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Author: Jason Crow (Page 1 of 156)
Hi everyone,
I know it’s been quiet over here for too long. The story I wrote that was about to launch early this year, simply isn’t good enough. I didn’t give up on it yet, but it needs some serious rework. But I cannot do this before I finished the next story I’m working on, and that one is getting along nicely!
Thankfully, more authors are willing to publish their work here, so you don’t have to wait too long for new, high-quality stories to be published. Tommy Linarcos has sent me his newest additions, and it’s amazing! I love the premise and the quality he manages to deliver constantly. And this one is no exception. And I personally LOVE the artwork he created. The vintage style is lovely.
His words about these three stories:
This short collection of stories comes from a novel I have written. I had to write out these tales to work out the intricacies of the characters’ histories where they are coming of age as young adults, but also deal with a dying family member. However, the level of detail and the subject matter would have been quite out of line with a mainstream novel, other than as summary. These are, literally, unpublishable chapters for a regular publishing house and were never included in the novel, but I’d like them to have an audience, and Jason thought his site would be the right place to host them, where I now have other stories posted. Each chapter can stand on its own, but they work better if you read them in order, at least the first time.
I hope you enjoy them!
Tommy
I’m sure we do, Tommy!! Here’s the direct link
P.S. I did some rework on the front page. I hope this improves the way you can go directly to your favorite author.
Alex and Tess 3 – Comfort
by
Tommy Linarcos
For Alex and Tess, there was no repeat performance the next day. After having lost their virginities to each other the night before, they did not get together and fuck each other blue. They did not attempt to improve on their bad oral sex, they did not offer each other manual stimulation. They did not kiss, or hold hands, or tell each other ‘I love you.’
Alex’s father returned from the hospital and did not have good news. “We knew the procedure had limited chances, and the outcome was either going to be very, very good, or very, very bad. But with no other recourse, other than watching your mother go downhill and get weaker and weaker every day, she and I decided to try it. I’m afraid the outcome is not very, very good.” Karl Brand was a stone before his children; he’d done all his crying elsewhere.
Time was so short, Alex, his sister Karin, and his brother Peter were rushed into the car and driven to the hospital. Any planned hospice for their home was cancelled, their mother was just being made as comfortable as possible in her hospital room.
“This is not how I pictured this…” his mother said, trying to laugh. “I’m afraid I’m going to be leaving you all a lot sooner than I’d hoped.” Alex’s father just sat in the chair near her, allowing the kids to get as close to her as they needed to.
Peter, at eighteen, was angry and wouldn’t speak to his mother. He wound up leaving the room and punching the vending machine in the hall, breaking the plasti-glass until it looked like a spider web and eventually collapsed in on itself. His father was called away to help with Peter and the situation.
Karin, still fifteen, was in near hysterics. She was crying, apologizing for forgetting a card she’d made for her mother. She’d been rushed out of the house, she’d forgotten the card, and a box of memories she was going to share, full of little toys and photos she’d curated over the last month, hoping she wouldn’t need it, and now that she did, she didn’t have it.
Alex, recently twelve, was just quiet. When Karin had calmed down and hugged her mother as long and as carefully as she could, she gave up the prime space at her mother’s hand to Alex.
“What happened, honey?” His mother ran her hand along Alex’s face, where a thick, bruised welt across his cheek and a blood-crusted ear generated her concern. Alex had sat at the foot of the bed prior, turned the other way, showing the good side of his face in profile, but there was no hiding it, now.
“Oh, nothing,” Alex tried to smile, but failed. “A jerk got fresh with my girl and I had to show him some manners.”
His mother suspected that Peter had done this damage, and she was right, but she didn’t ask. Alex had several small scars on various parts of his body attributed to wounds from Peter taking his frustrations with the world out on his little brother.
“I hope you can find forgiveness for whomever you got in this fight with. Whatever caused it is wrong, but I hope you can live together peacefully from now on.” She looked sadder now than she had when they first arrived.
“Maybe,” was all Alex could promise about that.
“How’s your leg?” she asked next.
“Doing better. I got to go swimming, so…” Alex had recently had an accident in the kitchen (not Peter’s fault) and spilled a pot of hot coffee on his leg, burning his thigh. His friend Tess had been there to help him, luckily.
“I’m glad Tess was there. Take care with her. And with Suzie. Things are going to change in high school. Keep your good friends with you, don’t shut yourself off. Remember, life is better with friends.”
“I have good friends,” Alex agreed.
“I had a dream,” his mother just seemed to remember. “It felt like the future. I don’t know how old you were, but you didn’t look too much different. Bigger, stronger, but still you, still that blonde shaggy hair. You were in a forest, by a river — or in a river, I don’t remember — and you were looking at someone. You were happy. There was sunshine on your hair and you were wearing a green shirt. I don’t know why I know that, I just see the image now. It felt like you were in love. You had a smile that said you were in love. That’s what I know, what I feel is right. I don’t know where or when this was, but it didn’t look like here. There were mountains.”
“I like mountains,” he said.
“I hope it’s true, then.” His mother smiled and pressed his hand. “I love you, my baby.”
“I love you, Mama.”
She closed her eyes. Karin leapt up. “No. No, don’t… I’m not done, yet, Mama! I have more to tell you!” Her mother opened her eyes, smiled, and shut them again. She was weak, but she was not dead, the machines said so. She was either asleep or passed out. Karin turned to Alex. “Find Peter. She wanted to talk to Peter and he ran out.”
Alex nodded and left to look for his brother. Peter was not to be found, though.
Alex’s father returned and sat with his wife, letting Karin and Alex get a drink in the cafeteria and then sit in the small waiting room outside, hoping Peter would return. When he did finally return, with a sock wrapped around his hand, he was still angry, but subdued. They checked on their mother, but Dad said she hadn’t regained consciousness.
“It’s not fair. I didn’t get my time with her that you guys got,” Peter shot at them in the waiting room.
“You left!” Karin countered.
“I came back!”
“You got three more years with her than I did!”
The sniping continued, but ended. Alex thought Peter had six more years, and Karin three more years than he did, though he said nothing aloud. He’d acquired some of Peter’s anger in the interim, in the waiting. If his mother was going to leave him, maybe she ought to just get on and leave them, then. Quit this waiting, this maybe, this praying for hope, this hope that she’ll wake up and everything will be all better again.
An hour later, his father returned to them, and it was over.
* * *
When they got home, Peter took his backpack and no one saw him for two days. Karin and Alex cleaned the house from top to bottom, getting every crack, every window, the grease on the stove. Alex wasn’t sure why, but Karin needed to do it, and she needed him to help her.
Tess, Suzie, and Joey came by when they found Alex had returned, but he didn’t talk to them, just kind of waved at them from the door and shook his head. They knew, then.
Tess and Suzie each came by again, but Alex wouldn’t see them. Karin spoke to them.
At the funeral on Saturday, the entire neighborhood came to the wake and the cemetery. Alex sat with his cousin when his friends weren’t there, but they did come. He still wouldn’t speak, but both Tess and Suzie held his hands, throughout. Even Joey broke from his family to sit with Alex.
Relatives kept asking Alex about the bruises on his face and the scab on his ear so often that Tess went home and got him a pair of her sunglasses, dark aviators, which he wore indoors and out for the duration. He didn’t want to look like a spy, or look cool, which, in his black suit, any other day he would. But with them on, people got the idea that he wanted to be left alone.
Peter was angry that his mother was being buried — he didn’t want her alone, in a box, in a place with all these strangers, someplace he’d never want to visit, and Karin argued back that he wasn’t around to help make any decisions or even talk to his father. Alex stayed out of the argument, just sat behind his sunglasses with Tess and Suzie.
There was a luncheon for those who’d come to the funeral. Alex didn’t eat. Joey, Tess, and Suzie did, and tried to get him to, but they knew. Though Joey had to leave with his family, Tess and Suzie told their parents they were going to stay with Alex until it was over and help Karin clean up, and were allowed to. They all came home later with Alex’s family.
Back home, Tess kissed Alex and told him she’d see him later. Suzie gave Alex a kiss — a real kiss — and said she’d check on him tomorrow.
Alex’s father and Karin retreated into their spaces in the house. Peter took off. Alex sat in his frontroom staring at a television he hadn’t turned on, still in his black suit.
Tess had changed out of her dress, though still looked nice, not in jeans or “play clothes,” and came back to sit with Alex, trying to get him to open up. They sat through a Muppet Show, then flipped channels from Battlestar Galactica to The Bad News Bears. At 8:00pm, it was either The Love Boat or the movie version of Judy Blume’s Forever. Tess kind of wanted to watch that, but didn’t know how Alex was feeling, if he wanted her here, or if he would say or choose anything at all. They made it about half-way through the movie when she asked him if he would, at least, get out of his black suit.
Alex turned to her, stood, took her hand, and she walked with him. He went to his bedroom. He didn’t turn the light on. She sat at his desk chair. He took off his jacket and tie, hanging each nicely in his closet. He opened his sleeve buttons, then one by one, the buttons down the front of his nice white shirt, took that off, and hung it over the back of his desk chair. Tess picked that up to fix how it hung, and could smell him on the shirt collar. He emptied his black suit pants pockets, then removed them and hung them in the closet. He did not find any new clothes. He pulled off his white undershirt, then his black socks, and threw them in his hamper. He removed his briefs and put them in the hamper, too.
He stood in front of her, naked.
He turned and opened the Star Wars covers on his bed and got under them.
Tess stood up and used the telephone in the kitchen, then shut off the television. She returned to Alex’s bedroom and closed the door. She removed her clothes, folded them, and set them on the desk chair. She crawled under the covers with Alex and wrapped her arms around him.
He immediately closed his arms on her, too. He held her tight, so tightly that he had to remind himself not to hurt her, though she did not protest. He put his head in her shoulder, breathed out and shuddered, and continuously fought the battle not to cry. Eventually, his breathing became softer and regular, his hold on her relaxed, and Tess knew he had fallen asleep. She found a way to be comfortable, and joined him.
Somewhere after eleven o’clock, she had awoken. She found Alex awake next to her, just stroking her arm, watching her. “You’re up? You okay?” she asked. He squeezed her arm twice, lightly, and nodded. Something had changed, some little bit, something inside him. He still wasn’t speaking, but he felt different.
“I’m still here. I’m not going anywhere,” she assured him. She didn’t know if that was the right or wrong thing to say, especially with the day’s events, but she wanted him to know.
He kissed her cheek. She turned to him and kissed him back, full. Careful, at first, just to assure him. He continued to kiss her, warmly, softly, so she gave it back. He stopped and turned her body toward him, holding her point-to-point, and just held her close, his mouth dipping into her shoulder, kissing her there and up her neck.
She ran her hand up and down his back, slowly, gently. She wished she had breasts; she imagined it would be so much more comfortable like this, and perhaps he’d touch them. She was so thin, she poked him with her knee or elbow every time they shifted, but she found a good spot, hooking her foot behind his knee and hugging his leg between hers. She couldn’t help but run her hands down to his butt; he had a cute butt, and squeezing it lightly made her think that’s how her breasts would be, when they came in.
He was getting hard. That hadn’t been her intention, to make him hard, but he was a boy. His kisses were getting more intentional on her shoulder, on her neck, up her throat, and then on her lips. She kissed him back. It was okay, she was here for him.
He pushed her back off her side and moved his head down to kiss and suck at her nipples. She liked when he did that. Again, she wished she had breasts, but she liked when he did that. He was getting very warm. She was getting warm. It was warm under the covers, and it was summer, but she didn’t want to throw them open. Warm was good. His hand moved down to her pussy, grazing her bare vulva, then dipping inside. She didn’t grab for his cock — she knew where that was, hard against her thigh — she’d have to fidget too much to get her hand in there.
He moved on top of her and settled between her legs. She opened them for him. She wanted him to do this. She hadn’t thought they’d get a chance to do it again for some time, with the mood in the house and with Alex closing himself off, but it appeared he wanted to. That was good, wasn’t it? In the last couple of hours, and especially the last fifteen minutes, he’d opened up to her more than he had all day.
He put his cock into place, or at least where he thought it was supposed to go. “A little lower,” she whispered. He tried, and found the spot, starting a gentle but insistent thrust. It was hard gaining entrance, and he slipped upward and lost the spot. Her hand appeared, fixing her flower, showing him her wetness a little deeper, and guided him. In a moment, he was inside of her again.
The first time, the last time, it had been so thrilling, her on top, making it happen little by little. It only lasted a short time before Alex had pulled out of her, but it was glorious. She wanted that feeling again. She wanted it better. She had nothing to compare it to, but she knew they were both nervous before, and they didn’t really do it right. She wasn’t nervous, now. Just a little worried for Alex, yet. He’d been hollow all day, and now there finally was his need to be with her. She not only wanted to help, but she loved how they were doing it.
Alex was gaining momentum, thrusting inside of her. He fell out of her again, but fixed himself and was back inside, filling her. It was still so new, this fullness inside of her, but it was Alex inside of her. It’s who she wanted.
It was weird liking a boy that she played baseball with. And bikes. And superheroes. Skating in the winter. Star Wars. And hanging at the mall. And Atari. Well, Atari at his house, she still only had the Coleco Telstar. Sometimes they were kids, sometimes they were like teenagers. They were very much being like teenagers, now.
He was breathing hard by her ear. He was trying to be quiet in the house, she could tell. He was almost whispering to her. He was almost speaking to her. She could tell what was coming. It had only been a short time, but she could tell. She held his butt with both of her hands and wrapped her legs behind his. “Inside me. I want to feel it,” she whispered back to him.
He didn’t want to pull out, either. He didn’t want to leave her. His arms were tight around her, his breathing got shallow, his thrusting was hard but erratic. He was an engine. He tried to speak, “I’m… I’m…” right next to her ear, but she could tell his teeth were clenched. His entire body clenched, like it did when she stroked him off, but this time it was all inside her — inside her arms, inside her legs, inside her. And then he thrust one more time and she felt it. The warmth inside her.
She wasn’t cumming, but he was, and he kept cumming. When he held still, she could feel him shoot inside her, and then he thrust again, just a rocking, like he needed to. Slowly, he stopped, but he still held onto her. Eventually, she felt him breathing again. She relaxed under him, moved her hands to his spine and in his hair, but she didn’t let go of him.
When they played together, in the park, on the field, in the streets, he always watched out for her. She was as tough as he was, sometimes better in the games than he was, but she always knew that if there was trouble — with other kids, or with nosy cops, or a buttinski parent, Alex would protect her. He made her feel safe. Now, tonight, she was protecting him. Comforting him. She wanted him to feel safe.
Neither one wanted to move. Actually, she wouldn’t mind if he got off of her, but he wasn’t too heavy, and she didn’t want to do the wrong thing. If she shoved him over, would he get mad at her? Were girls supposed to shove the boys off, or wait?
Alex lifted his head, found her eyes. She could see a smile somewhere in his cheeks. He didn’t speak yet. She imagined he wanted to say something like, ‘Hey, we did it! The whole thing! That was awesome!’ But he didn’t, or couldn’t. Not yet.
He kissed her. They kept kissing. If people saw them kissing, these two twelve-year-old kids, they’d be all ‘Oh, my!’ she figured. But they liked to kiss. And they were pretty good at it, too. It was the simplest thing to do. It wasn’t to show anyone they were together. It was just them being together.
Their laying on each other and kissing had lasted longer than she perceived, or boys were really that weird. He had never pulled out of her, never fell to her side, and she hadn’t made him. She had felt that his cock had gotten softer after his orgasm, but it was definitely hard again. She could feel his blood moving inside his arms. He was breathing deeper. He was coming back to life, and when she found his face in the blue light from the window, he had that look in his eye.
His hips started moving. They were going to fuck again. No. She wanted to think of this differently. They were going to make love again. Maybe that was too grown up. Maybe she was fooling herself. But she loved her boyfriend, and that’s what they were doing, damn it!
She giggled into his mouth. She always swore too much, her sister said. She even swore while she was thinking! And when she thought aloud, she could get in trouble. He looked at her — was she laughing at him? She had to let him know. “I knew you’d come back. That’s it. Yeah…”
It was squishier this time, a lot wetter with his cum still inside her. It felt different, but exciting. He slipped out of her. He was starting to go faster and it slipped out. Back in. God, he’s hard! Like a… is this where the word ‘horny’ comes from? she wondered, but not aloud. He slipped out again. It was the angle. It was like he figured he had to be on top, and face-to-face, that was the way it was supposed to be done, and his hard, hard cock was slipping out.
She held his elbows, and it stopped him. “Hey, let me. It’s my turn.” With force, she started the turn-over, and he got the idea, and helped with the transition. Shortly, he was on his back and she straddled his waist. She found him beneath her and guided him inside. She sat back and made sure he was inside. All the way. “Oh!” She didn’t mean to let that out, it just happened. It felt that good!
Was it loud? Was anyone else up? Karin? His dad? Did Peter ever come back? It was after midnight, according to Alex’s glow-in-the-dark alarm clock, and a long day, so the others should be settled, but you never knew. But if she thought about it, she hadn’t heard any creaking outside the bedroom door or on the ceiling since they’d woken back up.
The first time they’d fuc— made love, she’d been on top. But that was how it happened, sliding on top of him, getting herself off, when she’d caught his cock in her opening, and then making it happen, little by little, pushing him inside her. Now, she realized, she could control the speed and the depth like this, perhaps the angle…. Yes, the angle, too.
Until Alex took control back, grabbed her butt, and started slamming into her from below! Oh, god, that was good, too! But he let her take it back. When she bent over to kiss him, he popped out, again, but he fixed himself quickly. She smiled as he did — he didn’t want to not be inside of her! She rose back up, vertical, hyper aware of him inside of her, his hands on her hips or feeling what tits she would have, one day. She found the bounce, but that was making the bed make too much noise. Then rocking. Oh, yes! That was the way…. She moved like this, he went back, almost out; she went like that, and he was back in, all the way…. When she applied pressure forward… her clit… Oh, yeah!
His hands were all over her as she pumped him. He moved his knees up, she could tell he wanted control, again. She’d let him. She leaned forward, and oh, she let him pound her! She found a way she could rub her clit on him while he did and… Oh! That was it. She grabbed him around his neck and pulled him tight. She wanted to scream, but knew where she was. She found his pillow and sunk her head into it, her chin at his shoulder, and just let it out into the foam and feathers as her knees gave out, her pelvis shook, and the sun radiated from her center.
It got very, very wet down below as Tess came all over Alex’s cock. Knowing that she was cumming was going to make him cum. Her juices and trembling made him lose any sense of rhythm he had, that either of them had. Alex immediately gripped her, arms around her back, as he came inside her again, shooting inside her again.
He called her name. “Tess!”
She got to collapse on top of him, this time, kissing his face and making him smile, though eventually she straightened out and lay next to him. But during that time, it wasn’t lost on her that the first thing he’d said in days had been her name.
But something was embarrassing. All this stuff was leaking out of her. Wasn’t it just supposed to go somewhere in her body? Even though she hadn’t started her period and couldn’t get pregnant, yet, she knew cum was supposed to go up into her. I guess when there’s this much of it, though, it’s got to go somewhere…
She didn’t want to try sneaking out of the room to the washroom to clean up and get caught, just in case. And luckily, she didn’t need to pee, or at least didn’t feel like she needed to. There was always the cum shirt. “Hey,” she whispered, but in her tomboy voice, “find me your cum shirt.”
Alex thought for a second and nodded. She’d been using whatever shirt he’d been wearing to clean her body up after they’d been fooling around the last few weeks. Hence, a cum shirt. He looked around the floor, but remembered his room was clean. He’d put his undershirt in the hamper. That would have to do. He got out of bed and found it. She put it to good use.
The bed was wet, and he had no towel to put down, and there was still a whole night to sleep through. He dabbed the spot with his shirt, then went to his closet for his spare pillow case — no cartoon picture, just plain blue — and set that in place. He climbed back into bed.
They found a comfortable embrace. He combed her short brown hair away from her face. He was about to kiss her when she said, “I love you.”
He stopped. She’d said it before. He’d said it before. Did it feel wrong, now, for some reason? They’d just had sex twice, and he did love her, but he was still feeling off, still feeling shaky inside. Everything was not right, yet. Should he be feeling this good? Wasn’t he supposed to be sad and withdrawn since…?
“Don’t tell me you love me today,” he asked of her. “Just tell me you’re still my best friend.”
She was a little taken aback, but not offended. “You are my best friend.” She kissed him, looking him in the eyes. “But fuck you, I love you.”
He laughed. For the first time in days. And he held her tight.
* * *
They fell back asleep, but neither was used to sleeping with someone else, and each awoke now and again. With Alex’s hard cock continuously poking Tess in the rear, somewhere around 3:00am, she lifted her leg back over him, tried to see if she could spear him inside her, maybe comfortably rock a little without changing positions, something that would feel good, and that’s when she found that he was also awake. Their “Round 3” lasted much longer than either of their previous, just that slow, gentle rocking, filling her, never completely coming out, gently massaging her button and feeling “how she was,” holding her, kissing her neck, being close for who knew how long. She wasn’t sure if he actually came in her before he had fallen asleep again, but she knew she had, if from nothing else than being held like that.
* * *
They were both awake and very aware of the house in the morning. They hadn’t thought this far through about being discovered or Tess’s escape, but they hadn’t heard anyone else moving in the house, yet, or at least in the kitchen. But the clock said it was only after 6:30am, and it was a Sunday. No one should be up for a long while.
Alex was very interested in the naked girl in his bed.
“Doesn’t that thing ever go down?” she asked about his cock. “I know I saw it soft once…”
“Sorry, this is every morning,” he pleasantly assured her. “I really need to fu-“
“Make love to me,” she corrected.
“Yeah…” He moved to get on top of her when she stopped him, again.
“Don’t… don’t be on top of me. You’ll squish me and I’ll pee all over your bed. I’m not kidding,” she chided him.
“So, no?”
“Oh, I want to. Just don’t be on top of me.”
Alex sat on his knees inside her legs, getting as tight in as he could, both of them figuring out how to fold her legs over his, and he was soon inside her, sitting up, holding her hips, finding a rhythm as they had morning sex.
“Take it easy, I’m a little sore,” she advised quietly.
“Am I hurting you?” He stopped all motion.
“No,” she assured him, “I love your cock, this feels so good, just take it easy.”
He got the idea, loving the sight of watching his cock slide in and out of her. Slow in, slow out. Each time he pulled back, the flare on his cock head pulled along her ridges, dragging more of her wetness out with it. It occurred to him the flare was like a barb on a fish hook — easy to pierce, tough to remove. This is so cool! In this position, he could roll his hips, like fucking her from below. It was like she was dancing… Her eyes were staring past him, through him. He could tell from his ‘feel how I am’ lessons that he was getting to her. He wanted to play with her clit, but she’d warned him not to put any pressure on her abdomen, and he sure didn’t want the consequence.
He wanted a little more room and lifted her leg, his arm under her knee, and found he could get a little deeper, still. A little faster, and she started to whimper as she got very wet. But, yeah, now that he’d gotten a taste for it, he really needed to fuck, and he let the pace get the better of him, slamming into her pussy as he pushed himself over the edge.
And Tess allowed it, hanging onto Alex, pulling him into her. She could feel his cock swelling, it felt like his head got bigger, she recognized his breathing pattern already, and she knew he was going to cum in her. His body started rocking a little more violently and she let go of his rear, moving to his ribs to hold him up and away from her, bracing him above, feeling he was going to come crashing down on her body if she didn’t — and she meant it about peeing if he squished her. Eyes clenched shut, he flailed above her, unable to collapse down onto her, as he exploded inside her.
She continued to prop him up with her leg and arms until he could open his eyes, and she helped him settle beside her.
He was out, again, catching the bits of sleep he missed at midnight and three. Tess moved him into big spoon position to hold her, again, and he was just conscious enough to do so. The spare pillow case had gathered uncomfortably and needed to be adjusted, but she just removed it altogether. She pulled up the covers to their waist, and folded her hands about his arms.
She would catch up on sleep, later. She loved the morning. She loved this morning. The window was open, the sheer panels of his blue curtains billowing but not flying, the breeze cool enough to enjoy with the blanket. The sunshine wasn’t coming in directly due to the closeness of the homes here in Colton, but the light was… peaceful. There were actual birds making their calls before any noise of the city took over in an hour or so.
She could imagine herself in a TV commercial like this, but with a big four-poster bed and wearing some white, frilly, gauzy, ankle-length nightgown. She didn’t have that, just this boy’s room with Cubs and Star Wars posters, the one Cheryl Ladd poster his mom used to pretend not to see, some toys and books, a bed, and a desk. And her boyfriend. She had Alex.
She’d never spent the night with a boy, not even a group sleepover, and wondered if she would ever repeat it — with Alex or some future boyfriend in her teen years. She couldn’t think of what boy it could be other than him, but she knew there was a long time ahead of her to think about. Her own mother and father were talking about moving. No set plans, yet, but it was for work, she knew. Strange cities had been mentioned. If she wound up leaving, she’d have to enjoy her boyfriend while she could.
