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Massage in a Bottle

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There’s a new story online. It’s a pretty straightforward premise this time, and my main goal with this story was to keep it short. I guess I managed. A big thanks to E-o-F for helping me out with the editing!

I hope you guys enjoy the story, despite the lack of story arc and deep character development. Please let me know what you think of it. You can use the comments, drop me an e-mail, sign the guestbook. Whatever you want.

In the meantime, the results of my survey are slowly coming in. I was hoping for a little more responses, but up until now, seventeen people replied already. I guess that’s better than nothing, right!? 🙂 And to those seventeen that took time and effort to reply and help me out: A big Shout Out to you guys! Thanks!

Some results are funny, and unexpected to me though. For example:

  • There is no Alex Hawk story that pops out as a site favorite. Five replies are possible to this question, and up until almost every story is mentioned. There is a slight preference for three stories, but it’s minimal. I expected one or two stories to really stand out.
  • There is a big brother/sister preference amongst you. Which of the two is older doesn’t matter much to you.

The poll / survey is still open for a while and I hope you find the time to fill it in.

Help me out with this survey please

I hope you enjoy the latest story, and help me out by filling in the survey.

Stay safe guys!

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I’m curious

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After all the positive feedback I got on “Bullied to Buff”, I started thinking. I’ve put a lot of effort (and a bit of money) in this site. It started out as an Alex Hawk tribute, but with me picking up writing myself I wondered what you, the reader, like. So I made a little survey and I hope you’re willing to fill it in. They’re just a few basic questions, so I get a little bit of insight about what your reason is to visit here.

To make things a bit more interesting, I’ve also added a few questions about your main go-to story setup. And last, but not least, what is your favorite Alex Hawk story, your favorite Jason Crow Story, your favorite story series and of course the all-over, all-time favorite story. I’ll make sure there’s enough time to fill this out. After (I guess) a few months, I’ll post the result of this poll.

Thanks for taking the survey and helping me out this way!

Help me out with this survey please

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Bullied to Buff – All parts online

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Hi Guys,

I just wanted you to know that all four parts are online now. I’m a bit proud of this story. Mostly because of the character development and the story arch I managed to put in the story. Don’t worry! I don’t think I’m writing ‘The Great Gatsby’ or other high-end American Literature 🙂 But I do believe that a story, any story, needs a bit of conflict and character development. Even the stories I write as Jason Crow.

But… as an experiment I’m currently working on a short(-ish) story with much less of these elements, just to see if I can pull that off too. And, another part I want to learn, of course, is: will you, the reader, accept it? But that’s for another day and time.

As you may have read already (you practically can’t miss it) read, a lot of Kudo’s go to caliboy1991 for editing and helping me out. Also a big thank you to E-o-F! He proofread the stories one last time and still found some typos that needed to be fixed. Thanks a lot guys!

For now: Enjoy the entire story and I’m real curious what you think of it. As always: You can use the comment section, or drop me an email at jasoncrowwriter@hotmail.com

Stay safe!

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Bullied to Buff

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It’s been a while since Zafar – Part three was released. But, good news! I managed to write another story. This time it is a four-part story. I know… I never learn. But the good news this time is, that everything is already there. During my holiday, I started writing. And before I knew it, the story was finished. But it was big! Way too big for one part. So afterward, I splitted it at the natural and logical points in the story.

The main reason that this is just the first part, is that caliboy1991, another erotica writer I’m in close contact with, volunteered to edit my story. I noticed I struggled a bit in my previous work with some tense issues, but also some interpunction and just wrong words. The main reason for this, of course, is that I’m a non-native speaker. But I do want to improve my skills in Englisch. So a big, big shout out to Cali who offered to edit and give me pointers!! Thank you very much, Cali. Currently he’s still reviewing the remaining parts (no pressure, Cali!), but I didn’t want to hold back this story.

As with all characters I wrote until now, I grew close to these. Kaylee at first was just an one-dimensional character, but as the story progressed, she grew on me.

I hope y’all enjoy this one, and as always: All comments, good and bad, are greatly appreciated!! Seriously! Give me feedback…

It can be found under Jason’s Collection in the menu, but here’s the direct link.

Stay safe!

Thanks again, Cali!

EDIT: 9/21- Part two is added now!

EDIT: 28/9 – Part three is online!

EDIT: 4/10 – The last part is online!

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