back to our own cabin. It was a stupid idea, but we were twelve, horny and bored.

Slowly, quietly, we crept towards the cabin, our ears attentive for anything unusual, our eyes searching around for signs of trouble. Nothing. All was clear. We moved ever forward and paused at the door to gather our wits. Then on the count of three we threw open the door and charged into the cabin at full speed!

No one was there.

We stood there in confusion for just an instant before Jeff said, “It’s a trap!”

As we turned to bolt from the cabin the door shut, and we were blinded by bright lights which turned out to be flashlights. As our eyes adjusted we saw the girls standing there in their nightgowns, obviously ready for us.

We were screwed.

“Well, well, well…” Molly began. “What have we here? Three lost boys, on their way to Neverland?”

“Uh… yes?” Jack hazzarded.

“No,” Molly said flatly. “Take off the masks.”

Sighing we each pulled our masks off. My sister let out a little laugh. “I KNEW that was you, Emmet.”

“Look, Sally, this wasn’t my idea,” I began.

“Save it boys,” said Jessica. “We caught you trying to raid us, and now you’re ours to punish.”

“Punish?” Jeff echoed weakly.

“Either you get punished by us or we turn you over to the counselors,” Sally said.

“Take your pick, boys,” Molly put in. “We’ll wait.”

I turned to Jack and Jeff. “You realize, right, that we’re fucked.”

Both of them nodded and Jeff elbowed Jack. “You idiot. This was your idea.”

“I didn’t expect them to know we were coming!” Jack protested.

“How DID they know we were coming?” I wondered.

“It doesn’t matter now. The main question we have to answer is do we do what they want or risk having the counselors punish us?” asked Jeff.

As we thought about this, I said, “Well, look, whatever they wanna do to us won’t be as bad as what the counselors want. And if they want us to do something really bad, all we have to do is call their bluff and get them in trouble for trying to blackmail us.”

“That makes sense,” Jack said as Jeff nodded.

I turned the girls. “Ok, what sort of punishment do you have in mind?”

“Well,” said Molly, “since you came here to steal our underwear it’s only fair that we should steal yours. So take off whatever underwear you have on and we’ll let you go.”

“Our underwear?” I echoed.


I looked at the other boys who seemed to have appointed me leader. Great. Scowling a little I said, “Fine. Turn around and we’ll give them to you.”

“No, no, Emmet,” said Sally. “You take them off where we can watch.”

“What?!” Jack hissed loudly. “You can’t be serious!”

“We are,” Sally said in a tone that I knew from experience meant she was very serious.

“It’s simple boys,” said Jessica. “You take off your under and give them us while we watch or we turn you in to the counselors. It’s up to you.”

Jack and Jeff were both looking at me. I scowled again and said, “Fine, whatever. Though it’s a little sick that you wanna see my dick,” I said looking at my sister.

Sally smiled sweetly. “I don’t wanna see YOURS, Emmet.” She fixed her eye on Jeff who blushed.

“So get to it, boys!” called out Molly.

I looked at the other guys. “I don’t think we have a choice,” I said, reluctantly.

“Fine,” said Jack. “Let’s get it over with.”

At pretty much the same time, all three of us started to unzip and pull down our pants. We all stepped out of them and then, with me in the lead, we pulled off our boxers and passed them to the girls. I was at least a little relieved to notice that I wasn’t the only boy with a hardon.

The girls giggled a little as they stared at each of us. I felt my face growing hot, but knew there wasn’t anything I could do about it. I said, “Can we go now?”

“Sure, but you should probably pull up your pants first,” Molly said.

Blushing furiously, I pulled my pants up and after my cabin mates followed suit we made our way back to our cabin, the sound of the laughing girls echoing in our heads. As soon as we were inside and the door was shut, I said something very succinct.

“Well, fuck.”

“How did they know we were coming?” Jeff said.

“I don’t know. Sally was probably behind it somehow. It’s my sister’s style. I’ll find out eventually.”

Dejected we all sat down on our bunks in the darkness. Finally Jack said, “So now what?”

Slowly I said, “Now… we prepare our revenge.” And for the next ten minutes I outlined a plan. It was entirely evil and would be absolutely perfect. I couldn’t wait until morning to try it! We’d show the girls who was in charge.


Copyright 2004 by Alex Hawk. If you break my copyright, I won’t be your friend anymore!