She looked over her shoulder at him. His golden hair, his darker eyebrows, the mouth she knew that hid the smile she loved. The welt across his face. Fuckin’ brother. She’d gotten him to smile. He’d even laughed a bit. Losing your mother had to be tough — something she hoped she wouldn’t have to go through. It was going to take a while to bring him back to normal, whatever that might be.
But she’d be there with him.
The door opened. Karin stuck her head inside, starting a sentence she didn’t finish. She saw her little brother and his girlfriend naked in his bed. Tess met her eyes, didn’t panic, just gave a question back with them. Karin looked away and down, then back to Tess. She nodded, and closed the door.
Tess hadn’t even noticed it was now after eight o’clock. She carefully slipped from Alex’s bed and found her clothes. Her shifting of position made her realize how badly she really did have to pee, so she dressed quickly, but completely, no missing buttons, no untied shoes. She left the room and headed to the washroom, looking out for Alex’s father or brother.
When she returned, she went into the kitchen, where she found Karin getting prepared to make breakfast. “Good morning. Want to help?” Karin asked her. Tess did what she could to assist and not get in her way.
They figured the bacon and coffee smells would get the men coming in soon enough, but sat to eat the first items they’d made. “How is he doing?” Karin asked.
“Better. He’s speaking again.”
“Good.” Karin put down some eggs, considered something, and then had some coffee. “I told him he better not be a jerk and hurt you, but now I think I have to ask you the same thing. Just without the jerk part.”
“I won’t hurt him,” Tess said.
“I mean, don’t abandon him. He might not be a lot of fun, for a while. He’ll need his friends.”
“Don’t worry. I’m his friend first.”
Karin snickered and put down her mug. “That’s the same thing he said about you.”
Tess looked a little sheepish, but asked, “Do you have a boyfriend? To help you?”
Karin weighed her answer. “Not now. Just got rid of a bad one. I’m not ready yet.” She attempted to push a hair away from her eye, but her pony tail had taken care of those. “Maybe soon. Got a whole summer to go. We’ll see.” She started buttering some toast. “How about you? Are you… ready… for what boyfriends and girlfriends… do?”
They were speaking almost as equals, Tess understood. “Ready or not.” Her answer seemed a bit too clever, but she was talking to a girl, a teenager, not a judgmental parent. “He’s nice to me. It’s nice.” She met Karin’s eyes. “It’s really nice. And we’re… I’m okay, still, you know what I mean?” Tess made eyes referring to her body.
Karin nodded. “Soon, though,” she said.
“I know.” Tess jellied her own toast. “But he’s the best. He’s the best one out of all of them.”
“Yes. He is.”
Alex’s father made his entrance into the kitchen, dressed for an easy Sunday: still formal in shirtsleeves, but his collar was open. He put his hand on Karin’s shoulder. “Thank you,” he said to her, “for everything this week.” Karin put her hand on her father’s and nodded.
“And good morning to you, Tessie. When did you get here?” he asked.
“Just a little bit ago,” she answered brightly. “Stopped by to see if our boy wanted to go for a walk or a ride or something.” Karin smiled and nodded at her.
The sound of his father’s voice woke Alex with a start. His father was up! Where was Tess? They’d found her in the kitchen? Dang — he was still naked! And his door was open! He threw back the covers, jumped out of bed, knocked over an X-Wing, and put on a half-sleeve baseball t-shirt, some briefs, and a pair of shorts. He was making too much noise — they knew he was up. There were more voices. What was going on? He figured he’d better get out there and take it — whatever his dad and Karin were going to throw at him — and defend Tess.
Alex came to his bedroom doorway and rounded the corner into the kitchen, barefoot, his golden mop a mess, bedhead on his right side, dark circles under his eyes, wary of what he was walking in to.
At his kitchen table was Karin, his father, Suzie, Joey,… and Tess.
“You’re late. Your breakfast is getting all cold and eaten,” Suzie kidded him.
He connected eyes with Tess where she sat, open chair next to her, and smiled.
The End
Copyright 2025 – Tommy Linarcos
All rights reserved
Alex and Tess 2 – Pool Disguise
by
Tommy Linarcos
Alex waited for Tess and Suzie to come out of the girls’ locker room at Milner Pool. He and Joey always changed quickly, easily. The girls took their time. Always. For twelve-year-old boys, there wasn’t much to do. Take off your suit, wring it out, dry off, get dressed, done. For twelve-year-old girls… Alex had no idea what the big difference was. He certainly knew the difference between boys and girls, and had first-hand experience with that from fooling around with Tess, but didn’t bother trying to figure out what extra stuff the girls had to do to change from a swim suit to street clothes — and even that was just sneakers, shorts, dry undies, and a t-shirt.
Birthdays had passed, school was over, summer had begun, and the pools were open. Alex’s coffee burn wasn’t completely healed, yet: the burn patch on his right thigh was still pink and no hair would ever grow on that part of his leg again, but he no longer had to wear the bandage. He was afraid the wound would prevent him from the first couple of weeks of swimming, but it had healed enough that such didn’t happen. Truth be told, he probably would have just taken the bandage off, anyway, to go in the pool, no matter what. When the sun hit it directly, it did sting, like a healing sunburn, and he knew he had to go underwater or get out of the sun. His brother actually took him to Sportmart with him to get some new trunks for the season, and he was able to get a nice blue pair that hung low and covered most of the scar.
Day Swim had ended, Adult Swim had begun, and every kid got kicked out of the pool. That was the daily schedule, until Night Swim, later. Timing was right — ‘Go get home for supper, kids, let the adults have some time without you playing Corner Tag and Marco Polo!’ Walking home with their towel rolls, when they reached their street, Tess stayed with them, instead of turning left to her block, so Joey got home first, this time.
Suzie took notice. “We doing anything, today?”
“You want to?” Alex asked her. Tess looked to her, too, but not with an inviting look.
“After supper, maybe, but I’ve got to go in.” They’d reached Alex’s house. “Besides, you two want some alone time, dontchya?” She smiled at them and bounce-ran to her own house a few doors away. She was inside before either of them could say anything except to each other.
“She knows,” they said simultaneously.
Tess crumpled her eyebrow in thought. “But she probably doesn’t know what we do in our alone time…!”
Alex looked to his door. “Let’s find out who’s home at my house, then!”
Turned out, only his sister Karin was at home, and she was on the phone in her room.
Alex’s mother was pretty much in the hospital all the time, now. His dad was either at work, stopping home quickly and checking-in, or with his mother at the hospital. His brother Peter was “in-charge” at home during these times, but he was rarely at home, leaving Karin to look after Alex. Both of them had their social lives, too, so they’d schedule whether there would be a dinner that day or if everyone just had to fend for themselves. Consequently, when he and Karin went shopping, they bought a lot of fresh fruit, pot pies, frozen pizzas, canned soups, SpaghettiOs, mac and cheese, and sandwich makings.
Alex had turned twelve in May. It was an odd time. He had a girlfriend who he was having sex with on a regular basis, but he loved the Star Wars Death Star playset he got for his birthday and played with on a regular basis, too. Both he and his girl loved making the other cum, but also riding their bikes on the dirt trails in the forest. He hadn’t fucked his girl, yet, but he also hadn’t hit a home run for his Little League team this year, yet, either.
He and Tess never kissed in front of anyone, they didn’t hold hands, or make goo-goo eyes at odd moments. When they were with their friends, that was the time for having fun with friends, being a part of the group. Tess could do girl things with Suzie, Alex could do boy things with Joey, and they could all play together. Joey was a couple years younger, but that didn’t even make a difference, at least this year.
The Alex-Tess sex thing never came up until they were alone. Even so, it was still just something to do if they were able. It was one of their favorite things to do, but they knew there wasn’t always a good time or place to do it. And sometimes there were better things, like swimming or riding bikes or getting a game of softball going in the lot. Or playing Clue by candlelight with the others when there was a blackout from a big thunderstorm, like last week.
“You were looking at Suzie today,” Tess accused Alex, while she gave him a hand job in the middle of his bed, sitting on her knees next to his stretched out naked body.
“I look at Suzie every day,” he told the naked girl on his bed.
“I mean you were looking at her in her swimming suit, like you want to see her without her swim suit.”
“I…” Alex faltered. He’d been near getting to that exciting point in the hand job, but Tess threw the curve ball at him. “I won’t lie. I would like to see Suzie naked…”
Tess thought she had him by asking him during the hand job, but he actually thought about his answer. And he was honest about it.
“I don’t think she’d do it,” Tess thought aloud. She did a lot of her thinking out loud. “Not that she’s a ‘good’ girl, but I don’t think she would. She’d be too afraid of getting pregnant.”
“You trying to get me to not ask her if she wants to play?” Alex smiled. It would be fun to get Suzie to join, but he wasn’t going to push it, wasn’t going to give up what he had.
“I told you before, when we do this, this is just for us. If you want to see other naked girls, you guys got magazines in Joey’s garage.”
“That’s not the same,” he said, stroking her neck down to her nipple.
She looked at the wall across from his bed. “And you’ve got Cheryl Ladd.” He had the red Cheryl Ladd poster up next to his Chicago Cubs. His brother had Farrah Fawcett, of course, but his mother had only let him have Cheryl because she didn’t show nips like Farrah did. “You jerk off to Cheryl a lot?” Tess asked, continuing her smooth stroke on him.
Alex, eyes closed, smiled and admitted, “Sometimes….”
“What about other times?”
“I think of you and Suzie, things that could actually happen…”
“Me and Suzie…?” Tess got a devilish thought. She leaned down to his ear. “I’ve touched Suzie’s pussy, you know, and she’s touched mine. At a sleepover…”
Alex drew in a sharp breath, his muscles tightening all along his body. Tess kept him hard. She learned in the last few weeks not to just pump him as hard as she could, not to strangle his cock like it owed her money. She kept a loose grip that teased his skin as her hand rose and fell, playing with the line of skin from his head to his circumcision scar.
She looked down at the dick in her hand. She figured Alex was about five inches long. She had a Snoopy 3×5 notebook at home, and she compared it to her hand, then put her hand to his cock today, and that was about right. A lot of soft, brown hair — blonde but dark like his eyebrows.
Alex started pumping his hips with her, trying to dictate a rhythm, add some activity instead of just being passive. Tess got the idea and paid attention. He gripped her ankle, letting her know his intensity. She was on her knees to his right, so he couldn’t play with her pussy. Right now, this was all about him, but it would be her turn soon enough.
She stroked his chest with her left hand, tweaking his nipple, following the ridge of his developing pec muscles. She loved that she could do that, now. That she could touch him like this. She leaned in closer.
“I want to fuck you,” she said to him quietly.
He started shaking, his hips got erratic, his left foot twitching, his head thrown back into the pillow.
“I want you to fuck me, Alex.”
Then he lost it. One shot of pearly cum shot out an inch, announcing his orgasm, then the second shot had the height — a genuine foot above him — she had to pull her head back to avoid getting hit. This is what she wanted to see! “Oh, yeah! Fuckin’ cum for me, Alex!” She kept pumping as that was her job, letting the next five shots fountain up all over his belly and her hand. She didn’t let go of him, but she’d learned to ease off, just go slower, down to neutral, friendly.
His eyes were closed. He wouldn’t see her. Quickly, with her left, she took a fingerful of his cum off of her right hand, and brought it to her mouth. It smelled the same, but she’d wanted to taste it. She hesitated, though; she didn’t want him to see. Before she could think more, she put her finger in her mouth and licked it off. It was different, kind of plain, like wafer, but it did have a taste, a little tangy, actually. She’d heard it was supposed to be salty. Did everyone taste different? She thought on it. Blood would probably taste the same from everybody, that sticky metallic taste. Spit… did it even have a taste? When she kissed Alex, he had a taste, but she didn’t think it was his spit. This stuff in her mouth now was very personal, so probably? What would…? He wasn’t allowed to drink a lot of soda. The Coke in the fridge was his brother’s ‘private stock,’ even though they stole one from him last week. Alex mostly drank orange juice his sister made from the frozen things, and Hi-C. And Gatorade and water when he played baseball.
Alex’s eyes were open. He was smiling. “That was a good one!”
“Looked like it!” she smiled back. “I love to watch that, when you explode!”
“When you told me to fuck you… that got me!”
“I do want to try it. I want to know what it feels like,” she told him, whispering, like it was a secret.
“Me, too, but I’m still nervous about that,” he admitted.
She removed her hand from his cock, making a comic ‘yuck!’ sound, and found his shirt on the floor to wipe up with. She wiped him off, too, looking for every little bit and where it landed, then played with his dick just a little more. It was still hard, but bendable, now.
She liked seeing his cock head pop in and out of her fist. It was kind of funny. She thought about taking a Flair marker and drawing a smiley-face on the flat side of his dick head, and she would see it smile at her as it came in and out of her hand. When she first thought of that, she’d laughed so hard it ended their session. Alex thought she was laughing at him, again, and had pulled his pants up. She had to explain what she was laughing at; he got a laugh out of it, too, but forbade her from actually doing it. ‘Guys look at other guys’ cocks in the showers. I don’t want to have to explain it. Someone will tell the girls, and everyone will be pointing at me the rest of the week,’ he’d told her.
But now, while still playing with him, she asked, “You look at guys’ dicks?”
That caught him weird, but he figured there was something more to that, not accusing him of anything. “Not really, but everyone does. You check each other out, make sure you’re normal. It’s no big deal,” he shrugged.
“Yeah, girls, too,” Tess agreed. She had seen others pass her in development this year, still flat-chested and without pubes, but she wasn’t alone.
“But in 5th Grade, me and two other guys were the only ones to have hair on our dicks, so everyone was checking us out. I knew every guy there was looking at my dick when I headed into the showers,” Alex shook his head.
“Which two?” Tess asked with genuine girl curiosity.
“Scott and Phil,” Alex answered matter-of-factly.
“You know, I don’t get to see any other naked guys. And there’s not any magazines with naked guys in them.” She thought there probably were magazines like that, but she’d never seen any, and there weren’t any stacks of naked guy magazines in any of their garages.
“You got Stallone up on your wall,” Alex pointed out. “And that singer. Leif?”
“Not Leif. Andy Gibb. I don’t like Leif.”
“There’s plenty of boys… at the pool,” Alex noted, relaxing, getting into the game, enjoying Tess’s attention. “Guys don’t wear much, and you can see their dicks just like the girls’ tits in their bikinis.”
“Can’t actually see ‘em, but you know they’re there,” she agreed. “It’s not just boys’ dicks, it’s the whole package — their arms, their shape, their whole bods. Always hidden at school, but at the pool, it’s all on display.”
“That’s why you like me, you dirty girl,” Alex teased.
Her eyes roamed, looking at her boyfriend until she landed on his smile.
“I lov- I do like to watch you take off your shirt,” she hummed. “Just something about it.”
He put his hand to her cheek.
She took a deep breath and corrected herself. “Now if only I could sneak into your locker room…” she started dreaming.
“You did, once,” he reminded her. “At the pool?”
“That was last year, just at the exit out to the pool. Suzie and I peeked into the guys’ shower right there. We saw that one lifeguard naked. His dick was huge and hairy and ugly!” she recalled, chuckling.
“That guy with the mustache, you said. He was old, like eighteen or twenty.” Alex thought about something, gazing at her chest. “You still don’t have any tits, yet,” he told his flat-chested friend.
“I know. Thanks for pointing that out.” She threw the shirt at his face. She figured it was her turn, next. How did she want it? They’d tried oral sex once, though neither of them was very good at it, yet. Still, it was fun learning.
“And sometimes, people who don’t know you think you’re a boy.” She had short brown hair, was fairly thin, no girl curves, yet. Dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, never a skirt.
“Yeah…?”
“If you really wanted to…. What if… you snuck into the boys’ locker room, pretending to be a boy?”
The wheels started turning in her head.
She began moving, slowly, carefully, but unconsciously. Her eyes saw the Cubs and Cheryl and Star Wars posters around his room, his baseball bat with his mitt hooked over the top, but she didn’t see them. She climbed on top of him backwards, sitting on his waist, and lay down, her back on his chest, her head off his left shoulder, carefully finding the spot for her legs next to each of his, his mostly-soft-for-now cock in the space beyond her pussy — but she barely knew she’d found her position. She was coming up with a plan.
He wrapped his left arm around her chest, held her in place, caressed what would be her breasts one day, pinched her nipples, kissed the back of her shoulder and what neck he could reach. “Everyone sees the tomboy. Only I know how much of a girl you really are…” His right hand found her pussy, and began the soft stroking, tight little circles, and frequent dips inside her like she’d taught him to do. He was speaking softly to her, mostly ‘there you are’ and ‘you’re so wet’ and little things like that. She heard him, and responded to his touch, but there were two things going on in her brain: Alex’s fingers and the Plan.
I could go to the pool topless, and no one would know… But not Milner Pool, ‘cause everyone would know me there… No… Go to Hayden Pool on the other side of town… Nobody from our school lives there… Or Clarke Pool… No… Hayden Pool. I could go with Alex… in the boys’ locker room… he’d protect me. I could wear his suit… One of his suits… Maybe the green one… Swimming without a top would be so… and then later… when they kick us out… either at the end of Day Swim… or… at night… at the end of Night Swim… in the locker room… all the boys would be changing… oh my god… all the boys would be naked… and I’d be there…
From her ideas and from Alex’s fingering, she began to whimper. She shut off her planning and focused on Alex, what he was doing to her. His left hand had left her chest and was working her clit at the same time as…
“If I fuck you, I might be too big for your little pussy. This pretty little pussy. Maybe… maybe you need two fingers in here, to be sure…” he whispered, as he inserted a second finger and swirled them in the ridges and hills inside her.
She bucked and squirmed. She’d found a comfortable spot in locking her arms backwards and underneath him, her hands under his butt, so she was exposed to the ceiling and couldn’t escape, by her own design, straining against her own trap. “Oh, Alex… Alex… Are you really gonna fuck me? You’re gonna fuck me, right?” She knew his cock was rock solid now; she could feel it against her leg. It was close to her pussy. Was it close enough?
“Yeah, I’m gonna fuck you…” He tried pushing his cock toward her from underneath, but her squirming kept her at just enough distance for zero contact. He tried pulling, goading, her with his hands to scoot lower on him, but she was too far gone.
“Oh, god!….” she called in a strangled sound as the sun exploded inside her, her legs started shaking, and her juices flowed out like a brook over Alex’s hand. She bucked on top of him, and finally unlocked her arms from below to regain some balance, one hand clutching the bed, the other digging into Alex’s side. She didn’t have to tell him to slow down or stop as he’d had enough. He’d disengaged down below and slipped her off him to his left side, and quick-spun on top of her. She spread her legs and let him in.
Except Alex’s twelve-year-old cock never made it in to Tess’s twelve-year-old pussy. It was so wet and the target so elusive, without aid his cock slid right under her and he humped the bed for all he was worth, finishing seconds after starting, cum all over her asshole and the bed. Tess never even got a chance to tell him he hadn’t made it in, she was still floating in her orgasm.
After calming down and breathing, Alex looked up at her. “I don’t think I got it in.” He was embarrassed, but hoping to find some humor in it.
“No, you didn’t,” she smiled at him. She grabbed his face and pulled him up the last few inches and they made out in celebration of cumming. Then she released him, her face showing how happy he made her.
“Well, at least you’re not…” he didn’t finish, just took a deep breath and flipped over, sharing the space of the twin bed.
“You came all over my ass,” she told him. “You gonna wipe my ass?” she laughed.
“Um, no, I guess you can probably take care of that better!” He was still a shade of red, but glad they could laugh.
“Find me your shirt.”
“Oh, and I liked that shirt, too,” he said, reaching behind them to where the shirt had been shoved earlier.
“It’s your cum shirt, now.” She took the shirt from him, but did not get busy right away. “Hey, that was incredible, my orgasm. You really got me!”
“You’re welcome. Glad to return the favor.”
“And listen, I got an idea.” She turned toward him, absently holding his dick, again, so she had his attention. “When you said I could go to the pool disguised as a boy…”
For the next twenty minutes or so, she told him her idea, and he found the wobbly points of it and came up with ways to get around them and make it work.
She couldn’t use her own pool pass — it was pink and had a big F under ‘Sex.’ “I could just tell them they gave me the wrong pass because I went there with my sisters and they thought we were all girls,” she tried.
Alex tossed that down. “No, that’ll make them suspicious. We don’t want them to give you a second look. Just that you’re a boy and go on in.” They either had to go get her a new pass — a blue M pass — for $10, or find out how much a guest day pass cost. “Because you’ll be my friend from Wisconsin or something.”
She was fine to use his green suit from last year. After his growth spurt, it didn’t fit him too well anymore and should do fine with her slim hips. But she didn’t have a dick. They’d just been talking about how girls could see the size of a boy’s package, and…
“Can I stuff it with a sock?” she joked.
“Maybe,” Alex studied her. “You could wear my supporter from gym class, with the sock in it. That would work.”
“What if it falls out?” Her question made a lot of sense.
“I can stitch it in, or you can wear my old Speedo to hold it all together under the green suit.”
They got busy trying everything on, and it looked like it would work. She thought about just wearing the Speedo underneath with the sock in it, but if it fell out, then things might go south. All done, her suit wore a little bulky, but it worked. And it was dark green, so no see-through.
Alex put some clothes on and got his mother’s sewing kit, which she would never use again, he knew, and ran a stitch through the balled sock and the supporter enough times to keep it in place. It worked, but Tess figured she’d still do the complete get-up.
“What else? What else?” he asked, tapping his dresser. “What are we forgetting?”
“Just…,” she thought out loud, “find a locker at the end for a good view!”
Alex sighed a chuckle. He was going to help his girlfriend see a bunch of naked boys. “You better tell me which girls at school have pussy hair for all this…”
“Like MaryAnn Fabricio?” she kidded about a girl who already had very large breasts. “It’s like a forest! Thigh to thigh!”
Alex shook his head, conjuring the image, not quite sure if he wanted to know about that one.
“Next time we ride our bikes to Turtle Creek, I’ll tell you about ‘em all…” Tess promised.
Tess finished getting dressed and was about to head for home when there was a knock on Alex’s bedroom door. “Hey, you two done foolin’ around in there?” Alex’s sister Karin.
Tess looked guilty. “Uh-oh!” she giggled.
“Yeah, what’s up?”
With that permission, Karin opened the door, but was still surprised to find them together, holding each other at the elbows. Karin was a female version of Alex, three years older and even better looking. She briefly noted the condition of the room and the sewing kit out and… recognized something in the scent of the room, too, but didn’t say anything. “Hey, thinking about dinner. You hungry?”
“You know I am,” Alex answered. “You want to stay?” he asked Tess, but she declined as, if she left right now, she’d be in time for her own dinner and not in trouble with her mother. Karin left Alex’s door open to air out.
Alex walked Tess to the front door and tried to hide a kiss goodbye, but found he was unsuccessful. “Now Karin knows, too.”
Alex and Karin lit the oven and put extra toppings on their frozen pizza. While waiting, Karin noted, “Hmm. I always thought Suzie would be your first girlfriend.”
“I thought so, too. But, you know, Tess said ‘Hey, you’re my boyfriend, now,’ and… there you go,” Alex laughed.
Karin pretended outrage. “Why, that brazen hussy!” Before the pizza was ready, Karin turned to Alex, serious. She didn’t address the possible physical shenanigans behind a closed door, but warned, “Hey. If you’re gonna have a girlfriend… I know it’s hard for boys to not be obnoxious, but don’t be a jerk. Don’t hurt her, now. Tess may seem all tough on the outside, but inside… she’s a little fragile.”
“Don’t worry. She’s my friend, first.”
Alex and Tess didn’t get to put their pool plan into action for a little while. Alex’s mother was taking a turn for the worse, and she wasn’t going to be coming back home to rest before her next treatments. He, Karin, and even Peter wound up spending as much time as they could in the hospital as a family.
His mother looked so weak. She used to be so radiant — a true lady, younger than his father, graceful, so full of life. Karin wished she looked as beautiful as their mother. She could play in the yard with them all, too, even tag football on Thanksgiving, or volleyball on the beach. Reading at bedtime. She gave them trust and freedom to roam the neighborhood, yet somehow always knew where they were. She knew their friends, and their friends liked her, too. And she always, always, knew when they were lying, so they stopped trying. And now, with the cancer… It wasn’t her, anymore. That’s what Alex hated most about this. He didn’t understand what all the treatments were about, but he knew they had taken his mother away.
Things started improving on the third day, and Alex got some time alone with his mother. “So, Karin tells me you have a girlfriend, now.”
“Yeah, kind of,” Alex grumbled, caught out again, and reacting like a twelve-year-old would who didn’t want to admit anything.
“Suzie?” his mother smiled.
“Tess.”
“Really?” his mother croaked, surprised. “Okay.”
Alex just rolled his eyes and smiled. Why did everyone react that way?
“Well, make sure you treat her nice. I raised my boys to respect women. If there are… dark times or arguments, don’t you hurt her.”
“Mom,” Alex whined, “we’re not getting married. We’re just good friends, who… kiss a little.” He gave her his secret smile.
“Of course. And there will be others. You’ll find love… and heartbreak. But you’ll find the one. You might have to travel far to find her, or she might be next door, but look for the good, the specialness inside a girl, not just what’s on the surface. Make sure she’s your friend.”
“Mom?” Alex got worried. “Why are you telling me all this now?”
“Because you never know.” She sniffled. “If my boy is growing up, I want to make sure I’ve given you what advice I can. Life’s not all baseball and swimming.” She smoothed his blonde hair down. “Now, go away, I’m tired and need some rest. I’ve got procedures this week, and they look promising, so go out and have fun. I’ll be ready to see you again on Thursday.”
Alex nodded. He got to her room door, turned, and said, “Mom? I’m going to be okay.”
“I know you will. See you on Thursday.”
Alex still stood at the door. “I don’t want to say good-bye.”
His mother grimaced.
“I’ll just say good night, okay?” he suggested.
She tried to smile as best she could.
“Good night, Mama.” Alex turned and left the room.
Alex cried his eyes out that night. It wasn’t his first time crying since his mother had started the chemo or whatever it all was, but he wanted it to be the last time in his life. And in the morning, the sun still shone, and the world hadn’t come to an end.
“You want to do it today?” Tess asked. She’d invited herself over at 10:00am. She knew she was welcome and barely knocked on the door. The back door was always open and the screen door let in the breeze, and she found Alex making a bowl of Cap’n Crunch to eat while he watched The Price is Right. She found a bowl for herself, but took Karin’s box of Special K, instead.
It was a good day to go swimming. He didn’t have batting practice or a ball game, so it was a great day to sleep late and he was free the rest of the day. “You want to do it this afternoon? Day Swim, out by dinner? Or tonight? Night Swim, out at closing?” he put to her, pushing his cereal down into the milk.
Tess thought on it. “Which will be better? More boys? I mean, that’s the point.”
“There’s more little kids at Day Swim. Have to be over twelve to go to Night Swim, and everyone pretty much stays through to the end at nine o’clock,” Alex advised.
“So, right, older boys…” Tess knew.
“We have to go to the Park District place and get the pass, first, so we’ll see how much time is left for Day Swim, if you want,” Alex said.
“Why aren’t you eating your cereal?” Tess asked.
“Not soggy enough, yet.”
“But it’s Cap’n Crunch…?”
“Better when it’s soggy.”
“I’m gonna steal your crunchberries.” She plucked three crunchberries out of his bowl and added them to her Special K. “Hey. Do you like me?”
“What? Of course, I like you.” He wasn’t sure how that came out from stealing his crunchberries, though.
She spoke, but looked at the TV. “I mean, you know. We started messing around, but… and then we kissed. And the kissing seems like it’s… more personal than the… other stuff.” She looked to him. “So, do you like me?”
He had to think this one. “Really, I never thought I’d even get a girlfriend until I was in high school. I mean, you and Suzie are my best friends — there’s always been some others like Bobby and Danny and Joey, but you guys have always been there.”
“You like Suzie better? She’s prettier, with her long, red hair.”
“Suzie’s very pretty,” Alex did not deny. “But you and me, we do everything together. You’re my best friend. Who else would I like?” He knew it wasn’t the answer she was looking for. “I don’t really know about love and stuff. This is all kind of… new? And a little scary, I guess. But Tess,” he made sure she was looking at him instead of her cereal, “yeah, I like you. Like you, like you.”
Tess visibly let out her breath. “You probably knew I liked you all year.”
“No, that went over my head. Kind of surprised me on Coffee Pot Day,” he admitted.
“Boys…” she shook her head. “Over your head… Yeah, that’s why you play third base, now. Eat your damn cereal!”
Alex laughed and ate his damn cereal.
The Park District office didn’t have actual day passes for the pool, though they thought it was a good idea. The lady could sell them a Daily Pass at $3.00 plus 50¢ at the pool every day “Ted” went. Alex was hoping they would only have to spend a dollar, but between them they had the three dollars. The lady asked about residence, which is why you always brought a parent with, but Alex re-explained that “Ted” didn’t live in Colton — “he” was visiting, and which is why they hoped for a day pass. “He” was only here this weekend and Alex wanted his friend to join him in swimming. The confusion helped, and “Ted” got a blue Daily Pass with “his” photo on it, using Alex’s address from his blue Season pass, and the lady only took $1, after all.
They decided on Night Swim. After dinner, Tess came over to Alex’s to change into the “boy suit,” topped off by a pair of his gym shorts, and they rode their bikes to the other side of town to Hayden Pool. They were admitted with no questions asked, other than for the 50¢ copayment.
Alex led the way into the boys’ locker room. It was a standard locker room, looking identical to the girls’ locker room at Milner Pool, the only real difference being the urinals on the washroom wall and lack of girl stuff boxes. They’d missed the 6:30pm rush, so it was fairly empty, just a couple of boys and one old man finishing up and leaving for the pool. Alex chose two empty lockers like Tess had specified — at the end of the row so she could have a good view without turning her head left and right.
She watched Alex pull off his t-shirt and smiled to herself. She wanted to reach out and run her finger down his spine, but knew she had to keep playing “Ted.”
They put away their sneakers, towel rolls, and shorts, then it was time for Tess to take the next step. She pulled off her t-shirt with relative ease, but the moment was not lost on her: she was a girl and going topless. They set their combination locks and were on their way.
They sprayed down in the shower then stepped out the shielded door onto the pool deck — Tess’s next big moment: topless in public. No one gave her a second look. Some might have thought ‘who is here? someone I know?’ But none were pointing and saying, ‘Hey, there’s a flat-chested girl pretending to be a boy! Call the cops!’
She smiled at Alex, and they went swimming. With the low sunlight and not knowing anyone, it was just another evening at the pool.
Alex actually recognized several boys from the Little League as those kids came from all over town, but again there was no issue. They didn’t recognize Tess.
A while later, Tess pulled Alex aside to mention, “This sock is heavy. It’s soaked through. I can feel it weighing me down. I’m glad I have the Speedo on underneath.”
Alex advised, “You’re allowed to grab your ‘balls’ and give it a squeeze to let the water out. It’ll probably make you look more like a boy!”
Tess did, and they both had a good laugh at it.
She made two trips into the locker room. Once to use the washroom, definitely needing a closed stall with all her equipment, the other time to check out changing action when some cute boys were leaving early. She went to her locker and pretended to put something in her mouth, like it was time for her prescription meds.
When she came back, she found Alex in the water, hanging onto both gutters in the shallow corner. She dropped into the pool and saw an odd look on Alex’s face. “I know I just asked you about liking me,” she said in close proximity, “and here I am checking out boys.”
“But I know that’s why we’re here. It’s kind of fun, all this sneaking around. It’s the kind of thing we’d do! And only I know my girlfriend is half-naked in front of everybody!” he whispered back to her. “But it’s not like I can pretend to be a girl and do this the other way around.”
“I suppose you want me to let you see Suzie naked, now,” she sighed.
“Just tell me what she looks like.”
Tess considered. “Her tits aren’t that big, yet, you know that, but her nipples are really round, like big. They’re… really light pink. Lighter than her lips. She has a cute red fuzzball at the top of her pussy, same color as her hair, but it’s starting to come in thicker. You’ve seen her butt, her suit doesn’t hide it.”
“I will… think about that sometime when I’m alone!” Alex said and dunked himself under.
When he surfaced again, Tess got close. “I dare you to kiss me,” she said in his ear.
Alex backed off. “Are you crazy?”
“Chicken?” she teased.
“You’ll blow our cover,” he whispered back.
Tess did a quick breaststroke and made to plant a kiss on his cheek. Alex reacted and gave her a big shove, knocking her onto her back, and then she submerged.
A guy sitting on the edge, who looked about fifteen or sixteen, asked Alex, “That kid just try to kiss you?”
Alex realized his fear of getting caught, but was on his game. “Oh, he’s just kidding me about this girl I like.”
“Is he a fag?” the guy asked.
This was worse; Alex hadn’t thought about anything going this way. “No, he’s okay.” Alex almost followed that with ‘he’s just a little weird,’ but was glad he didn’t. Tess had resurfaced at that point and the distraction stopped him. He had to end the conversation with this guy, though, and he spoke loud enough for Tess to hear. “He just has to figure out that girls aren’t yucky, anymore, if he ever wants to get a girlfriend.”
Tess caught on and flipped Alex off.
Alex stroked away from the side, heading toward the ladder by the diving boards. When Tess caught up to him, he told her, “Watch that. They’ll try to get you.”
“What are they gonna do?” she challenged.
“Pants you in the locker room, probably,” he warned. “Then throw you into the showers or back out the exit onto the pool deck. Then… you know… they’ll figure you out.”
She gave him her worried eyes.
He held her arm under the water. “I won’t let that happen.”
Tess looked in his brown eyes and knew that he wouldn’t. He might start a fight even with the older boy, and wind up getting his lights knocked out, but he wouldn’t let anyone touch her. She nodded and took the warning, then watched Alex climb out of the water and perform a not-too-bad dive off the low board.
About a quarter to nine, people started disappearing, heading into the lockers to change and head out into the night. Tess knew this was the moment she’d been imagining. They made their way inside. Five of six shower heads were taken by boys warming up or rinsing off chlorine. Three still wore their suits, two were naked. Alex became a third naked boy, rolling his suit and squeezing it. Tess’s eyes belied that this was what she’d wanted to see. She realized then that it would be better if she knew who all the boys were, but they were still fun to look at.
Just before they got to their lockers, Alex advised, “Take your time. Dry down with the towel, or go change in the washroom and come back, otherwise, just dry your suit best you can. Dress slowly. Sit on the bench and work on a knot in your shoelace — something that takes time and makes sense.” She did that and must’ve dried her hair three times.
Their locker row was full. Had to be twenty to thirty boys there in stages of undress, each one naked at some point, except a couple who were staying in their suits like she was. Mostly teenagers and kids their age, a few adults. Some turned away showing her their butts, some pointed her way showing her their cocks, some in profile showing how far their cocks stuck out. Hairy, hairless, small, big, bigger, tiny. She didn’t want to stare, but how could she not?
There were two boys whose dicks looked like elephant trunks; Tess didn’t want to point them out to Alex, but she’d have to ask him about that, later. One boy had a boner, and his two friends teased him about it, but the boy just took it and laughed back. He actually hung his towel on it! The secret life of boys…
That one guy was not in their row of lockers, but Alex kept a watch to the side of the next row, just in case.
Alex had recognized the Turczyn brothers from their school were there, a couple of 8th Graders, twins, but they didn’t recognize him. They were 8th Graders — 6th and 7th Graders were beneath them. Tess knew who they were, and now she’d seen the Turczyn brothers naked.
She looked back at her Alex, standing naked next to her, drying slowly. He had a good amount of hair above his dick, but none on his balls. She glanced sideways at the row of boys, judging, again. Alex had more hair than a lot of the boys, but wasn’t hairy like some of the high schoolers. She decided she really liked Alex’s dick.
At some point, everyone got to be in a stage of ‘dress,’ and the locker room was emptying. Alex was dressed. He’d taken longer doing so than he’d ever done before. He’d put on his dry underwear and wrapped his suit in his towel, they rolled their towels, and were wasting time so Tess would get everything she came for. They picked up their passes at the cage, unlocked their bikes, and rode out of the fences away from the pool.
“That felt really cool!” Tess said when they finally were a good distance away on their bikes.
“You’re gonna get off on that for a long time, right?” Alex laughed at her.
“I mean,” she searched, “other than seeing all those naked guys, it was… Like girls aren’t allowed to take our shirts off in public, so… it was… like free…” Then she fell into making fun of the hippies that still roamed the neighborhood, “It was like freedom, man! Like ultimate freedom, man!”
“Like skinny-dipping,” he tried to equate.
“Yeah, but more than that. Skinny-dipping in the river, I’ve never done it with boys there. Not even with you.” She had to stop the bike and make her point. “This was in front of everybody and daring them to say anything.”
Alex skidded and turned in front of her. “But you were in disguise. Nobody knew you. There were those 8th Graders, but I don’t think they even noticed.” There was that one guy, but even though he thought she was gay, at least he thought the boy “Ted” was gay, not a girl. Alex tried to get them riding, again. “If there were nude beaches here, you could just be you. I know they got them in Europe, but I don’t think there’s any here.”
“It’d be nice. It’s been, like, three years since I went to the river with my sister and her girlfriends,” Tess noted.
“My dad says he’s going to get us a pool for the backyard,” Alex said, trying to look at Tess and navigate at the same time.
“He’s said that before…”
“But I think he feels guilty enough to actually do it, now. If he does, then we could swim naked right in my yard.”
“Then…” she swerved her bike closer to him, “you could invite Suzie over and see her naked, right?”
“I… suppose… that could happen,” Alex told the sky. “If she would do it.”
“Well, if she does, I’ll let you,” Tess conceded. “Especially after this whole thing, so…”
They continued to ride, getting a little anxious to get home. The whole event had made them both extremely horny.
When they got to Alex’s house, they dropped their bikes in the yard. They weren’t sure who would be home, and found Alex’s brother in the kitchen getting a bag of Doritos as they entered. He had a couple of friends over, so he told Alex, “Hey, you and your little girlfriend better stay out of here. Don’t bother us. Keep to yourselves and keep it quiet.” They happily retreated to Alex’s bedroom and closed the door. Tess popped back out and used the kitchen phone to call home and let her mom know she was back from Night Swim and would be at Alex’s for a while. Things were cool. While Tess turned on the radio, releasing Blondie’s “Heart of Glass,” Alex shoved a wedge under the door to make sure his brother didn’t bust in on them.
No sooner was the door shut again than their t-shirts were off and Tess was working on her shoes. “I have to get this gizmo off of me!”
“Should have changed in the washroom there,” Alex said, prying off his shoes. “And wrapped the whole thing in your towel. The bike ride would have been more comfortable.”
“I was still nervous I’d get found out, after that one guy,” she said, kicking down her loaned gym shorts. “Help me with this thing.” Alex played out his towel on the floor for the wet items. First, he pulled the old green swim suit off of her, then the Speedo, then the supporter with the wet sock stitched in. That one hit the towel with a splat. “Naked girl alert!” she teased.
“Don’t I know it…” Looking at her pussy never got old. He picked up her towel from where she dropped it on the bed and took to drying off her midsection for her. The supporter had left crease marks in her waist, like it used to do to him.
“My legs are what needs it,” she said, taking the towel from him, and rubbing her inner thighs, being rougher than he probably would have been, taking care of the itchiness and clamminess caused by the constant dampness of the suits as she rode home. When she figured she was done, she tossed the towel on the pile and fell back to the bed, her butt on the edge, her legs open, her pussy available. “I’m still wet, you know.”
“I can guess where.” He got to his knees and set himself in front of her.
“All those cocks today… But yours is the only one I want to see, now.” She started rubbing her pussy as he took the hint and stood up. He pulled off his shorts and underwear in one swift move. She took ahold of his half-hard cock. “It’s actually a little cold! Gotta warm him up.” She wrapped her lips around his cock head and sucked him in. Alex was a little over five inches when hard, and she found she could take the first two, maybe three.
They’d come a ways since their first time together a few weeks ago. A blow job was no longer a ‘suck my dick!’ insult. Tess was having fun trying to make it work, and Alex was never going to tell her she was doing it wrong. First off, he had no frame of reference and, as he’d learn later on, there is no such thing as a bad blow job. The only funny-negative he’d said that first time was ‘Need more practice,’ but she knew!
Alex could let her suck him for as long she would do it, but, “I want to try again. I want to see how wet you are.”
Tess pulled off of him with a pop. “I’ll let you…”
He dropped to his knees again and hesitatingly buried his face in her open pussy. He’d finally gotten the nerve to try licking her the same day she’d done it to him, but he feared he wasn’t as good as she was getting. He still tended to focus on her hole, stabbing into it with his tongue like he would his finger, like he might with his cock. He was better at reading her when he could see her face and hear her, and feel her breathing and her heartbeat when he used his fingers, but he hoped she wouldn’t stop him and tell him ‘You’re doing it wrong!’
“Come back up,” she moaned to him.
He stopped and pulled himself away, though he still stroked her labia. He wiped his mouth and moved up to kiss her.
“I meant to move up to my clit more, but since you’re here…” She kissed her boyfriend. She wrapped her arms around him and pulled him down onto her tight and kept kissing him. She could feel his cock on her pussy; he was pressing, but not rubbing. She decided to push their boundary. “Do you want to fuck?”
Alex pulled his head away with a smack from her lips. “That’s… that’s a big step, don’t you think?” He swallowed. “We haven’t… I mean… You could…”
“You were willing the other day…”
“And I didn’t do so good, did I?”
“We could just try it. I really want to feel what it’s like.”
“I don’t know. Maybe we shouldn’t.”
Tess rolled her eyes in frustration. “But you’re a boy. Aren’t you the one who’s supposed to want to fuck me? And I’m supposed to be all, ‘Oh, no, I can’t do that!’”
Alex felt slapped inside. “Don’t make fun of me.”
“I’m sorry,” she immediately told him, knowing what she’d said and how she’d said it. “I didn’t mean it like that. I just saw the funny in it and…” She tried to kiss him but he pulled back. “Alex. Alex, I really am sorry. I’d never make fun of you. Well, not here, anyway.”
She just didn’t get it, Alex told himself. He started to release her altogether.
“Alex. I’m sorry. I’m really sorry. I don’t know when to shut up, I guess.” She sat up to maintain eye contact now that he’d slumped back on his knees, again. “I think I’m just… after swimming and the locker room… I’m just so horny.” She looked him dead in the eye. “I’ve got an itch.”
Alex gave in and relaxed as he still wanted to do stuff. He just didn’t want her to make fun of him if he did it wrong. She only had as much experience as he did. And if they started fucking, that was just so dangerous. “You want to do the ‘thing’?”
Her eyes lit up. “Yeah!”
Before he got onto the bed, he shut off the ceiling light and turned on his reading lamp, but he put his shirt over it to dim that down, too. He adjusted the volume of the radio to blend with whatever noise they made, but not so loud his brother would come pounding on his door.
Alex moved onto the bed and lay down center. Tess straddled him, holding above him on her hands and knees, and centered herself so her pussy was on top of his rock-hard cock. She ran a hand through herself, opening up her flower, making sure her labia were wrapped along his shaft. She slunk down so she was laying on top of him, chest-to-chest.
She kissed him. He closed his eyes and kissed her back, running his fingers into her short brown hair which had dried kind of shaggy. They kissed again, and kept kissing.
She whispered in his ear, “This is actually my favorite part. When you kiss me. Any time you kiss me. I love… the closeness.”
“Yeah.”
She started sliding her pussy along his cock. Forward, first, until the tip of his cock was almost at her entrance, then back, slowly, until his tip poked her clitoral hood. She pressed and rubbed harder there until her clit was revealed, and still brought a hand down to fix it and make sure it was positioned right. “That’s it,” she hissed. Then she began a slow, languid back-and-forth, making sure she caught her clit on his head each time and slid further. “Oooh, yeah.”
Alex couldn’t hold her tightly as she was moving too much, rising up now, so he slid his hands down to her butt. He didn’t try to control the speed — that was up to her — but he liked her taking his hands along for the ride. There was a commercial for the StarBeat Dictaphone for a bunch of clubs that didn’t mean anything to them, yet, and then his song came on: Cheap Trick’s “I Want You to Want Me.” His hands began to tap the beat onto her rear as he started singing along quietly as if he were a guitar.
She lowered herself, again, chest-to-chest and made a request, “You have a good voice. Sing to me.” He was a little embarrassed for her noticing his singing, but proud at the same time. There was no way he’d tell her ‘no.’ He sang along with Robin Zander, but quietly, right in her ear, now caressing her back as she caressed his cock with her pussy lips.
“I want you to want me,” he sang.
“I want you,” she breathed.
“I need you to need me,” he sang.
“I need you,” she whispered.
“I’d love you to love me,” he continued.
“I love you,” she told him.
He stopped singing and just looked at her. That was a bigger step than maybe fucking. It was darkish in the room, but he could still see her plainly, her eyes looking into his eyes. Did she know she’d said it, or was she just scamming, saying the words back to him that he’d sang?
She didn’t stop rocking, that continued whether they spoke or not. He did pick the lyrics back up, singing again softly, and there was another “love” line in there, making them both think about what she’d said, again, and his lack of response.
When the song got to its bridge, she tried to match the intensity with a more frequent stroke. On several upstrokes, she’d caught the edge of her hole on his cock head, but had pulled further and slipped back into her rhythm. On this last one, she didn’t fix it; on her downstroke, she let his cock slip inside her. She’d captured his cock head and had started to fuck him.
He realized it. Should he fix it for them, or…? She’d found different positions during her rocking, but now she pushed herself further upright, not letting him go. She pushed herself further down onto him. There was no resistance, just the tightness. She’d mentioned she had played with a toy, and was quite rough with her sports, and he’d had his fingers deep inside her, so whatever either of them knew of a hymen really didn’t matter. It wasn’t there.
But something of Alex’s size hadn’t been inside her before. Nothing was going to stop her, though. She took a few measures of the song to get used to the stretching, and then lifted a little, and pushed him further in. She did this twice more, and then…
“You’re inside me,” she squeaked. “You’re all the way inside me. I can feel your hair on my clit… your balls on…” She rose and sunk down again. “Your whole cock inside my pussy…”
Alex couldn’t speak. His mouth was open, but he couldn’t say anything. It was incredible. Better than when she put it in her mouth. Damn, it was tight. She rose and slammed down on him. It was all the way in. He ran his hands up her flat chest, swirling about her nipples. He tried to look in her eyes, but she was nearly vertical on him, and her eyes were closed.
“You’re fucking me,” she moaned, louder than she thought.
He moved his hands around to her back and pulled her down to him. They were face-to-face again. “You’re fucking me…” he corrected. Then, with this angle, he pulled his cock from her and thrust back inside. That was good! He did it again. “Now I’m fucking you…”
Tess wasn’t going to let that stand. She rocked and met his thrusts. His rhythm was broken, and they took two thrusts to get it back. She started trembling and then she got very wet.
“Ohhhh… Fuck me,” she moaned in his ear.
And that did it. He was going to shoot. He could feel it churning in his balls, inside wherever, and it was going to blast out inside her pussy. “Oh… this is… the best… thing… ever!” He thrust into her once more, she was shaking, twice more, she was still shaking, and then…
He couldn’t do it. No. He had to pull out. Would he do it in time? He wrapped his arms tight around her ribs and screamed. He pulled his cock out just as Tess rocked back into him. He was out, but he shot his load all over her ass. Again.
They both rode out their orgasms as the song switched to David Naughton’s “Makin’ It.” If they were listening, they might have laughed, but they were too inside themselves. Tess did not roll off of him; he didn’t let go of her. When they relaxed and could breathe, she found his eyes. “Why did you stop? Why did you pull out of me?”
“I…” he began. They’d done it. They’d lost their virginities. Together. They had fucked. But he couldn’t actually cum in her. She had to know why. “I don’t want to get you pregnant.”
“You won’t get me pregnant,” she said simply.
“Yeah, I can cum,” he said, sure of himself. “If I cum in you, that’s sperm. I’ll get you pregnant.”
“I haven’t started my period, yet,” she said. Didn’t he know? “I can’t get pregnant until after my period.”
“So…” he was confused. “What if I came in you and you have your period tomorrow? Then you’ll be pregnant… because the stuff…” Wasn’t that right? “I have to steal some rubbers or something.”
“No.” She lifted above him, but stayed on him. “The way things look,” she indicated her flat chest, “I probably won’t start my period until Christmas.”
He tried to wrap his head around that. They showed them the “girl stuff” in sex ed back in 5th Grade, but it didn’t make a lot of sense to him about menstruation, he just knew what he had to know: sperm in a girl makes a baby. That was why he was so relieved he didn’t cum in her that last time, too.
“I’m not gonna get pregnant,” she assured him, “so we can fuck now.”
He exhaled, relief and embarrassment both playing on his face. “Okay.”
“But, next time.” She rolled off of him, carefully. “I should get home, now. It’s like 10:30.”
He helped her climb over him and they both stood up. “You want the cum shirt? Sorry…”
“Yeah, you came all over my ass, again…”
They both burst out laughing.
“I mean look at you: big and blonde and strong and cute… and I used to think smart… and you cum all over my ass… twice now!”
They laughed harder as he tried to wipe her clean with his shirt. He would have used her towel as that was available, but her mom would wind up washing that. Karin had taught him to do his own laundry. Tess took the shirt from him and finished the job.
They got dressed to Suzi Quatro’s “Stumblin’ In,” Alex finding a clean shirt, and Tess locating where she’d hidden her original shorts and panties. He reminded Tess to bring back her blue tank suit that she didn’t wear, too; she rolled it up in her damp towel, which might make it seem like it had been worn.
Alex arranged his room while Tess used the washroom, then all set, they headed back out. He was determined that, yes, he would walk her home.
They were heading to the back door when they found his brother and his friends in the kitchen, laughing about a beer they’d put in the freezer having burst and frozen. Just had to get past them…
As they neared the porch door, his brother teased, “Taking your little girlfriend home?”
Alex replied under his breath, “Shut up…” and then his head flew into the door archway. His cheek smacked right into the hard wood, and his ear caught on the edge.
“Don’t tell me to shut up, you little asshole. Get out of here.”
Alex pulled his face off the archway, knowing he had a welt, at least, and a bruise would soon follow, maybe a black eye. His cheek felt broken, if he could tell anything by it. But he could see, so his eye was okay. His ear felt wet, though. Tess was shocked by the action and was about to tell his brother off, but Alex stopped her, grabbed her arm. “Don’t,” was all he told her. It would just be worse if she got involved.
Outside, she offered him her towel for his ear, but he waved it off. He didn’t want to get blood on her mother’s towel. He picked up his own shirt at the shoulder and held it pressed to his ear as they went down the back stairs.
Tess tugged at his arm, leading him toward the front; she’d get her bike tomorrow. They walked the half-block to the cross street, and the two houses off the corner to her place, holding hands tightly the entire way. They didn’t say anything.
When they got to her porch, she put her hand to his face, caressed his cheek, but afraid to touch the welt. She looked distressed, sorrowful. After their fun day of adventure, and everything in his bedroom that night, this was how the day was ending.
He took her hand away and he kissed her, full and long. He didn’t care who saw. The neighbors, her mother, her sister. Anybody. Everybody.
When they broke, her eyes were still closed. He told her, “I do love you.”
He started down the stairs, and she floated through her door.
And that’s how the day ended.
The End
Copyright 2025 – Tommy Linarcos
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Story: Alex Hawk’s Guide to Sibling Seduction!
Comment by: Lucia
Glad to see the guide to sibling seduction again!!! I remember reading this on the internet years ago when i was young. I did successfully put it into action . Thanks!
Story: Andrew
Comment by:
Can you add the category "Masturbation"? (I'd also like the tag/category area moved to the top, not the bottom, of each story's page, but I think that's another story.)
Story: The Esses – Pictures
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! And you're welcome. Lubrican has a decent story site, but I cannot tell if he's got stories like this one. Storiesonline is also a great recourse to check. And Archive of our Own. But other than that, I don't know any similar sites.
Story: The Esses – Pictures
Comment by: Ernie Richardson
The Esses is beautiful, a great turnon as are the photos. Thank you. Can you direct me to other well written stories available on internet and with a similar theme to The Esses?
Story: Fascination
Comment by: John Moore
Wow! I really loved the story. Would love to meet a girl like Kelly, or younger.
Story: The Son Also Rises – Part five
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for this! I may have gone a bit overboard in my reaction, but I was genuinely annoyed by this comment. Yes, I might have brought this on myself when I started posting pics, but still... I've calmed down now 🙂
Story: The Son Also Rises – Part five
Comment by: E
Ignore those people! The stories you and the others write are far more entertaining. Keep it up please and thank you!
Story: The Son Also Rises – Part five
Comment by: Jason Crow
It's nothing personal, but I'm getting a bit fed-up with these requests. 'More young kids please!', 'More explicit pics please!', 'More naked kids, Jason!'. This is a freakin' story site, guys!! The pics are just icing on the cake and stuff I find online. And NO! I will NOT post more of this or more of that! The pics I post are more than (explicit) enough. And since you asked... I'm seriously thinking about pulling all of the pics from the site. Why can't you guys be satisfied with what you get? If you REALLY want to see more, head over to the dark web and knock yourself out over there. But don't come crying when the police knocks on your door. Sorry for the rant, but Jeez!!
Story: The Son Also Rises – Part five
Comment by: Sam Sosua
More teen photos please.
Story: Let’s Get Physical I
Comment by:
Love have Dr. Do that to me when I was young boy.
Story: My Brother Saves Halloween – Part 3
Comment by: Tommy Linarcos
Jessie, I won't say 'absolutely not' to a sequel -- obviously, I've thought about it. IF one happens, it would be a little down the road as I'm working on something else right now, which I hope you'll enjoy. Cheers, Tommy
Story: My Brother Saves Halloween – Part 3
Comment by: Jessie
Thank you for responding, Tommy. I came back to read the story again. It was that good. The reason why I would love a sequel is because there already is a lot of potential conflict. You are right that it will be very difficult for Katie and Henry to continue their relationship in Nebraska. There is a real chance they will be caught by their parents or friends. There could be a lot of problems if someone finds out about them. However, Katie and Henry are soulmates. They may try to date other people, but they won't find the happiness in those relationships that they can only find in each other. What if Henry has another girlfriend, but can't get hard unless he thinks of Katie? Can Katie make out with a boyfriend without her thoughts straying to Henry? How do they sit across from each other at the dinner table when all they can do is fantasize about stripping naked and having sex right there in the middle of the kitchen with their parents watching? Based on some of the dialogue in the story, I wouldn't be surprised if Katie would even have fantasies about having Henry's baby. How do Katie and Henry navigate these tensions? I think there is a lot to add to their story. Though, I understand if you disagree. In the mean time, I look forward to reading the Fiona-verse stories.
Story: My Brother Saves Halloween – Part 3
Comment by: Tommy Linarcos
Jessie, thank you for the praise! A sequel story for Katie and Henry? I don't know... I like those characters too much. I kind of hate to give them a new conflict. There's a lot of space out in Nebraska to make it in the corn fields... Their house is small, and we really don't want mom or dad to find out. Avoiding friends is a certainty, but it might be easy for a true friend to figure out (but not join in). There's always the possibility that Katie is knocked-up. Any sequel could always be on a holiday, like this one, if I wanted to keep a theme... Though, it could take place a year later as Henry goes to high school and both get attracted to other people - how they deal with those feelings of having a girlfriend/boyfriend while continuing with a sibling. Is it cheating? On whom? See what I mean? Right now they're happy, do I want to push a conflict on them? I'd have to figure out a resolution before I'd start that one. Anyway, you've got me thinkin'. As to the images: the story header is from free-source photography, as is the portrait of Katie, both with my backgrounds. The others are from my first attempts at AI and, where it gets risqué, AI plus bad Photoshop. I'm still learning how to manipulate things. Now I know the pain Jason has been going through trying to fix images with seven fingers and three legs...! (Oh, the horror of the images that didn't make it...!) Cheers, Tommy
Story: My Brother Saves Halloween – Part 3
Comment by: Jessie
This was a really good story, Tommy. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you add a fourth part where they pick things up when they get back home. Would like to see how the relationship evolves in that setting. Also, really good AI. I just couldn't figure out if the top image was also AI. Is it?
Story: New story – The Esses
Comment by: Jason Crow
Nope. Not going to happen.
Story: New story – The Esses
Comment by: Ilikumyoung
More Explicit please 🙏
Story: Alex Hawk’s Stuff
Comment by: Robin Maxwell Masters
I am soory i meant Minding the Children and i found it,
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part three
Comment by: Jason Crow
Glad you've enjoyed yourself. But I honestly don't know what the next story will be like. Can be anything.
Story: A Dream of Darkness – Chapter 6
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi, Levi!! You're right about Boarding School Blues... But the pacing is a lot different. Good to see you're back!!
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part three
Comment by: AntuanShotaLover
I am in a state of euphoria after reading this magnificent, hot and very horny story. Stories about predator women's and how these stories describe the process of seducing little boys is very exciting and arousing. I hope in the future you will write new stories about women seducing little boys shota. Thanks!
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part two
Comment by: AntuanShotaLover
I like story of main character Carol and how she developed a sexual attraction to little boys.
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part one
Comment by: AntuanShotaLover
Wow! This story is just so amazingly hot! Stories that center around young women's predators seducing little boys are exactly what I love the most.
Story: A Dream of Darkness – Chapter 6
Comment by: Levi Holland
Then I definitely implore Anonymous to NOT check out Boarding School Blues haha I think that one is like a 4 to 1 story vs 'action' chapters Also, hi. Stories soon!
Story: A Dream of Darkness – Chapter 6
Comment by: Jason Crow
I completely agree! Great story, but could've used more 'action'.
Story: A Dream of Darkness – Chapter 6
Comment by:
Good story but very low on sex.
Story: In the FLiN – First Iteration Ver. 1.0
Comment by: Jason Crow
That's why I've got the eye-candy section. I'm staying on the safe side with the pics I use in both stories and eye-candy. And that's what we all should do 😉
Story: Minding the Children – Chapter 1
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Victor, As I stated at the bottom of the final part, there isn't going to be a next part. The author who wrote the story isn't among us anymore due to the terrible disease called Cancer. So Dave isn't using his powers anymore either. Sorry. And yeah... the boys are cute 🙂
Story: In the FLiN – First Iteration Ver. 1.0
Comment by:
Are there more detailed ai pics that go with stories if that's legal
Story: Minding the Children – Chapter 1
Comment by: Victor
Nice story! Love the graphic you have at the very beginning of the story. Naked boys are so beautiful. Can't wait to see how Dave uses his new found powers on some boys!
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part Two
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks!
Story: Minding the Children – Chapter 1
Comment by:
Nice.
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part Two
Comment by: Shawn
I think you do just fine yourself Jason Crow, but I do agree that the artist is painting a beautiful picture with words!!!
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part three
Comment by: Jason Crow
Glad you like it! Not sure if there will be a follow-up, though. Something is brewing, but it's too early to say if I'll continue. I kind of like the story the way it is, and don't really feel the need to revisit it.
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part three
Comment by:
I second this comment.
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part one
Comment by: Joe
Thank you for such a great story! I just finished Part 1 and I am continuing to Part 2. LOVE the AI images! Your sctyle of writing is awesome. I feel as if I'm right there, watching it happen in front of me! Onward I go, heading into Part 2. Thank you again!!
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part three
Comment by: Arogers
Really like this storyline and see where you could go so many plot twist you could add…please keep this story going!
Story: Alex Hawk’s Stuff
Comment by: Jason Crow
I've never heard of that story. If you've got it, please send it to me and I'll put it on the site!
Story: Alex Hawk’s Stuff
Comment by:
i cannot find Looking After the Boys.
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part three
Comment by: Ryan C.
I urge you to continue this story with more chapters. I would love to read more about her seducing more 12 year old boys (and maybe even girls)! You have a great skill for writing about first time experiences and happy, consequence free fucking among preteen children. Reading this one made me so hard!
Story: Day Job Shenanigans – Part one
Comment by: STEVE UNDERWOOD
The first chapter is a hot one! I can't wait for the rest . It is very descriptive and erotic.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! And you're welcome.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: anon
Please keep writing. I feel the love and effort you put into your characters.
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 1
Comment by: Jason Crow
You made me blush, Tommy! Thank you for these kind words. And he's right, people! (Re)read those stories. I really liked how they turned out.
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
You're more than welcome, Joe! Glad you enjoyed yourself.
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 1
Comment by: Tommy Linarcos
If you’ve caught up with “Rumors,” “The Esses,” and “Date Night Discovery,” and are looking for a good read while waiting for Jason’s next story, I’d like you to consider (or re-read) “I Hate You.” True, the title doesn’t evoke “love,” and becomes ironic by the end, but it contains some of Jason’s best work. I’ve been a Jason Crow fan since “The Magnificent Zafar,” but his writing in “I Hate You” made me sit up and take notice that he was actually writing more than your standard erotica. He’s often said in his comments that he tries to improve on his writing, and the calibre of his prose in this one told me he’d hit the next level. You know Jason writes erotic stories about characters, not 2,000-word plot summaries. That’s why you’re here. With “I Hate You,” he took a standard body-swap/“Freaky Friday” plot and elevated it. Now, the story is still hot — I’m not saying he wrote Proust or Austin or Goethe. But his transformation sequences, when the brother and sister swap identities, are masterful. You know what I mean — the time in every body-swap movie when the screen gets all “wavy lines and twinkles” and we hear the faerie music (from Saint-Saënz’s Carnival of the Animals - “Aquarium”) and the actors’ faces swap sides of the screen. I was wary as a reader about how he’d handle such — and I was in awe. I’d always liked how he kept the erotic scenes in his writing personal to his characters and not fallen into purple prose or “part a fits into part b” narration. But in “I Hate You,” the transformation sequences are the erotic scenes, and the choices he made in the shifting of visuals, the flashes, noting frequency, electricity, referring to characters based on who is ‘inside’ a body — all without focusing on “here’s where the wavy lines come in” — really makes this story stand out. I love that he does not over-explain and allows his readers the intelligence to enjoy lines like “As Jake spread his legs, I could see how wet he already was. … I scooted over and extended my hand toward his pussy.” During the sequences when our heroes work on their “cure,” Jason’s management of the shifting focus between the two lovers and turning it into a single incredibly hot erotic sequence is … well, great authorship. It’s the type of thing us other authors wish we’d written. It’s snowing where I am, today, and this story would be a nice thing to read together with someone and get warm. Cheers, Jason Tommy
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: Joe S.
I really enjoyed this story. Thank you so much!!!!
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks Scott, I agree with you on the zero experience. But to be fair, in other stories that wasn't an issue. And yes, I did get around it, but with the least detail possible 🙂 I'll just stick with my 'it just didn't happen this time'. Thanks for the nice compliments! Appreciate it.
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: Scott W.
Oh, come on... kid's in 6th Grade with zero experience. Most real-life teenagers are too nervous to try that until their third girlfriend, even! Anyway, Jason did point out in the conclusion/epiloguey part: "Liam turned out to be an expert in eating me out, and I massively improved my blowjob skills. Chalk that up to the internet and non-stop practice!" ... so, he got around to it! Jason, you are in rare form! One of your best!
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
Good point! And you're right. It just didn't happen this time.
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: JonAnd
Can only agree with Steve and Peter. But I do have one small criticism: Why wasn't she orally satisfied? Thank you very much for everything, Jason
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks, Peter! And I already know what's next 🙂 I'm sure you'll also like that one. Stay tuned.
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Steve, Thanks for your kind words. Glad you've enjoyed yourself! I see what you mean about the pics. And yes, it is an X-rated story. And yes, I've registered my website as an adult site. But I still don't think it is a good idea to picture children in more daring poses, even when it is AI. The pictures are meant to be (thought) provoking, not jerk-off material. That's the reason why I'm keeping it on the tame/safe side. And I know not many of my readers will complain, but I still think it's unnecessary and unneeded to change it. That's how I see it at least.
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: Peter
This was a wonderful story. I'm sure to read it a number of times. Thank you so very much. I'm looking forward to what's next. ❤
Story: Rumors – Part 3
Comment by: STEVE UNDERWOOD
I waited until all three chapters came out and you pronounced it finished . As usual the writing was excellent . And the eroticism was so fantastically high . Very hot story . Very believable story . Loved how she gradually worked up her sexual education in such a short time . But especially loved the finale being with her brother . Loved the last AI pic of the two of them . Would have been a great frontal shot as they are both redheads . I have a weakness for redheads . This story is one of your best and I look forward to more . I am hoping too that you get a bit more adverturous in the AI poses . PG poses are cute , but this is after all an X rated story so a bit more wouldn't hurt and I seriously doubt any of your fans would complain . I know I won't !
Story: A Matter of Survival
Comment by: Rob
I read this over the course of the week. I guess we both have the same kink for stories. Very well written. Enjoyed it immensely.
Story: Rumors – Part 1
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Levi, The next part has just been released... Curious about your theories, though 😀
Story: Rumors – Part 1
Comment by: Levi Holland
Woooo! New story time! Definitely enjoyed the first chapter and cant wait to see where the others go! I have my theories... 😉 Levi
Story: AI images
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Tosh, I think those artists all have a system with a decent GPU in it. I.e., a gaming computer with loads of power. I don't have that, so I'm more or less bound to other ways. One of those is a VM. Buying a decent enough GPU sets me back about 700 - 800 bucks. I know this is a one-time investment, but a hefty one, if I might say... I've checked some of the artists, and most of them have a PC on which they render their images. And I don't have concerns about NSFW images on my site. Yes, I stay on the safe side and don't show forbidden flesh. I personally don't see the need for that either because it's the complete image that paints the picture (pun intended). I'm not that interested in seeing those bits in an image. I just want to see happy people enjoying themselves and admire the young form of their bodies. I would like to show more boobs because a bare-chested brother and sister smiling at the camera is both great to look at, and (maybe because I'm European) I don't see that many problems with boobs. But in the end, I'm running a story site here, and that's my primary focus. So, I'm not publishing anything that someone might consider over the line. They might disagree with my taste, but that's their problem, not mine.
Story: AI images
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Peter, Thanks for this constructive comment! The gift card idea is still something that's on the table here, but I cannot seem to find a suitable service that has a gift card option. I haven't stopped looking, but until I figure something out, dialing down the number of images is definitely an option! For my new story, all the images are ready, so there are more images on the way. And if I'm honest, I might went a little overboard there. So yeah... fewer images might solve the problem altogether.
Story: AI images
Comment by: Tosh01
Jason - you might want to ask the folks on site you pointed to long ago where Zoon's images were from. There are a lot of very prolific AI artists there. I don't think any of them would be paying $5 an image, so there must be free ways to create. If you have any concerns about NSFW images here on a more public site getting any trouble, you probably could also post your stories there with any NSFW images. It's all PWP there. I would expect your stories would be welcome there, as Caliboy's are.
Story: AI images
Comment by: Peter
Love your stories and the images definitely enhance them. I'm no good on technical stuff -sorry - Gift card idea is a good one but how it can operate again I've no idea. Importantly, do what you enjoy and if it costs too much reduce the pics to one a story??? Prefer the gift carding idea
Story: The Esses – Pictures
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Mortimer, I use my own VM for that. I do this now with Paperspace, but they're not cheap. Public websites have issues with terms like 'naked' or related to that. I now use the open source tools related to StableDiffusion. The interface with The Esses and Date Night Discovery was Automatic1111. But with my newest story, I use Fooocus. Way more intuitive.
Story: The Esses – Pictures
Comment by: Mortimer
Which AI website did you use to make them? Was it Artbreeder?
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part Four
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Thomas, Good to see my efforts regarding build-up and background building is being appreciated! As with almost all my stories, I'm not big on introducing lots of side characters into the action. I think it makes the story less believable and less interesting (maybe even more soap opera-ish) You're very welcome, and stay tuned for new work.
Story: The Esses – Part 4
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thank you for these kinds words, Jordan. You're welcome and I'm glad you enjoyed yourself!
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part Four
Comment by: Thomas
I love your stories. One of the reasons is the strong and lengthy build-up, that gives background and make me for the characters. As the story unfolded, I hoped that Thomas would make a guest appearance in their relationship. I sort of got the feeling that he was interested - or maybe I'm projecting because we share the same name. Anyway, thanks for the read - keep up the good work
Story: The Esses – Part 4
Comment by: Jordan Wicks
This is one of the best story i have read and i read alot! Just the way i love it, proper intruduction amazing build up and even better finish. Awesome! Thank you so much for this!
Story: The Esses – Pictures
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Scott, I put this up without making a fuss about it. I don't want to be know as 'that pictures site' for multiple reasons. First, I'm a writer, and I think it should be about the story. And second, pics attract a lot of folks. Both good and bad. And I mean 'bad' in many ways. I'm always careful to keep things on the good side with the images, but this is a thin line. So, that's why I announce a new story, but are quiet about the images.
Story: The Esses – Pictures
Comment by: Scott W.
Jason, how did I miss this blog entry? Seven extra pictures for "The Esses"??? Ones that show the process of creating them! The pictures are nice to have for such a great story! Nice job on both!
Story: Beach Bums – Part 2
Comment by: Jason Crow
I couldn't agree more!
Story: Beach Bums – Part 2
Comment by: Levi Holland
Just my two cents, for however little that's worth: I'd like to think that one of the best ways we can honor writers we care about like rwxxx13 is by reading their work and keeping it in our hearts. I dont think it makes you terrible, just someone who cares.
Story: Beach Bums – Part 2
Comment by:
I’m the worst for reading this, but why you gotta go and die?
Story: You and I Both
Comment by: Jason Crow
You're right! I've just modified the main page. If there's anything I missed, please let me know. Thanks for pointing it out.
Story: You and I Both
Comment by:
this story isnt on the Rwxxx13 main page - and a few others arent either
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part Four
Comment by:
I loved this. Especially the new characters in the movies popping in.
Story: The Esses – Part 4
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! Not too sure if more pictures will follow. But good to see they were appreciated!
Story: The Esses – Part 4
Comment by: JON
Even if there were only a few, the pictures made the story more vivid, more vivid (thanks to the creator). Another beautifully written story to get quite wet. 🙂 Many thanks
Story: Plea Bargain
Comment by: Pig Pen
Another great start that falls after leaving the gate, Oh well theater of the mind will have to continue it.
Story: The Esses – Part 4
Comment by: Jason Crow
You're more than welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. And let's not forget the added value of E-o-F and Tommy L here! They help me with errors (they're a lot of them in the first drafts) and with structuring the story. The story wouldn't be nearly as good as it turned out to be without their help. Honestly! So, I'll make sure to also give them the proper compliments 🙂
Story: The Esses – Part 4
Comment by: Danny S.
Jason, outstanding story! Your attention to detail makes this fantasy have enough reality to make it almost possible. From the pool, to losing his phone in the limo, to the night swim in the ocean, to the shower and sauna, to... to pancakes! I wish I had some magic formula of youth so I could ask out Sarah! Thank you again!
Story: Death of a Story
Comment by: Pig Pen
Great start, too bad it broke a leg coming out of the gate. Oh well, theatre of the mind will have to complete it.
Story: New story – The Esses
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Mike, Glad you enjoy the images. It's more difficult to create consistent images than I thought. But the tool I use, is Stable Diffusion with the Automatic1111 web interface. You do need a powerful GPU for this one, but Paperspace.com has some VM's you can use for a reasonably fair price. The learning curve is steep, but you'll get some half-decent results fairly quickly. Youtube is filled with tips and tricks on this open source software, all it takes is time. A lot of time...
Story: The Esses – Part 4
Comment by: STEVE UNDERWOOD
Slow build up as usual but a very hot story .
Story: New story – The Esses
Comment by: Mike
Jason, great job on the story and the AI images. I lost count of how many times I had to stop and clean up. Looking forward to more stories, and Ai images. Can you share what AI generator software you’re using. I’d like to try to creat some images myself. Looking forward to more stories. Thanks for keeping the blood flowing in this 70 year old.
Story: Boarding School Blues – Chapter 20
Comment by: Mike
Can’t wait for part 2 Levi, and any other stories along the way. You might want to ask Jason to help you with some art. His are really hot. Keep writing, at 70 stories like this help keep the blood pumping.
Story: The Esses – Part 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Stuart, Thanks for your comment. I'm the typical writer where everyone joins in. I hate the stories online where it starts out with a boy and his sister. In the next chapter the father joins them, and before you know it, their mother starts peeing on them, and their grandmother brings the dog. Nope. I try to focus on just a few key-characters. And I hate to say it, but The Esses is just' a four-part story. The parts are bigger than usual, but still only four parts. I'll release the last part in a few days. I'm still finalizing the the post and other stuff that comes with it.
Story: The Esses – Part 3
Comment by: Stuart
Throughly enjoying this new read … it’s well structured ( at one point earlier in the story I thought the limo driver was going to join in ! ) , those girls will be causing him more trouble very soon I’m sure ! . Hoping for plenty more chapters “ as and when “ Virtual Hugs . Stuart ( UK )
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Jon, Thanks so much for those kind words! I agree that the story has its flaws, and Tosh01 pointed them out nicely. And I love the feedback I get on this one. It means the story touched people and made them feel invested. Thanks for taking the time and effort to comment! This is greatly appreciated! And the word 'Bisque' doesn't mean anything. It's just an expression. Much like 'awesome!' or 'damn it!' It's a word Alex used in his story 'In the FLiN' and I wanted to pay tribute to that story by using this word. It's just an non-existing word that people might use in the future. Thanks again for reaching out! And stay tuned for more stories.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jon
Hello Jason, WOW! A fabulous story. And even more fabulously written. Everything you could want from a good movie - er, story, was there. I was very happy about the epilogue, that it wasn't missing and detailed, like the story itself, it shows me that the author was really interested in the story ... Well, you can actually tell that from the story itself. 🙂 Anyway, I think a story is only worth half as much without an epilogue, because a story always goes on somehow ...I had made notes for each chapter about everything I wanted to write to you about your great story… But I had to realize that Tosh01 beat me to it and mentioned everything I actually wanted to contribute. So be it, he is an attentive and skilled reader, like me. Thank you Tosh01 at this point! I don't really have an explanation for it, but I knew from the beginning that Ethan would only be a means to an end, and the story would revolve around the twins. “Bisque”, I don't understand the meaning of that word. Maybe because I'm German? Thanks to all contributors! Jon
Story: Boarding School Blues – Chapter 20
Comment by: Levi Holland
Hi Mike! Thanks for your thoughtful comment. I'm not sure if you're still around or will see this, but the good news is that I'm in the early stages of a planned sequel for Boarding School Blues. The bad news is...I'm only in the early stages, and unfortunately writing is pretty time consuming, especially when there are other stories along the way and other life stuff afoot. But hopefully one day I can begin to post part 2 of Cooper and Roman's story. Stay tuned!
Story: Sibling Rivalry – Chapter Five
Comment by: Jason Crow
Yeah! It's a very hot story, indeed!! Too bad he never managed to finish it... And you are very welcome! I'm glad I've got written consent from him to publish his awesome work here before he passed away. Even if it's because of a small little site like mine, his stories live on. And I'm proud to be a part of that. Good to see it's being appreciated!
Story: Sibling Rivalry – Chapter Five
Comment by: Larry
I usually don't comment on stories in here, but Sibling Rivalry is so freaking HOT I couldn't not send a note and I haven't even finished the last chapter yet. Thanks so much for continuing this awesome authors legacy.
Story: A Boyfriend for Cindy – Part 5
Comment by:
It's a great story except having to read it twice . Could have done without the playback every time .
Story: In the Deep End – Part two
Comment by:
hey I didn't see it. my apologies.... rip, I agree, it is hard to even think to try and complete another persons work. like chase slivers or silvers... his website went away. thanks for the reply, saw on the side bar.
Story: In the Deep End – Part two
Comment by: Jason Crow
Didn't you read this text at the bottom??? --- Yes, really! The End. No more chapters will follow. Not written by me, nor by Rwxxx13. Sadly, he passed away and will never write another chapter. Even though I think it deserves a more satisfying ending, I’ll never write an end to it. I don’t want to touch this genius writer’s work, because I know I’ll never do it justice. But please! Feel free to do so yourself, and send it to me and I might end up posting it here! --- I think it's pretty clear, don't you?? Jeez....
Story: In the Deep End – Part two
Comment by:
finish plz. could have been slower
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Tommy, Thank you so much for these kind words! And don't worry, I'm sure there are more people out there who missed the palindromes, but won't admit it 🙂 I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was a lot of fun submerging myself in their world and write about it. So it's always nice to see it's appreciated!
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Tommy L.
Incredible ride, Jason! Loved it! I can't believe I missed the fact that the twins' names are palindromes of each other... embarrassed to say it took me to Ch.13 to see it. The characters are finely drawn, as usual, your narrator's head is an okay one to be stuck in through their journey, and such world-building for an erotic story shows a real dedication to your craft. Take 'er easy!
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: Bayouboy
Wow! Instant hardon! I too would love more illustrations, even of just adult. Keep up the fantastic work! Reminds me of my 1st time with an older girl. I was 13 she was 19.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Robin Sherwood Forest
Lovely well developed story very erotic.
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks Cali! Good to see you're back!!!
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: Jason Crow
Maybe a sequel, maybe not. From all the stories I've written so far, this one has the best chance for a sequel. I wouldn't hold my breath, but who knows?
Story: Ethan
Comment by: Jason Crow
I'm sorry! You are absolutely right!! I thought I saw you commented on Elijah's visit. But you're right. This one is written by Levi. I sure hope he picks it back up again someday. Haven't heard from him lately. Last time we spoke, he mentioned some big project from his work. So I assume he's too busy to write.
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: Caliboy1991
Gotta say I loved that bait and switch. Dangling the 19 year old, just to give us his younger brother. Masterpiece, Jason.
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: chitownbi
very sexy, would love a sequel, maybe with the girlfriend?
Story: Ethan
Comment by: E
Alex wrote this? I thought this was part of Levi's flash fiction series?
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! Maybe there will be a sequel to this one. Who knows.
Story: Ethan
Comment by: Jason Crow
Nope. This one's written by Alex and he stopped writing a long time ago. If anyone wants to write a fitting sequel, he or she is welcome to send it to me, and I'll probably post it. But I'm not the one who's going to write it, that's for sure.
Story: Ethan
Comment by: E
Any more upcoming for this series I hope?
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: E
Nicely written. Hope to see more like this please. Thank you
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! And the reason why there are not so many illustrations, is because I don't want to overdo it. And I'm still at the bottom of a very steep learning curve, so it takes a lot of time to generate them. In future stories, there will be more, but they won't be too adult. I don't want to get in trouble in any way, so I rather stay on the safe side.
Story: A Matter of Survival
Comment by: Phil
Really a nice believable story of young love. Thank you.
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: Steve
Very sexy story . Could use some more illustrations of an adult nature . But I liked the story . Will look forward to more stories about Carol and her lust for young boys .
Story: Friends with Benefits
Comment by: Phil
It was a beautiful story and seems so realistic. Thanks for sharing it with all of us.
Story: An Analytical Approach
Comment by: Phil
A delightful story of hormone-driven teen love with a good outcome
Story: Adoring Anthony
Comment by: Phil
This story shows the importance of Intense Male Bonding in bringing two males together. It is an ancient form of coupling that has been going on for thousands of years.
Story: 29-Year-Old Grandfather
Comment by: Phil
Nice, nice---so different from my sheltered and uneventful upbringing. It reminds me of the mantra: "Frequent copulation is good for the country and good for the nation."
Story: Date Night Discovery
Comment by: Phil
Really hot story!!!! I'm off to bathroom right now to work out my excitement. Fantastic illustrations----really sexy.
Story: Boarding School Blues – Chapter 20
Comment by: Mike
Levi I've enjoyed this story so much. I really appreciate it and would love to read more about these characters.
Story: What do YOU think?
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for sharing! I know it (most likely) isn't sexual at all. But it's funny (and a bit sexy, I admit) to see a boy walking around with an obvious boner, while he's looking for a way to get rid of it. Heck! I know I had one or two of these events when I was 11-12! If I'd known then what I know now... Hmmm... Maybe there's a story in there somehow?
Story: What do YOU think?
Comment by: Zeke
Saw something very similar to this on my last cruise. Had my eyes on a cutie who was tailing his mom around. She was pretty busty, and the two of them went to sit in one of the nearby hottubs together. I doubt it was because of mom per say, but when they went to leave, the kid had a boner pressing through some rather floppy swim shorts. Couldnt have been more than 11-12, and with his general naivete about the boner jutting out, I doubt he had much idea what to do with it
Story: The Triton Adventure
Comment by: Phil
Having a brother and sister slowly discover their way to such complete oneness and fulfillment was truly a wonderful adventure. I loved the story and it, too, is one of my favorites.
Story: Parker’s Present
Comment by: Phil
A lovely birthday present that will long be remembered. Such conjugal coupling will bring brother and sister together in new ways and may even last a lifetime of shared pleasure.
Story: What do YOU think?
Comment by: Jason Crow
I see how this can be interesting. But I personally have two problems with this one: 1. It's not very 'real'. I like to focus my characters and stories around events that can more or less happen in real life. This idea is right there on the edge. And to me, just a tiny bit over it. 2. I can't write a story that didn't brew in my head for a while. I once tried writing a story for someone else, but I failed miserably. Call me stupid, but I need to 'feel' a story before I can write it and this never has happened with other people's ideas. But this idea will definitely start brewing. And some parts of it, might land in a new story. I never know where the inspiration for my next story comes from. I.e.: the other day, I saw a 12-13 y/o brother and sister in a community pool where I was also swimming. They were both in the bubble bath part of it, and when they came out of the tub, I noticed the boy had a boner. Probably due to the bubbles blowing at his junk, but this triggered something and might turn into a story. Or not. So... not a bad idea at all! Thanks for sharing, and feel free to write it yourself. I'd be happy to read it and comment on it and give you some pointers if you want.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Good point! Didn't do the Latin stuff in this one. Guess I forgot because it's an Epilogue.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks Michael! Yes. There will be more. The next one is almost finished. Stay tuned 🙂
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 17
Comment by: Jason Crow
Really cool you've enjoyed yourself! But to be honest, I'm not that interested in how many times or how much you came while reading my stories. Frankly, it makes me a bit uneasy... I know what I'm writing and what people do while reading it. But that doesn't mean I'm interested in all the juicy details, you know? Really! Have fun reading but keep this sort of stuff to yourself, okay? It's nothing personal, either! I hope other people read this and do the same 🙂
Story: What do YOU think?
Comment by: Phil
I would like a story about a special private club for high school wrestlers, ages 13-16, in which they wrestle nude. A pin is done in a very different way. Before the contest begins, the boys lube their cocks and asses. A pin is counted when one of the boys manages to fully impale the other one. When that happens, the winner then gets to fuck him to completion. I am a swimmer but have always admired younger wrestlers.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Epilogue
Comment by: Michael W Welch
Hey, where is the Latin stuff?
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Michael W Welch
Great story.! I've liked all of your stories and hope you have many more to write.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 18
Comment by: Phil
I have to agree. The story was so true to life and being male, I found it very arousing. Those were precious moments.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 17
Comment by: Phil
Wow! Had to jack 3 times to get through it all. Really hot hot hot! What a wonderful experience for the children to be able to share at such a deep level.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 16
Comment by: Phil
Really hot having the two boys couple together in the ancient way at such an early age.
Story: New Jason Crow Story – Aetheria
Comment by: Greg Robertson
Just finished reading the last chapters well done thoroughly enjoyed this story
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Matthew
What a remarkable story! I loved it! Write more, please
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
You're more than welcome 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it.
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Mike
Jason this is a good story and I liked a lot. Thanks for writing it.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Mike, Thanks for the kind words! Glad you enjoyed it. And you're right. It took a lot from me, and I needed to recharge for a moment. But the good news is that I'm already back in the saddle and brewing on something new. So stay tuned for that 🙂
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 11
Comment by: Mike
Lovely story
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Mike
Jason, what a great story, I couldn’t put it down. Hope you’re working on more, although I’m sure this took a lot out of you. Looking forward to the next one. Mike
Story: Holiday Cabin – Part Four
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Luke, I've seen this one. But the quality and word choice isn't on par with the original story. This is, in my humble opinion at least, written by someone else who didn't manage to capture the essence of the original story. Bu everyone can judge it fro themselves by following the link you provided. Thanks for sharing!! I do appreciate it.
Story: Alex Hawk’s Stuff
Comment by: Jason Crow
Never heard of that one. I also can't seem to find it anywhere. I'd love to read (and post) it, so if you, or anyone else for that matter, can send it to me?
Story: New Jason Crow Story – Aetheria
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Greg, Thanks for those kind works! And good to see people are enjoying a plot and an actual story, next to the sex stuff we enjoy so much.
Story: Alex Hawk’s Stuff
Comment by:
I cannot find Mom and Me.
Story: New Jason Crow Story – Aetheria
Comment by: Greg
I am really enjoying this story it’s great to read something that has a real plot to it as well as the erotica love Sifi Great work please keep it going
Story: Connor at Twelve
Comment by: Phil
The dialog and characterization is so life-like and true and I could just see this happening. It portrays a special bond between siblings that will last a life time, even if they don't couple after they are fully adult.
Story: Ramble
Comment by: Phil
loved the story!
Story: Holiday Cabin – Part Four
Comment by: Luke
Story continues here: https://web.archive.org/web/20060301164105/http://www.asstr.org/%7Eermberto/holiday2.htm
Story: Kim’s Game – Chapter 9
Comment by: Phil
A very believable story of tender love between 3 caring people
Story: 2-D
Comment by: Jason Crow
I don't necessarily agree with your point of view. I write about this stuff, because I think it's sexy and I enjoy fantasizing about it. I personally don't think parents should encourage this behavior. I want people on this site to feel free to express their opinion, even when I'm not 100% on the same page. It's okay to express your opinion and people are also free to react to that (as long as we keep conversations civil). I think I know what you mean, but I also think other aspects of a sibling relationship should be taken into consideration here. So thank you for giving us your point of view 🙂
Story: Forbidden Fruit – Chapter 11
Comment by:
Very sexy - very compelling - if hard to believe - at Isaiah's age, so compatible, engaged and so aroused...
Story: 2-D
Comment by: Dr. Phil
Loved the story. At 13 & 15, it was a perfect time for them to discover and participate frequent copulation. A lot of people don't understand the importance of doing that while so young. Frequent fucking so early after puberty really helps push the development of the penis to the maximum possible. Repeatedly going into full erection increases growth in both length and width while the boy is still in the growth stage. Plus an unbreakable bond is forged between the two brothers which will last a lifetime, even if coupling is not done after they mature into adults. Parents need to encourage such coupling among their children so that they don't have to hide it and deal with guilt.
Story: Alex Hawk’s Guide to Sibling Seduction!
Comment by: Phil
Very sound advice. Sex between siblings should be started as early as possible in order to maximize copulation to as many years as possible before the limiting entanglement of marriage takes place. That no only provides an intense bonding for the siblings, but also very experienced sex partners for marriage. I believe that it is good for the country and good for the nation.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Phil, Thanks for these kind words! Glad you enjoyed the story. And good to see that writing a real story instead of just short sex stuff is being appreciated. This is what I always aim to do, by the way. Build at least a bit of character background and some sort of story arc, no matter how short the story. Enjoy yourself here! There are loads more stories from me and other authors you might enjoy 🙂
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Phil
I loved the story because it was a real story, not just sex. It rang true to human nature and helped the reader to imagine what life might well be like in a few hundred years. Best of all, the erotic parts were woven in to be believable and really raised by hotness index! You are a skillful writer indeed to have done all of this. Phil
Story: Daniel
Comment by: Josphe Amn
Great! It made me recall me my own surprising feelings when I had experienced those amazing sensations when we were doing sort of those secret activities with my 13 years old brother. I was about 10 years old. It was absolutely the end of my innocent but horny childhood. I tried later relieve those pleasures with so many girls. They pretty much used stalk me. But I knew that my target Will solely be boys.
Story: rwxxx13
Comment by: Jason Crow
Very sad, indeed!
Story: rwxxx13
Comment by: Tosh01
Very sad to hear Rwxxx13 passed away.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Good to see you've enjoyed yourself!
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Sonny Solomon
What a great story. I loved it!!
Story: rwxxx13
Comment by: Jason Crow
I know! And it's just a couple of pixels placed in the right order by Artificial Intelligence. These kids don't even exist in real life!
Story: rwxxx13
Comment by:
that image at the top is hot
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Tosh01
Thanks for the comments on the comments! Fully understand the Nifty aspect. The Ethan scene was okay, and gave a little more impact when his fate hit - he was a good older brother. For clarity on the FLiN/Bisque comment, as a reader of Alex's stories even before your site, I enjoyed the reference. Just wanted to get across that your wrote well enough that they both had meaning in the story even if the reader wasn't as familiar as we are. That's a good sign. Sorry there aren't more comments. People are shy in that way. I will try to be a bit more regular on it. I know creators appreciate it when done elsewhere. It was nice to see Cali post. Hope he is well.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
You are absolutely right. These stories need a place of their own. But I need to find a good way to place it in the menu, because it might get a bit cluttered with another menu item. I will look into it the coming week and figure something out. Maybe a whole new theme, I don't know. Just so you know the reason why I did it this way... With Levi and Cali, I got explicit consent from the authors. Rwxxx13 gave me permission to post his story 'Study BG3-17'. But when I read his other stories, I felt the need to give them a place on my site. The problem is that he doesn't respond to emails anymore. Several people mentioned this. Maybe he's gone forever, maybe he's not. But considering this started out as a tribute site to another author who vanished, why not praise his work the same way? Valid point, and I'll work something out. His work is just too good to be hidden in the dungeons of my website. <em>Edit: When I wrote this comment, I was unaware of the bad news that Rwxxx13 has passed away. R.I.P. Rwxxx13!
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Tosh, Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it! Good to see you reacted to my personal notes, and I'm glad that most of it wasn't a real issue. Two things I want to say in response: - Ethan wasn't needed for the learning part, I totally agree with you on that. But I needed someone to get the trip to the Terra Site going, so why not have a little fun before that. That's really the only reason it's in there. And because of this scene, it's a bisexual story, and Nifty will allow me to post it 🙂 - The references to the FLiN aren't too elaborate, no. And both stories stand on their own. But I think it's a nice tribute to Alex and an good way to point people toward a hidden gem they might miss. That's all. Thanks again for the detailed comments. I wish more people would take the time to do this. All comments make me a better author. It's always a bit disappointing to see how few people take the time to comment. I'm not in it for the praise, but I put a lot of time and effort into it, so it would be nice to get something back. Ah well... it is what it is.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Tosh01
Second set of comments - didn't know a good place to post this. The 8 stories by Rwxxx13 that were posted in January didn't hit the front page. The "Stories written by others" page is a little hard to find to regular check for new items. Perhaps a link to it can be added to the Top Menu between Levi's Stuff and Mail Me. This were the stories, which all do show on the "Stories written by others" page: Do Ya Think I’m Sexy Hearts and Bones Let’s Get Physical Midnight and the Kiddy is Sleeping Minding the Children A Passage Into Darkness Tattoo on my Heart The Vlog
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Tosh01
Good story, Jason. Comments on your Epilogue Notes: The story had a fine amount of action, not too little. If anything the Ethan scene would have been fine to be left out and Ay learned on his own. plenty kids figure it our, even in the ancient pre-internet & pre-home vid porn days. The A to B to C etc progression works well very with the story and was a good choice. The depressing vs joy choice was good as well. The FLiN aspect works for those who know the background, but isn't critical if one doesn't. Bisque is a nice nod, but also one that a reader without the background would take as the stories version of Shiny in Firefly. It just works so clearly that anyone senses the meaning from the context, and that it's Nadia's favorite to toss out is nice. The choice to stay in one timeline, not flashback, and avoiding POV shifts was all good. Those get played out. Moreso the mini-time resets when jumping from one character to the next (i.e. son to mom, and back again). This story maintained a nice momentum.
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thank you very much! Much appreciated 🙂
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jospeh Amma
I congratulate you and your colleagues, (Levi Holland, E-o-F and the others). Let me please, express my congratulations and say again: CONGRATULATIONS, AND THANKS YOU A HUGE BUNCH. JASON, LEVI E-O-F, CALIBOY AND YOUR COLLEAGUES
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Glad you enjoyed it. And good to see you're back!
Story: Aetheria – Epilogue
Comment by: Caliboy
Loved the story. Was a blast to read.
Story: Aetheria – Chapter 12
Comment by: Jason Crow
🙂
Story: Aetheria – Chapter 12
Comment by: Nick
I love this story ... it's bisque!
Story: Camp Hiawatha – Chapter three
Comment by: Jason Crow
I've written a note at the end of most of rwxxx13's stories, just not with this one. Simple answer: No. It will not continue if no one writes another chapter. As far as I know, rwxxx13 sadly isn't with us anymore. I don't know if he's just not writing anymore, or if something much worse had happened. Fact is that he hasn't been heard of for a couple of years now 🙁 . Before anyone asks, I'm not the one who's going to continue his work. rwxxx13 is just too good at what he does, and his style and the way he tells a story is simply awesome. I feel too incompetent to continue his work and do him justice. Beside that, I'd also like to come up with my own ideas. But if anyone is willing to continue any of his work, send it to me and I'll make sure to post it here.
Story: Camp Hiawatha – Chapter three
Comment by: Haziel.Rose@proton.me
Will this continue?
Story: Underwear challenge
Comment by: Jason Crow
Ah... Hugo!? I almost forgot about him. Almost 🙂 Too bad his channel is offline. But he looks all grown-up now. Good for him! Now I wish I've downloaded his wonderful videos. Ah well... It was fun while it lasted. Thanks for pointing it out and remembering me.
Story: Underwear challenge
Comment by: polarbears
yes he is dutch... and no most videos are offline
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi there, Glad you enjoyed it so much! This story is still very dear to me! I love the way the characters turned out, and it's actually my first novel-sized story. So, I'm glad you (and other people) enjoy reading it as much as I did writing 🙂 Thanks for the feedback!
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Don Greentree
I could not put this story down, it had everything a great story needs to keep the reader wanting more. You had drama, pathos, sex, love and humour mixed in with a little sci-fi, An honest to goodness good read.
Story: Aetheria – Chapter 6
Comment by: Jason Crow
Glad you like it! I don't want to spoil anything yet, so stay tuned till the end to find out more 🙂
Story: Aetheria – Chapter 6
Comment by: Greg
I adore long story’s. More with the training girl would be awesome.
Story: Goodbye Dad!
Comment by: A. Reader
My thoughts and prayers will be with you and your family during this time.
Story: Goodbye Dad!
Comment by: Tosh01
Sorry for your loss Jason.
Story: The Treehouse – Epilogue
Comment by: JonAnd
This story is worthy of a film, only it wouldn't be possible to show the sex between the teenagers. A great, sometimes heartbreaking story that captivated me. I think the epilogue touched me the most. In fact, the story seems familiar to me, as if I had read it somewhere in German years ago, or is there a similar film...?
Story: Forbidden Fruit – Chapter 9
Comment by: JonAnd
Apart from the fact that it's another subliminal pedo story, it's a story that, in my opinion, started out comprehensibly and gradually lost its realism from chapter to chapter. Until finally, in chapter 9, the whole thing became so far-fetched that I didn't read the rest of the chapter and spared myself the content of the following chapters. I gave the time I had saved to stories worth reading. Many stories are written about 12 to 14/15-year-old boys with the physical development of a 10-year-old, instead of writing about a 10-year-old, why?
Story: Goodbye Dad!
Comment by: Levi Holland
Oh, my friend...I'm so sorry to hear this for you and your family. I know condolences can't do much in this moment, but I hope you have some comfort in knowing he's at peace now too. He will always live on inside.
Story: Goodbye Dad!
Comment by: R
Sorry for your loss. No words can describe how rough that is to deal with.
Story: Little Boy Blue – Part Two
Comment by: JonAnd
Wow, a wonderful story, from beginning to end. The most beautiful sex story I've ever read, and I really do read a lot. I've never been so caught up in a sex story before, and could almost visualize the whole thing. Maybe it's the unfulfilled longing to experience something like that?
Story: Elijah’s Visit – Part Two
Comment by: JonAnd
A sex story in which everything else is described in detail, except the sex itself. "Boys are fun, but fragile! Make sure you don't break them"? Jack is worried about the penetration being painful, and then just fucks the boy without any preparation? Shower first … Lick Elijah's sweet asshole extensively and vigorously before the fuck, and then slowly stretch the virgin hole with fingers or other aids. Pampering the boy passionately, lovingly and considerately is how a gay man would proceed. Child fuckers proceed as described in the story, so it fits that the teenager is physically underdeveloped! Most supposedly teenage stories show this schema.
Story: Brad and Jesse
Comment by: David Mangan
This story was absolutely exciting, and heart warming at the same time. Reading along and seeing their love bloom was beautiful, it even had my heart flutter.
Story: A Thing as Pure as Love – Chapter Nine
Comment by: Jason Crow
A great story, indeed! Glad you enjoyed yourself. But about writing alternative endings, or even finish some of the other stories: this will not happen! Sorry to put it like this, but I focus on my own stories. Rehashing earlier work of myself won't happen, let alone work from another author. Especially a great author like Alex. But as I always say to others contacting me about this: Please! Feel free to do this yourself, and I'll post it on the site. I'll even help with proofreading and giving tips and advice. Again, sorry to put it this bluntly, but I don't want to promise things I'll never do.
Story: Stories written by others
Comment by: Jason Crow
Very kind words, Levi! And I didn't know this about him. I asked for his approval to publish his stories, and he replied pretty quickly back the. He said it was okay, as long as I published his name and e-mail address so people could reach him to comment on the stories. But... this last contact was on September 21st 2018... I tried contacting him after this, but he never replied. Guess it makes sense now. Great to see he inspired others to start writing.
Story: Stories written by others
Comment by: Levi Holland
I had the pleasure of coming across Rwxxx's work a few years back. It was one of the few times I found myself really taken by an author's work, so much so that I reached out to him to see if he was still writing. His response to me was pretty dire sounding...from what I could tell, he had a chronic illness of sorts, and I took that to mean 'not much time left.' I tried to send him words of encouragement, but when faced with news like the kind he mentioned, I'm not sure any words can help. Maybe they had some glimmer of positivity. Who knows? Shortly before I started writing, I tried reaching out again to check up, but sadly I never heard any reply. I dont know for sure if that means their time has officially come, but in any case, Im honored on Rwxxx's behalf that their work can live on here. In many ways, that interaction kickstarted the bravery I felt with writing and posting my own stories. Thank you, rwxxx13. -Levi
Story: A Thing as Pure as Love – Chapter Nine
Comment by: David Mangan
This story was amazing 👏 I was even at the edge of my seat when they were in Portland. The end was not what I was expecting but it was a good ending, I found it sad yet romantic that neither one of them ever fell in love with anyone else. I also wonder what would have happened if they would have stayed in LA with Jared and did the three-some? Maybe you can rewrite it with an alternative ending.
Story: The Jason Crow FAQ
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for asking the difficult questions! To be clear: I asked myself these questions and these are my personal opinions Everyone is entitled to have his/hers own, of course! But I don't mind answering them for you, and (of course) I don't mind to disagree with each other 🙂 When I look back at my younger years, the 'real' interest started during puberty. Everything before that, was just innocently discovering things. Back then, my penis was there for peeing only. Yes, sometimes it got hard, but I hardly connected it with anything sexual. Love between adults and children CAN happen, I agree. But I have difficulties with the balance of power in such relationships. That's my main concern, and that's why I don't think it's a healthy relationship. And about shaving pubes... Again, when I look back at my younger years, I was too proud of the new hairs in my underwear to shave them off. I don't know how it is today, but that's my reference point on this. Maybe you're right, I honestly don't know Thanks for pointing this out and questioning my words! I appreciate it.
Story: The Jason Crow FAQ
Comment by: Jon
Did you ask yourself these questions, or were you influenced by someone else to ask and answer them...? ? I've only read "The Treehouse" so far, so I don't know how big the age range is in the stories here, how big it is between children and teenagers (from what age is the speech....)? Children are supposedly not "that" sexually active? I definitely can't agree with that. Children become very active from the age of 9 and try out all sorts of things, often with their own siblings or best friend because they are within reach. And "real" love between children and teenagers, children and adults or teenagers and adults happens very often. Don't shave, teenagers fluctuate constantly, sometimes they remove their pubic hair, sometimes they leave it on ...
Story: The Triton Adventure
Comment by: David Mangan
Now I see why Jason said this is probably his number 1 favorite 😍 This is definitely my favorite of all your stories.
Story: Welfare Christmas
Comment by: David Mangan
What a great story. Nice steady build up and a great climax. Thank you.
Story: Taming Trevor
Comment by: David Mangan
Great story. A nice slow build up to the climax of the story.
Story: My Crush
Comment by: David
That was a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing 👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️
Story: Still alive
Comment by: Jason Crow
Sure! You're not going to believe this one. Hold on... I Google them 🙂 Really! With the right search words (I'm sure you can figure them out) and an evening of clicking through the images you find, you'll be amazed how much great, pics are out there. And you don't have to worry about stumbling across some 'wrong' pictures. I'd still recommend creating a separate account for this search, so it doesn't show up on your phone or work computer. It's a bit embarrassing when you're casting your screen for your co-workers to see, and when you search for something quickly, Google says: "Hey! You might also enjoy this..." Nope. Better separate these two. But that's really all there is to it.
Story: Connor at Twelve
Comment by: Dave
👏👏👏 Absolutely wonderful! This story had me on the edge of cumming with out me even touching myself. I had a hard on the whole time. Thank you again
Story: Still alive
Comment by: Tosh01
Hi Jason. You gave a hint last year in the 100K post on how to find Zoon. It was very helpful for not only Zoon but also artists like LLB. Would you be able to give a similar board hint for photos like the above? Some of the photos you used have an sf-o feel. Thank you.
Story: Elijah’s Visit – Part Two
Comment by: Dodger
A sensitive story about cousins. It is somewhat similar to my own story, There could have been a lot of interesting scenes with the other friends. Maybe when Elijah visits the next time!
Story: Alex Hawk’s Guide to Sibling Seduction!
Comment by:
Very nice.
Story: Still alive
Comment by: Jason Crow
Levi and I had contact about a week ago. He's currently very busy in his personal life, but I had a chance to read the first chapter of his next story, and I can say that it looks very promising!! Just a little more patience...
Story: Still alive
Comment by: R
Glad to hear you're back. Looking forward to your next story. Anything from Levi too?
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 10
Comment by: Jason Crow
Glad you enjoyed yourself! This story wasn't written by me (Jason) but by Caliboy1991. Unfortunately, I haven't heard from Cali in over two years. He does have a great talent for storytelling; I couldn't agree more! Maybe someday, he'll read this comment and come back from the dead. I sure hope so! In the meantime, we still have his stories to enjoy.
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 10
Comment by: JD
Yes it is! Wish it would keep going on! It was one of the better ones I've read in a while.
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 10
Comment by: JD
Wow! That was a really well told, erotic, story that made me nostalgic for my early days and the man who became my "dad" and gave me what my dad could not. Just wonderful, though to be honest, I'd love to read more. You have a gift for storytelling.
Story: Alex Hawk’s Stuff
Comment by: Pig Pen
Just Finished A Thing as Pure as Love. A very good story. Enjoyed it very much, as it touched my heart. Thank you very greatly. Regard PP
Story: My Ganymede
Comment by:
Loved this story. Often fantasize about having relationship like this.
Story: Boarding School Blues – Chapter 19
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Andrew, Those are some very kind words! This is what we authors like to see. We don’t do it for the money or the praise. It’s in giving someone that warm feeling inside. It’s in submerging yourself in a different world and enjoying that. And when someone sends you this feedback, you know you did well. That’s what, to me at least, it’s all about. I’ve sent your feedback to Levi. And knowing him a little bit, he feels roughly the same. Thanks for taking the time to respond! We really appreciate this!
Story: Boarding School Blues – Chapter 19
Comment by: Andrew
Dear LEVI, ¡CONGRATULATIONS!! and I really mean it. If this is your first semi-extended written work, then, You are destined to the higest on literature. I've been myself, living during two years at an 'only boys Boarding School when I was from thirteen to fiftheen years old. Soo many many years ago, But while I was reading your lovely and brilliant story, I was inmersed in the story. And, simultaniously, re-living my most and Deep experiences during those two amazing years of coming on age. I want to encourage YOU, indeed and indeep, to keep on writing. And I beg You to let me keep enjoying reading you. Please!, let me know how can I get to it. I'm around 70 y.o. and English is NOT my first language, but I can read better than write. I'm already plenty thankful to You for having had the pleasure of read this history, and I Will be absolutely favoured and thankfully if You open the way for me, to continué reading you. May you be blessed with the the BEST that life can give. You touched my heart.
Story: Boarding School Blues
Comment by: Levi Holland
Hi Andy, Thank you so much for the kind words and for taking the time to write them! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and hope you found the last two chapters exciting and satisfying. I mentioned it in my comments for the final two chapters, but a writer's reward is only ever the feedback we get, so it means the world to myself and Jason anytime someone takes the time to reach out to us. As for my other stories, I've got all my published stories on Jason's site already, so please feel free to check them out if you haven't gotten the chance to yet. You can find them all listed under my author's page. There will be plenty more to come in the future, so stay tuned! Thanks again! Levi
Story: Kim’s Game – Chapter 9
Comment by:
Nice
Story: Boarding School Blues
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for those kind words! I also sent this to Levi, so he can get the credits for his wonderful story. Chapter 19 will be released today; chapter twenty will go online tomorrow. So the wait isn't that long 🙂
Story: Boarding School Blues
Comment by: Andy Panda bear dad.
GREAT GREAT JOB LEVI !! THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH. I am talking about "Boarding School Blues" . I just can say I LOVE IT!! Well I've read from 1 to 18 chapter, and i'm craving for the 19nth and 20 chapters, because I Couldnt reach them. I knew YOU thanks to the generousity of JASON CROW, the GREAT (as You are, indeed) WRITER of many stories. And I'd really LOVE to get on touch with You and your web page. LEVI, could I please beg You to allow me to get the chapters 19 and 20 of "Boarding School Blues”?. And more than that; to your other huge lot of literature?, Beg You to tell to me the most direct way to do this. I'd LOVE to enter in to your blog, in to your web page and your e-mail, Consider me your FAN and your admiror. (Please forgive my fails on English language. I'm trying hard to enhance my English language development, in order to get better on conversator, reader and learner, I'm a senior citizen, (an "old fart" man, disabled but) VERY eager to read and see the characters of your novels, tales, storyes, etc., etc. Of your high level erotic boys and male tweens Blooming, BEST wishes and kind regards from Spain, Bless You. ;*)
Story: Team Spirit
Comment by:
I'm 10th grade qb questioning my orientation and i have to admit i rly liked that story 😅
Story: Dull Summer
Comment by: Paul
Loved this story
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 17
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thank you! Smoky Mountains is still one of my personal favorites. And yes, I’m still working on new material. Currently, another big one like SM, is underway. Don’t hold your breath yet, because I’m not even halfway yet, but it’s coming, and I really like how it’s going so far.
Story: Boarding School Blues – Chapter 9
Comment by: Levi Holland
If memory serves right, this was as far as Jason and I got before his vacation and my personal deadline. There will be a small gap between ch 9 and future chapters, but now that we have closed the first "arc" of the story, I'm curious for readers whose POV you might be attached to or identify with most? Are you more Team Cooper or Team Roman? Let me know!
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 17
Comment by:
A really very entertaining story thus far. I hope you're still creating such fun stories. You're quite talented.
Story: Boarding School Blues
Comment by: Johnny Kape
"And let’s be honest, Mrs. Rowling ruined all new boarding school stories because there will always be such a vibe over it." I agreed with it, haha. Just read chapter 1 and think it an interesting story. Looking forward to reading more!
Story: Studpuppy
Comment by: Anonhikka
This story has an amazing, realistic plot! The only problem with this story is that it's too short. I wish the story of Allison's seduction of best friend her younger brother Todd's could be fleshed out in more detail.
Story: A Dream of Darkness – Chapter 2
Comment by: Luther
Loving this so far. Can't read it all right now but will soon. Thanks
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thank you very much! I know this may sound like a broken record or lame. But reading back comments like this, actually brings a smile to my face and it makes me feel all mushy inside. Each and every comment (good or bad) genuinely makes me feel like I'm doing the right thing writing these stories. So, thank you. And you're welcome!
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by:
A fantastic story! And I love the character building! Thank you so much!! 🙂
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Tyler
Damn good story.. started on nifty and was thankful that the final chapter was here.. look forward to reading more of the stories on your site. Hopefully they care as well written as this one.. thanks
Story: Camping Out
Comment by: Alan
wow, I miss those days, as a youth and adult
Story: The Cam Games – Part two
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! And yeah... sorry about the ending. Glad you enjoyed it!
Story: The Cam Games – Part two
Comment by: David
Very hot story, with a real hot, pervy ending.
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for these kind words! I know I'm a sucker for slow-burners. But I think it improves the overall quality of a story, because you get more invested in it. Glad you made it through and enjoyed yourself!
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Steve
I really loved this story . Very different than anything else I've come across . At first the slow build up was a bit frustrating but the the plot just swept me away . Only wish there were a few more chapters . Very unique approach . This is my first time on your site and so far I am very pleased with what I have found .
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Joe
Great story! The embarrassment, confusion and excitement of the characters situations had me wanting to be in it to the end. Thank you
Story: To like or to dislike…
Comment by:
It's really a sweet and masculine story, thanks for sharing it. Through its reading I was able to make a beautiful memory of my own childhood, which was the most intense, courageous and fun period of my life. I was a determined and enthusiastic boy. A child with a clean and idealistic mind, with clean purposes and transparent and clean action that you can imagine. But I am not going to write my story here, but to congratulate you on your work and thank you. I am afraid of the problems that this type of literature can cause. I am already an old man and I just want to live calmly, to digest my own history. I want to continue reading your work.
Story: Andrew
Comment by: Arnie
Damn I Love it!!! Can't wait to read more. Keep them Cumming
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks, Peter. I agree that early on in the story, it's clear what the eventual solution to switching back will be. I thought about a couple of ways to avoid this. But you're reading the story on a website that focuses on erotic stories. Mostly incest-themed... Even if I did find something clever, everyone would still know where the story would lead to. So I stopped trying and tried to write a decent story. The credits for the 'clever Egypt thingy' goes mostly to E-o-F. He proposed to use the ancient Egypt, where sometimes brothers and sisters were forced to marriage, as an angle here. I just went with that and came up with Jakeem, Kadya, and the rest. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the feedback.
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Peter
Thoroughly enjoyed the whole story- how the body changes occured was cleverly created. Whilst guessing earlier on in the story that the sexual activitiy seemed to be the answer, it was still well paced in the way. The Jakeem and Kadya twist was good as was their father being from Egypt. Allin all a brilliant story - thank you
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks. Happy to be of service 🙂
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the story. I know I had a lot of fun writing it, so I'm glad it's being appreciated.
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jersey22
Well done. Great story and well written!
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 9
Comment by: Donald Rehrer Jr.
Excellent story, I was totally into it, chapter after chapter. You've put together a story how all stories should be, good characters hot sex, and a satisfying ending.
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 1
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks, Levi!! Appreciate the help and support!
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 2
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! I'm guessing it'll take me four or five separate posts. So I'm hoping that in the mid of next week, the entire story is online.
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 1
Comment by: Levi Holland
Yay, so happy you got to publish this so soon! I can already see some good growth and changes in ch 1. Cant wait to read back through! 😀
Story: I Hate You! – Chapter 2
Comment by:
Invested! I've never read a Freaky Friday-style erotica before, so I'm very excited to see where this goes! How often will updates be?
Story: Stud Service
Comment by:
Ngl this story makes me kinda sad. I'm terrified of kids today being surrounded by social media culture and TikTok "celebrities" making them think they want to grow up way too fast. I remember personally always being told "don't be too quick to grow up you're gonna miss it" and laughing it off like "what do you know MOM" and now I'm an adult I'm like "oh FUCK go back." Still jerked off though 😃
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 11 – March
Comment by:
I am new to Alex's stories. So far what I have read is great. I must add that the girl attached to this story is spectacular. Good job.
Story: Levi has his own place
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Tim, I'm working on that. Creating these audio files is pretty time-consuming, but I will publish these as soon as they're finished.
Story: Levi has his own place
Comment by: Tim
How about audio versions of Levi’s work?
Story: Camping Out
Comment by: Arvis
Great story. Keep them coming.
Story: The Side Hustle – Chapter 3
Comment by: E
Even better than the first story!
Story: A Dream of Darkness – Chapter 6
Comment by: E
Interesting story. Good 👍
Story: Flour Child
Comment by: Mike
"Until the condom broke."! Perfect lead for a sequel. Nice story.
Story: Strip Foosball
Comment by: Jason Crow
I completely agree. It's a bit messy, but the overall premise is entertaining. Definitely not the best on the site, but still a lot better than most stuff you find at Nifty or storiesonline.
Story: Strip Foosball
Comment by: Mike
Nice story. But if Angie is 13 she is NOT pre-teen. And if Dominic is 12 they are NOT 2 years apart. Otherwise a good short story, that skipped the messy cleanup at the end.
Story: Show Me
Comment by: Mike A.
Back in 1975 "SHOW ME" was on display at the local mall bookstore. I was in the military then and had to show my ID to buy the book, (I just liked seeing naked kids). I showed the book to some friends who had kids, and they borrowed it to have "the talk". I believed it was a very tastefully done book, and the creators intended that parents sit with their kids and go through it TOGETHER. The US SUPREME COURT ruled it was not child porn, but educational art. Since then the Congress has passed laws that make possession of that book criminal. Shame.
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part One
Comment by: Mike
Nice story so far. Gotta keep reading part 2.
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! Can't deny that on this site, there are a couple of gay stories. I always try to use the correct tags. That way, you can see if it is or isn't your thing.
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 3
Comment by:
This story is interesting so far but I really don't dig the whole attraction to the boy thing. Gay stuff isn't my thing.
Story: eBooks
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thank you very much, Joseph. Just subscribe to my email list, and you'll receive a notification when I post a new story.
Story: Issues
Comment by: Jason Crow
All is well. And thank you!
Story: Eternal Transcendence
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Story: Eternal Transcendence
Comment by:
It was great!
Story: Issues
Comment by: Richard
I just found your site and hope all is well. Good work!
Story: eBooks
Comment by: Joseph
Thanks a lot for sharing Jason. You are an excellent writer, and very prolific. I've enjoyed ALL & EACH ONE of all that I've read from you. CONGRATULATIONS‼️ You deserve very very much of what you would want. And I always am fiery hungry to read more and more of what you write and what you suggest. I'm you fan!!
Story: All Dressed Up
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for pointing it out. I'll look into that.
Story: All Dressed Up
Comment by: Mike A.
In the PDF version of this story you have some typos, so you might want to read through it and make corrections.
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
Nope. This image lives in my imagination, and now probably in yours too 🙂 Glad you love the story!
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 9
Comment by:
Are those camouflage swim trunks or undies in the pic? Boys look great in both. Love the story.
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 13
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thank you for these kind words! I'm not sure yet if there will be a sequel to this story. But who knows... The possibilities are virtually limitless.
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 13
Comment by:
Your writing is superb. "Dear Jason" is crafted beautifully, and your invention of the ELDS opens the door for an infinite range of new material. I'm eager to see your new series about the "new kids on the block".
Story: Dear Jason
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! I just started my new story. It won't be a very long one, so I'm hoping it won't take me too long either.
Story: Dear Jason
Comment by: R
Fun story! Looking forward to more stories.
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 9
Comment by: lickit100
Jason is the perfect teacher
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 6
Comment by: lickit100
1st great one is ALWAYS the best. you remember it for the rest of your life
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 4
Comment by: We2are1
nice 1st step of Glenn's seduction
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 6
Comment by: We2are1
love the build up the anticipation
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 6
Comment by: Jason Crow
That's a very nice compliment! Not exactly woke ;), but still very much appreciated!
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 6
Comment by:
Excellent Jason. You gave me a semi as always
Story: Dear Jason
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks, Edward! I guess I'm a bit too hard on myself. The comments and emails I received so far, are all extremely positive! So it's probably just me 🙂 Or... I laid the bar deliberately low, so everyone is positively surprised... (No. Didn't do it because of that. But stil...)
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hey Andy, Good to see you're enjoying it so far! I'll publish more chapters later today, so you don't have to wait too long!
Story: Dear Jason – Chapter 3
Comment by: Andy Wills
You can't leave it there! I'm desperate to know what is going to happen . Best story you've ever written Thank you
Story: Dear Jason
Comment by: Edward-or-Ford
You're very welcome, sir! (I know you don't have much ego, but by the same token you don't have to be so hard on your own work before anyone even gets the chance to read it. If you really must be so self-critical, save it for the epilogue LoL.)
Story: A Boyfriend for Cindy – Part 1
Comment by: ray watson
The anticipation is killing me,hope the rest is just as good as the writing here.
Story: Issues
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thank you very much! Appreciate it.
Story: Issues
Comment by: Anon
Hey Jason - realized that nobody commented on this yet, but want to make it clear that you know that everyone in this community is just happy you are as alright as possible in the circumstances, we appreciate the update, and we can't wait to read and enjoy whatever comes out next! Stay well, friend.
Story: Blake and Ashley
Comment by: Michael
God I loved that story. Just wish the 29yo were my son, and the kids my grandchildren. How horny would that be!
Story: The Road Less Traveled – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
I get that. But I personally like a story with some debt in it, and I think Cali actually did a very good job with this story. But hey! It's your opinion, and you're entitled to that 🙂
Story: The Alex Hawk FAQ
Comment by: Jason Crow
Well... This is actually an one-on-one copy of the FAQ on Alex's old website.I think it's dated somewhere around 2010, so not exactly accurate anymore 🙂
Story: The Road Less Traveled – Chapter 9
Comment by:
this is too sad for me 🙁
Story: The Alex Hawk FAQ
Comment by: Mr. Map
Why the hell would a MAP live in Arizona? Seems quite risky given their draconian sentencing guidelines.
Story: Emerald Oceans
Comment by: Randall Stanhope
Thank you for the kind words. I'm really happy you enjoyed it and that it brought up happy (I assume) memories. <3
Story: Emerald Oceans
Comment by: Randall Stanhope
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Story: Emerald Oceans
Comment by: R
Great story!
Story: Emerald Oceans
Comment by: lickit100
the seduction was done so well. made me remember from my childhood that 1st time. thank you
Story: Ramble
Comment by: Peter Victor
Great story! Well written!
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part One
Comment by: T.J
Really loved it The relationship between brother and sister is unbreakable Can't wait for more
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 1
Comment by: spire
love it, it was a dream of ine to have an older girl take an interest in me and show me everything. Instead it was an older man but sex is sex, especially at that age ( early teens)
Story: Viaglis
Comment by: Spire
Awesome, just wish an older girl had taken me in hand when I was just 12-14. Could have learnt so much, and repeated so many times...!
Story: Boys For Hire – The Escort
Comment by: Spire
Found this really hot, hope she goes on to train more boys
Story: Our Chaperone
Comment by: Larry
Loved it. Real innocence...real sex.
Story: Life goes on – Part 3
Comment by: Caliboy1991
Someweirdo... You're my kindred spirit. Thanks for taking the time to leave your feedback. I appreciate it. My stories tend to be short on conflict and long on the sex, so there's no doubt, a certain degree of sameness between the stories. After all, there are only so many ways to say "johnny fucked his mom/sister/babysitter." But I do enjoy trying to figure out fun and creative ways to explore Johnny's escapades. One of my problems is that I have a hard time getting stories to go longer than 40,000 words, which puts my stories firmly in the "novella" category. Just enough for a few hours of pleasurable (hopefully) reading. I have one that I hope to send over to Jason in a month or two that gets close to 60,000. It explores a few more issues, but it's still mostly about exploring my kinks. I hope you keep reading these stories. You're welcome to follow me over on Archive of Our Own. Just search for caliboy1991 over there. There are a few stories over there that I haven't got around to sending to Jason yet. Readers over there seem to eat up the boy/mom story lines. To be honest, my favorite of my stories is the first story I posted here, called, "Forbidden Fruit," which is a boy/man story. My favorite hetro story is The Treehouse. It's got more conflict in it, and I really enjoyed exploring the innocent exploration between the two main characters. You're welcome to reach out to me directly at caliboy1991@protonmail.com. Feedback, even negative, is always appreciated.
Story: Life goes on – Part 3
Comment by: Jason Crow
I understand you look at it this way. The 'older woman - young boy' is totally Caliboy's kink. I think he executes this extremely well (he's at a level on his own in this genre), but it's always more or less the same. There's no denying that. But I like this kink too every now and then. And when it's written at this level, I don't mind, and I'm glad he wrote it. I'm not feeling the need to defend him because he is competent enough to do that on his own. But I think some perspective might be needed. Slow-burners are very demanding to write! Trust me, I know. I did two recently. But I think both slow-burners and stroke stories can live side by side. That's precisely what I host on this website. It's a mix of both. And don't worry! Your comment is constructive. We're big boys and are perfectly capable of handling some criticism. Believe it or not, it's always appreciated! I’ll make sure to pass your comment on to Caliboy and let him respond in his own words.
Story: Life goes on – Part 3
Comment by: someweirdo
your stories are amazing, and i love them, but some of them (like this) seem so quick and.... idk, random. this basically came out of nowhere. not much plot, or build up to it. kinda just jumping right in with no warning. maybe its because i like "Slow-burners," some of which my favorites which I have taken whole weekends to read. I know this is all fiction and very unrealistic (i think) but i hope and look for slower stories, more plot, more build up and excitement and slowly getting to what we want. i know theyre surely difficult and time consuming to write. Also, most if not all of the woman/boy stories you write have basically the same recycled plot; mid-20's single woman with a just turning teenage son. I love them, but theres like six of them now, and they get less and less surprising and quicker and less exciting to read. i know what to expect.... i hope this is constructive and ill be keeping my eye out for more stories. 😀
Story: Backyard Bashfulness
Comment by:
SOOOO AMAZING we got soooo AROUSED. SOOOOO CUMMMMING FINE
Story: Kim’s Game – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
I don't think Caliboy has plans on continuing this story. But if he did, I wouldn't mind either 🙂 And just so you know... There's no such thing as spending too much time here! 😀 😀
Story: Kim’s Game – Chapter 9
Comment by: Haziel
I wish this would continue. Go on adventures? Waterparks, tease other kids, other moms and their kids. I spend too much time here
Story: Our Chaperone
Comment by: lickit100
Sweet
Story: The Grown Up Oath
Comment by: Randall Stanhope
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
Story: eBooks
Comment by: Jason Crow
You're welcome 🙂
Story: eBooks
Comment by:
Thanks a lot again!!
Story: Eternal Transcendence
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Chuck, Thanks for your kind words! This was actually my first ever story (Alex started it, and I finished). When I read it back now, I'm a bit ashamed about how 'rough' it is and how many typo's and other errors there are in there. But I decided to leave it as it is, because it's a good way to see (also for myself) the progress in my writing. Looking back, I agree on elaborating more on the first sex between Lilly and James. But that's kind of the point I just made. This is precisely one of the points I improved on IMHO. But hey! You can decide that for yourself, right!? I'd recommend to just read the other stories up here, and enjoy! -JC-
Story: Eternal Transcendence
Comment by: Chuck
I really liked your story. The story line was great and the build up to the sex was awesome. I wish you would have elaborated more on the first sex of Lilly and James but all in all this story was great. I can’t wait to read more. This was the first story I read of yours by the way.
Story: The Grown Up Oath
Comment by: lickit100
quick thinking one very smart idea
Story: 100.000!!!
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Minisino, This fantastic pic was created by a very talented artist called 'Zoon'. And yes, there's a whole set of it 🙂 There are several sites out there with 3D CGI pics. I'm not 100% sure if I can mention or link to them directly, but if you look for 'All the Fallen', I'm sure you'll be able to find it.
Story: 100.000!!!
Comment by: Minisino
Where did you find this graphic? Are there more like it?
Story: eBooks
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Kevin, Caliboy1991 gave his permission. So I converted all his stories into eBooks and PDF's for you to download. The link (also available in the menu) is: https://jasoncrow.eu/2022/06/calis-ebooks-and-pdfs
Story: eBooks
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Kevin, This story isn't written by me. I just post it on this site. But I asked the original author if it's okay for me to convert his stories to eBooks (and maybe audio books). As soon as I get a reply, I'll let you know.
Story: eBooks
Comment by: Kevin cooper
Hi could you please tell me if lockdown is available on e book and has it got a chapter 6 thank you
Story: 2-D
Comment by:
Nice
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 10
Comment by: We2are1
SWEEET
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 12
Comment by: We2are1
what a wonderful 1st experience for him. and more to cum we hope
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by: Joe36654321
Jason, you are very welcome! And thank you for such a kind response. I appreciate that more than I can express. This is so awesome reading a story like this, and being able to talk about it openly. -Joe
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Joe, Long comment is no problem at all! I like the fact that you put in the effort to reply and express support! So thanks for that. And good to see your second experience was way better than your first. One of the reasons I started writing and the way these stories turn out, is because of my good and wonderful experiences during my exploration. The 'darker' stuff is also too much of a turn-off to me. I don't like it when it's forced or one party has a big form of power over the other (check out my FAQ for more detail). So yeah.. These stories are sweet and often too long, but it also allows a much better connection and more relatability with the characters. So I'm really glad you're enjoying this and thanks for letting me know!
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by: Joe36654321
Loving this story!! Thank you to both of you who put so much time and effort into this. (It’s also rare to read long stories that maintain grammar and spelling! Fantastic job there!!) I’m only on Chapter 6 and I am loving the build-up. And as far as first times for boys, oh how I wish I had something awesome to tell. But I’m among friends here and my first time was at age 11, and it was brutally forced upon me by a jerk of a relative. I never said anything because of the threats to my dog and my parents (all would die if I ever said anything). The good news is that, through a counselor, I was finally able to put it behind me and know that it did not count as my first time. When I was 14, that was my first time with a 28 year old pilot who was not only hot 😁, but he treated me so well and taught me everything, nice and slow and incredibly caring. My first time getting a blow job from him, he swallowed and I was shocked! I think the first thing I said was, “Let’s do that again”. I could only be myself with him behind closed doors because of our stupid laws. Who do you guys think I’d rather see in jail? The one who forcefully raped an 11 year old boy, or a gentle, caring, awesome man who treated me with great respect? In the eyes of the law, they’re both arrestable for the same offenses. How wrong is that?!?! At age 14, I would have made the exact same decision to be with the adult pilot if I were 40 years old, or whatever. He taught me so many things. He helped me train for my pilot’s license and now I’m among the safest in the world because of special training he got me into. As for the family member who did what he did, who cares? LOL But I just wanted to let you know that we all appreciate the fact that you put such a big story together. I’m on “edge” waiting to see what happens next. This is probably a stupid thing to say, but stories like this and similar stories I’m betting happen in real life all the time. But for obvious reasons, nobody can talk about it. I wish the age of consent was lowered to 12 everywhere. That would be INCREDIBLE! I think I’d have a concubine of 12-14 year old boys surrounding me day and night. Ohhhhhh the fantasies I can think of with that one. My comments are sorta long. Please feel free to edit if you need to. I’ll understand. Thanks again. LOVE this website!!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! I appreciate it! I'll make sure to pass it on to E-o-F too. Stay tuned for more, because the next story is already brewing...
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hey Nik, I couldn't agree more! The first time is always special. I'm glad to see I managed to capture that vibe in my story. You're description is spot-on 🙂 🙂 Thanks for reaching out. And you're welcome!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Little Micky
I read the whole of this magnificent story in a day and I loved every word of it! Congratulations, you’ve surpassed yourself.
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by: Nik
Hey Really enjoyed this one. Time of your life at 13/14 as I well know from personal experience. I lost my innocence at 13 with a kid from school who tutored me very well. I still get off to the memories and however much of your story is autobiographical, it was a very hot read. The first time something sexual happens in a boys life is always such a powerful event, never forgotten. I'm glad the mutual enjoyment of fellatio was so beautifully told. I remember thinking the exact same thing when I took Robins dick in my mouth. Sort of "Hmm..it tastes of nothing but skin...I can do this" Thanks again...
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Nik, Thanks for these kind words! Really nice to read responses like these. And don't worry! No plans on stopping yet 🙂
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Nik
Enjoyed every minute I was reading this tale. What beautiful creatures you create. Don’t stop writing!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Ken, Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 19
Comment by: Ken
I loved this from start to finish. I will read the epilog - just because it's there, but, this was a first rate tale and I enjoyed every word.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 18
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Nik, Thanks for these kind words! Stay tuned, because tomorrow I'll post the last chapter and Epilogue...
Story: Holiday Cabin – Part Four
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi John, Unfortunately, there won't be a chapter five. This story isn't written by me and the original author is (at least to me) unknown. I like this one a lot too! The brother and sister playing house with all the bells and whistles in a normal, slow pace... Right up my alley! But it is what it is. I won't write a fifth part, but feel free to do so yourself and I'll put it up here!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 18
Comment by: Nik
Another excellent chapter, filled with beautiful imagery. Becky's first time would be something she'll remember always, no matter how many lovers she has. Your descriptive powers are definitely at their peak in this episode. You could almost feel the tension and the urgency. Loved it!
Story: Holiday Cabin – Part Four
Comment by: John
That ending is very intriguing how long before part five?
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 15
Comment by: BJ M
Lovely diversion to natural carnal impulses. Being completely present in the moment giving and receiving pleasure...
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 5
Comment by: Jason Crow
I'm always interested in reading other author's stories! It's just a little difficult to find the time to do it. So please send the links to me (jasoncrowwriter@hotmail.com or jasoncrowwriter@protonmail.com) and I'll do my best to read them. Thanks!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 15
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Bob, There's nothing wrong with a little imagination 🙂 But I wouldn't mind looking at them in their full glory either... And you're more than welcome! Glad to be of service 😀
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 15
Comment by: Bob
So hot. I see what you mean about that photo. Too bad we cannot see the bodies in the picture also. 😍. Looking down, I nice damp tent in my pants from reading this. Thanks!
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 5
Comment by: BJ M
I have written a couple storie that may interest you? Bisexual/ incest genre. Let me know and I can provide the links. W
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 13
Comment by: BJ M
Audrey is comfortable and in that incredibly sexy period of discovery where EVERYTHING is new and Exciting. Scott is mindful and considerate to remember that Audrey is just beginning her journey. Patience and focusing on her will ensure their mutual pleasure.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 12
Comment by: BJ M
Wonderful captioning of a boy becoming a man in the arms of a beautiful and compassionate woman!!!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 10
Comment by: lickit100
sooooo wonderful when 1st times are sooo loving and caring
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 1
Comment by: Caliboy1991
Thanks for dropping a line on the story. Lockdown was a fun romp to write.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 8
Comment by: lickit100
wow his dream cum true. wonder what is in part I and II
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 7
Comment by: lickit100
think Audrey will become the leader in their journey
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 1
Comment by: Jason Crow
Haha! I can't agree more! I hate it when that happens. You won't find these kind of stories here though.
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 1
Comment by: BJ M
Nice pace and backstory. Good to not always run into a 20 person orgy in paragraph 2. Plausible situation and ready for more!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 5
Comment by: Jason Crow
It is a bit obvious, isn't it?? 🙂 🙂
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 5
Comment by: lickit100
poor Scott wants to honorable but we all know what is to cum
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 5
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! And stay tuned, Brian. There WILL be more! Way more...
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 5
Comment by: Brian
Wonderful. Looking forward to more.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 4
Comment by: lickit100
Glenn is such a loving master seducer. Scott is so lucky. can't wait for Gloria to join in
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 2
Comment by: Jason Crow
And I can imagine the teaching itself is fun too!
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 1
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! The sadness will go away and be replaced by, well... What are you here for? 🙂
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 2
Comment by: lickit100
soo much better to have someone teach you how.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 1
Comment by: lickit100
well presented but sad start.
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 1
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! Keep an eye on the site for the days/weeks to come! (Or subscribe to the email notification 🙂 )
Story: La Isla de Aquinas – Chapter 1
Comment by: Jessie
Congrats on the story. It had a good opening. The dual timeline aspect seems interesting.
Story: A small preview
Comment by: Jason Crow
Well... It's done!! Chapter one is live. I just press the 'publish' button. Eighteen more to come, so stay tuned 😀 Thanks for your patience!
Story: Dear Diary – Chapter 1
Comment by: Gregory
So cute. 😍
Story: Dear Diary – Chapter 1
Comment by: caliboy1991
Thanks for checking out my story. Always love it when my stories give people pleasure while reading them. 🙂
Story: Dear Diary – Chapter 5
Comment by: lickit100
wow soooo loving so wonderfully LOVING. thank you
Story: Dear Diary – Chapter 1
Comment by: lickit100
lovely beginnings. beginnings of innocent love
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 5
Comment by: greg
"for girls to enjoy?" these are the stories i (guy) LOVE i cannot get enough and theres few and far in between.. we (people who like these) should really make a telegram chatroom or something.
Story: A small preview
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! I know that. But it's really frustrating! I want to publish this gem, but I learned the hard way that I need to finish it first. Otherwise it'll only take me (a lot) longer. But I'm on the homestretch now, so I just hope that'll push me enough to finish it.
Story: A small preview
Comment by: Jessie
No worries. Even the best penmen get writer's block. You will figure it out.
Story: A small preview
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Jessie, I'm very sorry. But the update is that there really isn't an update. I've got three -ish chapters left, but my creative juices stopped flowing. I promise I'll finish it, but both work, life my mindset, unfortunately, aren't on the same page here...
Story: A small preview
Comment by: Jessie
Hi Jason. Any updates on this story?
Story: The Treehouse – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
I can only agree! It's a very good story and the characters Cali created are extremely likable and adorable. I'll make sure to pass the compliment to Cali!
Story: The Treehouse – Epilogue
Comment by:
Fantastic story! I fell in love with the characters their innocence and love for each other! Definitely one of if not the best story I’ve read. Thank you!
Story: A small preview
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Jessie, Thanks! I'm making progress, so stay tuned 🙂
Story: A small preview
Comment by: Jessie
Looks great! Can't wait for the whole story.
Story: A small preview
Comment by: Edward-or-Ford
It's going to be a really good story, with or without my chapter! (Regardless, thank you for the compliment, Jason. It was fun to get back into writing after a long hiatus, and I think my chapter came out very well. Glad you agree!) E-o-F
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 8
Comment by:
Pretty short chapter, especially considering this was the ending of the story. That being said though I still think this was a nice enough ending for the story since all the characters are at a good place.
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 7
Comment by:
For how much build-up the race got, it was over and done with rather quickly. That being said though the fact that Aiden and Wendy finally had sex was something I was really happy about. It was unfortunate to see the state Aiden's nana but at the very least there is some hope for Aiden if she dies.
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 6
Comment by:
And the physical exploration just keeps on getting better.
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 5
Comment by:
The relationship between these two certainly progressed by Leaps and Bounds during this chapter. I'm also happy that you like my comments.
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 4
Comment by: Jason Crow
It's great to see all these comments! User engagement is important. At least according to marketing folks 😀 Just kidding. Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 4
Comment by:
This chapter was longer than usual but considering all that went on here that's understandable.
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 3
Comment by:
The whole shower episode certainly did a good job of bringing these two even closer.
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 2
Comment by:
The timeskip was certainly a bit risky but I think it was handled well since it allowed for both characters to have a good sense of familiarity with each other.
Story: The Best of Friends – Chapter 1
Comment by:
A rather solid start. From the looks of things, our two protagonists have some difficulties to deal with and those are the things that brought them together.
Story: Getting Laid in the Badlands
Comment by:
Not a bad story. The twins were pretty amusing though.
Story: Four Kids, One Bed
Comment by:
Nice little story of love and friendship.
Story: All Your Basement Are Belong to Us
Comment by:
The title for the story was certainly an odd one but I thoroughly enjoyed it. Seeing all the boys get a chance with all the girls was very nice and I like how Trevor got his younger siblings started on sex like he did. Plus tricking the twins in order to get their silence was a smart move in my opinion. However there were still some issues I had was a story. Namely, the with ending with no attempt to follow it up as well as the fact that apparently Meghan was pregnant. That was a rather odd choice in my opinion. Still like reading this story though.
Story: Screwing at School – Part 2
Comment by:
The addition of Dale and Eric was certainly an in one since it allows for our two protagonists the chance to expand their horizons.
Story: Screwing at School – Part 1
Comment by:
This part was really a bit basic but it certainly does a good job when it comes to setting things up.
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part three
Comment by:
Makes sense.
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part two
Comment by:
That was nice to know! Glad you liked this.
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part three
Comment by: Jason Crow
I see what you mean, but I like to give you, the reader, the opportunity to imagine what happens after my story ends. I'm not too fond about chewing it all out in an Epilogue. I'm sure that all of you have a vivid imagination, and are perfectly capable of imagining a suitable follow-up that fits your own liking. So that's why I don't explain everything.
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part two
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for these detailed comments!! I really appreciate this, because I think it makes me a better writer and storyteller. I never thought about that little lie in the hot tub, but now that you mention it... I missed that one, and I think you're right. Keven shouldn't be able to lie. I'm not changing the story though. I like it just the way it is, with all the flaws it has. When I look back at my earlier work, it makes me embarrassed at some points. But it also makes me realize the growth I've been through. So that's why I rather not change my old stories. Glad you liked it! This was, in fact, the first story I wrote completely on my own. Guess I did something right back then 🙂
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part three
Comment by:
Seduction was the name of the game in this chapter. I was really impressed with how well you develop Logan as well as the siblings. The ending itself was pretty decent but I wish that you had mentioned what happened with Logan too.
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part two
Comment by:
It was a decent follow-up. I like the fact that Laura was feeling guilty about what she did to her brother and decided to confess and even though I find it a little bit too convenient that Kevin is okay with it, at the very least you came up with a good solution. Another thing I liked was the fact that you were addressed the possibility of Laura getting pregnant. The reason why she's on the pill makes sense and I also like the additional information you gave us to why she shaves her pubes. However one thing that really stood out to me was Kevin's little lie in the hot tub, I think he really shouldn't be able to lie still. That being said though, you did a good job.
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part one
Comment by:
Pretty good start and I agree with the length since it really allowed you to escalate things between the siblings at a good pace. The Pendulum was an interesting find and I liked the rhyme. Also the way you had Laura do some shows was a nice addition as well. Overall this was a good start.
Story: The Winter of 1884
Comment by: Jason Crow
This one (and Love in Levittown) was posted by Alex, right before he ended his site and his writing. They were both included in the .zip file he posted for a few days, containing (almost) all of his stories. So you can say I got it from the master himself 🙂
Story: The Winter of 1884
Comment by: Deni
Where did you find this? I've never read it before.
Story: Love in Levittown
Comment by: Deni
Where did you find this?
Story: Fit to be Thaied
Comment by:
Not a bad story about a father helping his son lose his virginity. Plus I'm sure Taran's friends liked the fact that Mary was shared.
Story: All Dressed Up
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for these kind words! Let me explain two things: 1. The addition at the end, to me, feels stitched-on. I'm not saying it's a bad (sex) scene, but if I'm honest, the story ends inside the suit. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!! 2. I literally googled 'weird names for kids' and came up with these names. Why? Because they're celebrity kids and celebrities give their kids weird names. I do agree, though. Naming your kid Envy... Oh boy. Better brace yourself 😀
Story: All Dressed Up
Comment by:
This was a good story. You really nailed the siblings' dynamic and the sex was handled beautifully. This is the first time I've seen sex on stage like this and you impressed me with the execution. The scene afterwards was a nice addition as well. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more from these twins even if their names are a bit odd. Zolo I can more or less get but who names their daughter Envy? That's just asking for issues later on.
Story: College Guys – Chapter Four
Comment by: Jason Crow
I'm personally not too big of a fan of this story. I can see why Alex more or less abandoned it. I won't be the one expanding it either. Simply because I'm not invested in it. But with 'A year in the life of Madisone Semmes', someone else finished it and wrote the final chapter. And the same applies here. If you, or anyone else, think you can expand the story, please feel free to do so!! Send it to me and I'll post it as an addition to the original chapters.
Story: Lubrican
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Jessie, Thanks! I like your comparison 🙂 I do think they're two different stories too. But I don't want to be that guy that's known for ripping off stories from others. Mostly because I'm not 😀
Story: College Guys – Chapter Four
Comment by: Jessie
I agree. College Guys is one of my favorite Alex stories. Has been for a while. But I guess Alex didn't really like it since he stopped writing it. Chapter 4 was kind of short and quick as well. Maybe someone could pick it up and expand on it.
Story: Lubrican
Comment by: Jessie
I just read both stories. Sure, they have similarities but they also have significant differences. It was like watching Gone in 60 Seconds and The Fast and the Furious back to back.
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 5
Comment by: Jason Crow
I couldn't agree more!! The Slasher / Torture analogy is spot-on IMHO. You can think about, but acting on it, is always wrong. I'm not judging Joe here! Not at all!! I feel his pain and I can relate to his struggles too. I fantasize about these things too. And then I write it down, so it's out of my system. To me, this is a way to cope with it, although I don't feel the yearning to do anything with it so strongly. Yes, I like looking at a handsome, boxer or swimsuit-clad, thirteen-year-old boy or girl!! I like looking at them a lot! But I don't feel the urge to undress him or her, or have sex. That idea pops into my head later when I let my mind drift. I imagine how it would be, and make up a potential backstory which sporadically make it to my site. But that's pretty much it. The forbidden part of such act, is also an issue. Some, if not most, people get their kicks from doing something illegal. I compare it a bit with the cookie jar when I was younger. When my mom told me I couldn't have one, I was mad. But when I secretly stole one and ate it, it tasted amazing. The next day, when I was allowed to take one, the cookie wasn't all that great; the added tension of doing something naughty was gone. I'm afraid that something like this is true for the issue we're discussing here. I don't see myself as a pedophile, but as a Hebephile. Although it's not an official acclaimed term, the Wikipedia page with the description suits me way better than the term pedophile. In essence, this difference doesn't matter. No matter how you look at it, they're both bad things to act on. We know what we are and that we are wired this way. But the main reason for us not to act on it, should be the intrinsic motivation to not act. The motivation shouldn't be the potential punishment and awful jail time. To keep up with the horror agologie, I like reading a good psychological horror thriller! To me, it's the same as reading stories like the ones on my site. I can't write horror stories, but I can write about the things I like. I enjoy a nice, civil discussion about this as much as any. So please, feel free to react!
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 5
Comment by: Edward-or-Ford
@Joe Cool I commend you on being completely upfront about the things that make many of us tick. Your comment is a testimony of the frustration that likely afflicts more people than will ever admit, and speaking about these feelings in a forum, even anonymously, is kind of hard to do. Like you, I seem to have little attraction to adult men or women. It isn't just that I don't prefer mature physical bodies, it's also the "maturity" of adults' personalities is much less alluring to me than the comparative innocence of children. I don't doubt that the thrill of engaging in sexual behaviour as a child, given its "forbidden" quality, would be very intense, and I very much desire the ability to know what underage sexuality is like, up close and personal. To see, hear, feel, smell, and taste the experience, completely ... it would be a dream come true. That said, I have to argue the "other side" of this frustration, and how a fellow pedophile views this struggle. Personally, I agree with all current laws (and social stigma) that forbids adults from interacting sexually with children. With the obvious exception for things like an 18-year-old should be able to be with a 17-year-old, there are simply too many risks of abuse and coercion when an adult and a child have a sexual relationship. I'm sure it's true that many children could (and do) participate in fully consensual relationships with adults, relationships that don't harm the children currently or in the future. But the existence of these examples cannot be allowed to grant permission for such relationships to be legitimized or legalized. There is simply too much evidence of it being generally a very bad idea. Far too many children are scarred by being subjected to sexual activity that they were unprepared for, and lack the maturity to handle well. It's bad enough when such damage occurs between children, but at least in that case all parties were similarly unprepared and ignorant of how to behave in a sexual context. There's no excuse when it is an adult who is prioritizing his/her own pleasure above the safety and well-being of a child. Just because we are wired this way, to feel sexual pleasure only from children and not from adults, does not ever give us the right to indulge in pursuing this pleasure. To draw an analogy, imagine you are an extreme sadist, that you only experience pleasure from torturing and dismembering someone who is screaming in pain the entire time. You are not permitted in any sane society to experience this pleasure, even if you found someone who consented to (and even claimed to desire) that outcome. I view my urge to be a cross that I must bear, and frankly so must you. I read (and occasionally write) fictional erotica in this realm because I enjoy it, and I stoutly oppose any attempts to restrict the legality of this form of free speech. Fictional stories are a form of escapism for us, no different from someone who reads a slasher horror story, and is not transformed into a serial killer in real life. But participation in any form of "real" child porn (including possession) is, IMHO, always unjustifiable. It sucks that this limits our ability to engage in a sexually pleasurable life that most other people take for granted, but it is what it is. I hope you can make peace with that fact. I don't think it's wise to be yearning for the day that you could finally have sex with a young boy, if not for the simple reason that you fear the consequences of being punished for doing so. E-o-F
Story: College Guys – Chapter Four
Comment by:
This was certainly an interesting story. Too bad there isn't more.
Story: Update
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Alex, Thanks! And yeah, I'm alive and kicking! So stay tuned for more stories! Currently going strong with a new one. I expect it to be done in a month or two. It'll be around the same size as 'Smoky Mountains'.
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 5
Comment by: Joe Cool
Wow! So much happened to bring us to this first time. I can picture it in my mind, but I can't imagine what it must be like to have sex with an awesome ten-year-old boy like Jem. I think there are so many of us men out here in internet-land that get relief by jacking off to these stories and reading some of our favorite parts over and over again. I had a huge bolt of pleasure run through me in this chapter near the end when Jack said that what was done was done, and he could not undo the molestation. It's hot to read that because the thought of masturbating a ten-year-old boy's cock, knowing that it's molestation and you could get caught, makes it super risky but also super sexy. I wish we could do these things, but in a nice way like Jack is and without hurting anyone. Just think of what it would be like to meet a ten-year-old boy and bring him home to fuck that same night. And have it all be completely legal. Nice, hot, tight pre-teen asses and total smoothness between their legs. How fun would it be to drive around with your 10 or 11-year-old boyfriend naked? Drive down the road with that young, hot mouth sucking on awesome adult cocks, and his beautiful little boy body---totally naked----laying across the seat with his ass sticking up while he masturbates himself and gives head at the same time. And then the grand finale: Having the boyfriend take the adult boyfriend bareback in his ass. When the man is finished cumming inside him, he pulls out sees the gaping hole his giant cock left in the kid's ass, as his stretched hole leaks cum. I'd go down on his ass right there on the spot and clean up my cum with my tongue and mouth, and then flip him over and give him a nice, deep, cum-kiss where we swap my cum and our combined spit back and forth a few times until the boy asks for it all because he wants it inside him. But all of that, of course, is fantasyland. I wish it wasn't. Maybe someday the age of consent will be lowered to 14 and there won't be restrictions on us like there are now. Does anyone out there who is reading this now, understand why we love boys? I would love to hear from someone about what their life is like. My life has been phony for as long as I can recall. I just say that I'm gay to keep away the friends who try to set me up with women. Then I get asked why I'm not dating men if I'm gay? How do I answer that? How do you guys answer it? I can't date women or men--it does nothing for me. But I can't take my eyes off of middle school and high school boys. I've never touched one and I've never come close to touching one. The punishment is so severe that life would become useless and so very difficult. It's hard enough now! But sites like this (thank you, thank you, thank you!) allow me to read these stories and pretend it's me sucking on a kid's 3-inch cock. And I would give almost anything to give a blowjob to a middle school student with a perfect body, circumcised 5-inch penis, "whispies" only, and the ability to shoot a good load. I wonder what it feels like to have a kid cum in your mouth? Or another fantasy that works for me also. I'd pay anything to be able to watch two 6th or 7th graders have sex. No condoms, full-on bareback sex between a boy and a girl. And to be able to watch him put his middle-school cock into the immature pussy of his 6th-grade classmate. Just picture that young ass bouncing up and down as his bare cock goes in and out of a 6th-grade girl's pussy. Heck, that's common these days with kids recording everything they do on their phones. If I only knew how to get a copy of a video like that! Or any visual stimuli to maybe satisfy my urges, but I can't risk it which is why I love the stories on these Jason Crow pages. Thank you so much! And thank you for allowing me to write what I've been thinking for years. I know that there are lots of others out there just like me, and we live pretty crappy lives. Not because of money or status---I'm fine in that department. But I am a human being who will go through life with this incredibly strong urge that I can never do anything about. It is torture. Absolute torture. Thank you for allowing me to comment, and I hope that maybe someone liked the little blurb that I wrote here and it gave you a few minutes of pleasure and relief. That would be cool! Thanks.
Story: Update
Comment by: Alex
Hi Jason! I had your page bookmarked for months but never got around to give it a look (I think I got if from Nifty), now I took the time and I'm so glad I did! So many HOT stories! Also, I'm so glad to find such a recent entry on your page, is great to see you're alive and kicking (it's so sad seeing so many pages dead/dying).
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 5
Comment by: Caliboy
Hi Smoothgrl, Glad you enjoyed my story. I want my characters to be relatable to both girls and guys. A lot of my stories deal with boys and older girls or boys and their moms. Dunno why... just a kink I have. I hope you enjoy more of mine, Jason's and Alex's stuff.
Story: Hannah and Her Brothers
Comment by: Jason Crow
Unfortunately Alex never wrote a second part. And to be honest, I don't think I ever will. But I do like this story very much! Lovely buildup with awesome results 🙂
Story: Hannah and Her Brothers
Comment by:
Really liked this story. Is there a part 2 or did he not get a chance to write it?
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 5
Comment by: X smoothgrl X
A wonderful, erotic, sexy story. I loved the build up, the background story, actual characters that had 'real world' thoughts, worries, desires. After complaining to a friend online that there are not really good erotic stories for girls to enjoy, he gave me the link to this story. Am so glad he did, I totally enjoyed it, HAD to read it through in one sitting. Thanks for taking the time and sharing your talent.
Story: Viaglis
Comment by: lickit100
sweet wonder how they progressed as they got older. one sweet older sisteer
Story: Viaglis
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! Glad you liked it. Nothing much of a story, but still pretty decent imho.
Story: Viaglis
Comment by: Seam
Great story Jason, loved it. Sweet & tender and smooth all round. Well done. S
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 1
Comment by:
sweet innocent start
Story: Lockdown – Chapter 5
Comment by: David Smith
Very hot story, loved the buildup, and the mild dom/sub angle. I hope you continue the story.
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi, J. You're right about that. But I still feel it added much needed drama to the story. Check out 'Indian Summer'<a href="https://jasoncrow.eu/indian-summer">Indian Summer</a> for a gay only story. In my next one, I promise there's more gay stuff. M/b, but also b/b. As for Smokey Mountains, nothing more to do about it and I stand by my choice. I'm sorry if you don't like it because of that. Just stay tuned for more, and I hope I won't disappoint you then 🙂
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: J
I still say killing Ryan made that a straight sex story there was no gay sex just 1 jo session between a man and boy then just boy on girl for the rest of the story
Story: Brad and Jesse
Comment by: Art
A very nice story
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 10
Comment by: Jason Crow
Couldn't agree more!
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 10
Comment by: MaryL
I'm happy for them.
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Dino, Yeah... I heard that a lot 😀 I had my reasons to kill Ryan (funny thing to write... usually this would mean trouble). But I understand why you, the reader, like Ryan so much. I like him a lot too, but it was a conscious decision to let him go Sorry for that, but it had to be done. Glad to see you liked it! I write mostly for myself. But when I get this much positive feedback, it makes me pride and gives me a lot of energy to keep going. So, thanks for reaching out and for providing your honest opinion! Have fun re-reading 🙂 🙂
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Dino
Loved your story and every chapter. Except.... Ryan was my favorite and I wanted more with him and adam. But I understand. Will definitely re read this again one day 🙂
Story: Confession of a Boy Lover – Chapter 10
Comment by: Rick
Wonderful story.
Story: A weeping heart
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi John, A little follow-up... Yes. They kissed and made-up. Well, not actually kissed, but you know what I mean 🙂 In her own words, she told him there was nothing wrong with him and that she still wanted to be friends. She also said sorry for her hurtful words, which he accepted. I'm not saying everything is okay now. Little Johnny still has to deal with the fact he's a girl inside a boy's body. At least that's what it seems like at the moment. I hate the fact that you already know the kid's in for a hell of a journey in life. I wish I could help him with that, but it is something he needs to figure out on his own. I didn't post an actual follow-up on the site, because I don't want to be all political and woke and stuff. But since you're asking...
Story: A weeping heart
Comment by: John
Hope your daughter can find it in her heart to tell him that he is still a good person and nothing is "wrong" with him. Maybe even remain friends. Hate the thought that someone that young feels worthless.
Story: Helpless for the Summer – Chapter 9
Comment by: Jason Crow
Glad you liked it! I'll send your comments to Cali (the author). Maybe drop him an email to express your gratitude? 🙂 It's caliboy1991@protonmail.com. I'm positive he'd appreciate it!
Story: Helpless for the Summer – Chapter 9
Comment by: lickit100
AWESOME simply AWESOME. the seduction the hesitant exploring and then the sex with mom soooo LOVING thank you
Story: Helpless for the Summer – Chapter 7
Comment by: lickit100
AWESOME his first taste of pussy and it is his mom. such an AWESOME experience
Story: Helpless for the Summer – Chapter 5
Comment by: lickit100
I still remember the first time mom touched my cock she was soo loving sooo gentle. i got hard sooo fast and shot sooo soon. damn she had such a velvet touch.
Story: Helpless for the Summer – Chapter 4
Comment by: lickit100
mom WANTS him
Story: Helpless for the Summer – Chapter 1
Comment by: lickit100
nice innocent start
Story: Caliboy1991 has his own place
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Jay, E-o-F's works can be found here: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Edward_or_Ford. I asked him about it, and he doesn't find his stories suitable to publish on jasoncrow.eu. The stories he published up until now is Fanfiction about Dipper and Mabel (Gravity Falls). Don't mix it up with parody like I did at first!! It's nowhere near a parody! There are several AU's (alternative Universes) with different stories. I honestly had to get over the idea of reading about them, but after I did and read the quality of E-o-F's work, I liked it a lot. So check it out!! Cali's work is different. There's some dark stuff he wrote, but also a lot of really nice and heartwarming stuff. I'm not a fan of the darker stuff. I read bits of it on some darker places on the web and not all of it is finished (yet). So we decided to post the 'nicer' stories up here. He writes mostly b/W or b/G stories, which isn't exactly my style. So I think it's a nice addition to the stories already out here. Cali also posted some stuff on Nifty, so you can check that out too. A bit of a long reply. But hey! You asked for it 🙂
Story: Caliboy1991 has his own place
Comment by: Jay R.
Do you have links to where E-o-F and caliboy’s other works are? I love all of your writings, and trying to search for them didn’t yield any results. I am glad to see that your site is growing too.
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Jay
A good story. A different story. One with an epilogue and not continued chapters taking us where we knew it would go. I’m fine with that. This story travels the line of what would have to happen after a population decimating event. Using SHIVR made it easy to skirt by the issues a human would have to deal with in a slower and more unreliable way. But it does give a good argument for AI. Well written, good job!
Story: Smoky Mountains
Comment by: Jason Crow
Good to see you liked it! I'm happy all the effort I put into it paid off. Stay tuned for more, but don't expect anything in the near future. It'll take me a little while to get started again.
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Roberto, Glad you like the story! And you're not alone about Ryan 😀 In my mind he lives on...
Story: Smoky Mountains
Comment by:
Jason, Congrats on finishing this Great story! Thank you for you efforts and hard work! I personaly cant wait for what you will write next! Be good. AnonP
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Roberto
Great story man, I loved it EXCEPT for the death of Ryan... that has been a really hard punch in the guts... Thank you anyway, you have been pardoned!!!
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks a lot, Mike! It sure was a hell of an effort. But as I mentioned in my closing notes, I did it primarily to show myself I could do it. A lot of people liking it a very nice added bonus and a great motivation to continue. And now that all the (mostly) positive feedback is coming in, a sense of pride is undeniably there... I'm taking a little time out, although the first lines of my next story are already written.
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Edward-or-Ford
You're welcome, and no problem! 🙂 E-o-F
Story: Smoky Mountains – Epilogue
Comment by: Mike
JC, Great story. As I mentioned before I couldn't wait for you to release the next chapters. I was shocked when the story ended so abruptly but after reading the epilogue it was fine. You brought great closure to the entire story. Can't wait for the next stories (nine months is one hell of an effort). Keep on writing, you're really good at it.
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 19
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks for being this patient, Jay! 😀
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 19
Comment by: Jay
We will forgive you this once, only because we know you will double up in the next chapter. 👍🏼
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 14
Comment by: Jay
Just incredibly exciting and erotic!
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 21
Comment by: Tom
Jason You outdid yourself. Sitting here trying to work and I take a look and read this chapter. I felt like I got the vaccination in this chapter. I got uncomfortably hard and had to go upstairs to take care of my cock as I was leaking precum It felt good to release Thanks for the morning treat Tom
Story: Smoky Mountains
Comment by: Jason Crow
Later today, I'll post two new chapters. Hang in there 🙂
Story: Smoky Mountains
Comment by: AnonP
Oh common Jason, Keep um comming, im gagging to read the rest of the chapters ! Like i said before, its such a great story.
Story: Smoky Mountains
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks Tom. And you're welcome! Glad you like it.
Story: Smoky Mountains
Comment by: Tom
I love this series! Great story line and amazing writing. Thanks for doing this
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 18
Comment by: Tom
I think I need a cold shower (or a warm one where I can “release”). 😀. Oh if only Elle were here.....
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 18
Comment by: Jason Crow
I'm sorry! It's almost like a drug, isn't it? You just have to keep coming back for more 🙂 Just two more days. Hang in there. Maybe read some of the other stories to prevent withdrawal?
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 18
Comment by: Tom
Jason Way to build up the suspense. Now I have to wait a couple of more days! Tom
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 16
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks Tom! It was great to be away for a few days. We've passed the halfway point of the story now. I won't spoil anything about how the story is going to develop. But since you like it this far, I'm positive you'll enjoy the rest. Stay tuned for more fun!!
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 16
Comment by: Tom
Welcome back from holiday I like how you are now bringing the two groups together. I do wonder how you will wrap this up in another 10 chapters...... The growing closeness of each “couple” is developing nicely. Of course imagining what they all look like naked enhances this development. 😀 Looking forward to continued chapters Tom
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 12
Comment by: Jason Crow
Good to see you're enjoying the story! I was a bit worried about the location / character switching at first. But I figured once you're past the first 6-8 chapters, you'll get the idea. According to your comment, I'm right 🙂 Thanks for the kind words and stay tuned for more!
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 12
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks, Tom! Good to see you're having fun! Stay tuned for more...
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 12
Comment by: AnonP
Jason! omg, this story is great! It is so well written, the plot is crazy rad. And all the characters discribed so good in not to many words. I had to get used to the switching of the locations and characters, but i got it lol Only one flaw, the chapters can not come quick enough!! Greetings, An Avid reader
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 12
Comment by: Tom
Wow. 2 more great chapters. Ellie’s curiosity is exciting and it will be interesting how he and she progress Two thumbs up (and something else is now up)
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 8
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks Tom! Glad you're liking it! Not too upset with the latest development, I hope? 😀 The way it's going now, I'll probably manage one or two chapters every second day. Saw the subscription come by indeed. That's the best and easiest way to stay up to date. Hope you'll like the rest of the story too.
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 8
Comment by: Tom
I was not expecting this. This story is great. Just subscribed and cannot wait to read it all
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 8
Comment by: Jason Crow
Glad you like it! Stay tuned for more. I hope to post one or two chapters every two days. If you want to be the first to read it, just leave your Email address in the right column (or at the bottom for mobile users) under 'Subscribe'. I solemnly swear to only use it for new story additions and not for spam!
Story: Smoky Mountains – Chapter 8
Comment by: Jay
Omgggggg wow!! Great story. Can’t wait for more chapters. This is one hot story.
Story: Massage in a Bottle
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks, Mark!! Glad you like it 🙂
Story: Massage in a Bottle
Comment by: Mark
This story is so hot!
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part Four
Comment by: Jessie
I agree with you completely. Everything about this story was great. The way the relationship developed between the characters was excellent. The sex scenes were amazing. But the ending left much to be desired. I really wanted to know what each activity was and what they did to achieve it. Did Mason warm up to the idea of having fingers in his butt? One thing I was imagining that the kids would have to produce their own porn video that would be shown to the next group of kids experimented on. What happened to their relationships with their parents? Did they return to their normal lives to find out that videos of their sexcapdes were released on the internet and watched by their classmates, friends and neighbors?
Story: Welcome to the Jason Crow website!
Comment by: Charlie
Jason, I found this story very intriguing, two boys learning about love and sex in a most innocent (Okay, maybe not that innocent) way brings back memories of my youth. By the way, we weren't that innocent either. but as they say, boys will be boys. I hope you will add to this story at some point, but if you decide you won't, at least it was a story that caught my attention. thanks for the story and hope to read some more of your stuff again soon.
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Tarzan, Glad you enjoyed it! I liked writing it a lot. Hate to say it, but I don't think there will be another part. Maybe, just maybe another part with Pete's sister in the mix, but I wouldn't hold my breath if I were you 🙂 And if there's another one, there will be loincloths, but no forced milking or such. Not my thing. Sorry. I still hope you like my stories though.
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by: Tarzan
Enjoyed a cumming of age, sexual awakening. The associated photo reminds me of a much simpler time, when boys can explore their sexuality at there own pace. I hope you'll continue their journey, with an initiation to bondage games (https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/highschool/tied-up-prisoner), edging, and forced milkings. I always had a fetish for tarzan, loincloths, and bondage games. Will Pete, and Ron start/continue their adventure in the woods, with their imagination in the african jungle? I hope so...
Story: All Dressed Up
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Jim, Thanks for pointing it out! And you're right. I honestly never read this story, but I agree it's painfully similar. I'll reach out to Beating Off Bob and let him know about this. I'll let him decide if I can keep it up here, or need to take it down because of all the similarities. Hope you still liked it, though...
Story: All Dressed Up
Comment by: Jim
Very similar to https://www.asstr.org/~Kristen/38/horsing.txt
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks! I'm also quite pleased about how it turned out. I wouldn't hold my breath if I were you for part four, though :). Right now I'm deep into another story. But I do want to bring Maya in the mix one way or another. And I will most likely end the fear of butts too! Up until now the story is mostly autobiographical. Part four will not, so I'm still doubting a bit. I'm not saying there won't be a part four, but I need to find an angle for myself to make it interesting. Just keep an eye out for new material, and maybe sometime in the near future, it'll be part four.
Story: Indian Summer – Part three
Comment by:
It was great reading a gay storie again. This one is so cute, I hope you’ll decide to write more parts, especially if they’ll get over their fear of butts XD
Story: What do YOU think?
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Joe, Thank you for your ideas! I'll definitely take them in consideration. But, to be completely honest, I'm not an orgy-writing type of guy. I think it's too unbelievable with kids that age. But if the situation is right, it probably isn't. They're all self-conscious, but when de dam breaks... But, I DO want to try it once, though. So maybe your premise will put me on the right track. Thanks for sharing!! I really appreciate it.
Story: What do YOU think?
Comment by: Joe
I've always wanted to read a story about middle school kids receiving sex education in the classroom. Boys and girls together in the same room. The teacher does the usual stuff with boring films, but then says she needs volunteers for live demonstrations. The popular girls volunteer as do the popular boys---the jocks. But since they're only in middle school, these 7th graders only have whispies for pubes and they get a lesson from the female teacher (who is a young babe) on staying clean and smooth and shows the class how boys and girls can shave their pubes to stay nice and smooth. All of this creates lots of hard-ons for the boys and lots of wet vaginas for the girls. The teacher then demos hands-on on how to pleasure a boy and gives a 7th grader head, and it continues on from there. Girls make boys ejaculate and before you know it, everybody is doing everybody. A kid even sits on a bench outside the classroom totally naked and gets warmed by the sun. A naked 13-year-old girl, freshly shaved smooth, goes down on him right there for anyone to see. A fantasy that would be so awesome if it ever happened. And in the 8th-grade class, they learn advanced sex ed, and the school teaches girls how to blow a boy and take all of his cum in her mouth, then get up and give the boy a totally sloppy cum kiss where they swap his cum back and forth as they kiss. I love the thought of reading a story like this! And thank you for everything you do. These stories are awesome!
Story: All Dressed Up
Comment by: E-o-F
A pleasure to help out. This is an enjoyable bit of erotica, and I'm happy to have assisted with your editing. It was well worth the effort. Thanks for the story!
Story: A weeping heart
Comment by: E.
Sad event for sure, but also a good lesson that could be taught/learned. Most important just to treat people with kindness. Everyone is going through something.
Story: What do YOU think?
Comment by: E.
There's also very few stories on pregnancy progression too. Would be nice to see a story that goes through that.
Story: What do YOU think?
Comment by: Damon
Would love to read some stories about bodybuilding or kids competing in a bodybuilding contest
Story: Massage in a Bottle
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi E, Of course you may ask. I'm from a non-English speaking, European country. Just as I wrote in the FAQ page 🙂 I'm sorry. But I need to shield my personal situation from my alter-ego. I'm not doing anything wrong or illegal, but I still want to keep a distance between my real and online life. If you want to, you can guess, but you won't hear it from me 😀
Story: Massage in a Bottle
Comment by: E.
Cool! I look forward to it. May I ask what country you're from? Just curious and that's the most I'd ever ask on that subject. I'm from the United States. New York state specifically.
Story: Massage in a Bottle
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi E, Thanks for your comment. And I agree with you! Bullied is still my personal favorite of my own stories. There's another story coming which is, the way I see it at least, between Massage in a Bottle and Bullied to Buff. Story-wise that is. So, stay tuned for more stories
Story: Massage in a Bottle
Comment by: E.
Pretty good! Bullied to Buff was better but this was still a most enjoyable read. Thanks!
Story: Bullied to Buff
Comment by: Joe in WA
Indeed! Can't wait to read the new story. You definitely have talent. Thank you so much for the "hard" work involved here! Bullied to Buff is so hot hot hot!!
Story: Bullied to Buff
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Joe, Thanks! Happy to provide something hot in these cold times 🙂 My newest story is almost finished, so keep coming back for more. A way healthier addiction than drugs. That's for sure...
Story: Bullied to Buff
Comment by: Joe in WA
Awesome story! I couldn’t stop reading it, and read several areas again! The first time they go all the way and the description of the tip of his big dick going in is sooooo hot! Great job! And now I see you’ve got other stories with topics I like. My new favorite webpage. 😁 Thank you!
Story: Bullied to Buff – All parts online
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks!
Story: Bullied to Buff – All parts online
Comment by: E.
Great story. I enjoyed it. Thanks.
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part Two
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi David, Thanks for the feedback! I'm pleased to know you like it. And good for you! I hope you didn't have the issues with it, the way Wyatt did 😉 Stay tuned, Part three is right around the corner. I'm guessing it'll be online this weekend.
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part Two
Comment by: David Smith
Good build-up, can't wait for more. Also, I didn't mention in my last comment, my dick was the same size as Wyatt's at that age, your research was good and solid.
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part One
Comment by: David
Love the story, very hot writing. I like reading about young kids weightlifting and working out.
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part Two
Comment by: Edward-or-Ford
I love a nice slow-burn story. Excellent work, looking forward to Part 3! E-o-F
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part One
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thank you very much, E-o-F! This is exactly the kind of feedback I'm looking for. And you are absolutely right. I purposely searched the boundaries with Wyatt's penis size. I searched online for credible sizes, and this was about as high as I dared to go. I needed to find a way to get both of them in the gym. And to do that, the bullying came to mind first. But why he was bullied, took me a bit longer. Eventually I came up with this 'issue'. I'm not a big fan of big penisses on boys this age, but I'm not totally against it either :). It's just as you say, as long as it's not ludicrously large (an 11 year old with his big seven incher, shooting loads of cum...), I can get away with it. That's why I did some research to come up with a more or less believable size. So, thanks for the great feedback and stay tuned for the next parts!
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part One
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks, E! Appreciate it. Keep checking the site, because it won't be long until the next part is released.
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part One
Comment by: Edward-or-Ford
A really nice start! Good use of the narrator's voice to get the reader invested in his story and understand his feelings. His perspective shows how much he genuinely cares for and loves his sister (non-romantically) at the outset, and that's important. I think he could have told us a little bit more about his sister beyond her background of abuse (such as what she likes, how she's similar to / different from her brother), but that's a minor gripe. Overall, I *like* your young siblings, and that's what's important. The sexy scene also does not disappoint. There's a nice believable pacing to Wyatt's reactions. The events that take place to lead to the act of masturbation feel authentic. I'll even forgive the trope of "overly well endowed boy" in this case because: a) his size isn't ludicrously out of the realm of possibility; and b) it serves a plot point that drives the story forward. I look forward to what comes next. E-o-F
Story: Bullied to Buff – Part One
Comment by: E.
Very nice! Looking forward to the next part.
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 11 – March
Comment by: Pete
The girl you selected is terrific! The others are sort of stale.
Story: Chasing Colt – Chapter Four – Tyler’s Tale
Comment by: Rob
I loved this chapter!! The interruptions were the best! So funny!
Story: Brad and Jesse
Comment by: Rob
That was a very sweet story! I loved it!
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part three
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks a lot for your kind words! It's making me blush 🙂 One of my main focus points in my story is to keep it as real as possible in these unusual situations. I'm not a big fan of stories where, after their first or second time of sex, they're already into double penetration, cream pie and huge orgies. So I guess this is also true for the hypnosis in this story. No normal person would go over the top in this situation I reasoned. Thanks for noticing! I've indeed paid extra attention to the grammar and typo's. It's encouraging to read that this paid off. Keep an eye on the site, because I've already started a new story. The burden seems to be gone...
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part three
Comment by: Edward-or-Ford
An excellent continuation of the story. Some very hot sex scenes, written with great pacing. The hypnotism angle was tastefully done, not taking the coercion angle too far into creepy "forced" territory. And your editing has improved substantially: there were few grammatical errors or typos. That attention to detail is much appreciated! Well done, good sir! I look forward to more.
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part three
Comment by: Jim
Thank you, I was patiently waiting for this and am very happy with this chapter. Cannot wait to read your other ideas.
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part Two
Comment by: Jason Crow
I totally agree! I wish I had these skills to describe it this way...
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part Two
Comment by: Pan
That is so good, awesome describing. Makes you wanter see the picture though!
Story: Boys For Hire – The Escort
Comment by: Jason Crow
Not quite sure what you mean...
Story: Boys For Hire – The Escort
Comment by:
do you really think anyone listed to your rant, trying to help
Story: Boys For Hire – The Escort
Comment by:
what you on...
Story: Boys For Hire – The Escort
Comment by:
bottom line do not send messages when you are under the weather do you like old or young
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 12 – April
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Robin, I found this a while ago on https://shotachan.net Unfortunately this site isn't online anymore and you are redirected to some paid site with drawings not so much of my liking... So yeah.. Too bad.
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 12 – April
Comment by: Robin
Where did you find the CG pic of the girl and boy thst helped to inspire The Magnificent Zafar? Very cool pic, reminds me of a specific encounter in my life. Thanks for any info.
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 12 – April
Comment by: jeff
lol I emailed you at the old one - sending it to you at the new one too with some new stuff
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 12 – April
Comment by: Critock
Got a new email address after getting inspired. I'm now also at me@critock.com!
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 12 – April
Comment by: critock
I actually had a couple more ideas beyond this chapter, but as Madison isn't my character I felt like I was stepping on enough toes just doing this one, and since my style is a bit different (A bit more expanded on the sex scenes for one thing) we came to the conclusion that this is a good ending. It's implied that she is still gonna get some 'training' from the brothers, and then maybe get a few people together for a sort of 'grand finale'. I'm hoping to do a series heavily inspired by the Madison stories at some point though and I'm always open for ideas. Feel free to reach out!
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 12 – April
Comment by: critock
Hi Jeff, thanks! I'm still dipping my toes into writing, as Jason said I've got some stories slowly going up at https://storiesonline.net/a/critock, and you can reach me at critock@gmail.com!
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 12 – April
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Jeff, Thanks for pointing it out. I just fixed the Madison page, so no more 'Oops....' if I did it right 🙂 I'll drop Critock an e-mail You asked for his e-mail. You do know he can be found too at https://storiesonline.net/a/critock??
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 12 – April
Comment by: jeff
jason - the link to this doesn't work from the Madison list of chapters Critock - that was fuckin hot - I got ideas for a final chapter cause there's no may - gotta find your email 😉
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part Four
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Edward-or-Ford, I totally agree with you! The beginning is stunning and the way these kids deal with the situation is excellently executed. I't almost as if the words of someone who helped me with writing tips came true on this story: "There was a big gas explosion and everyone died. The end." That is also one of the main reasons I'm struggeling with the final episode of 'The Magnificent Zafar'. I don't want it to end like this! Keep reading the stories here. Most of Alex' stories end better 🙂 -- JC
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 11 – March
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi critock, Good question! I honestly don't know if Alex had a girl that inspired him. If you have a pic of a girl you think represents Madison, please send it to me and I'll place it up here! -- JC
Story: Study BG3-17 – Part Four
Comment by: Edward-or-Ford
Such conflicted emotions about this fic! The premise and execution of the first chapter was amazing! The escalation of the kids' sexuality was *very* well done. Character development was excellent. Their first time having intercourse was hot and had legitimate emotion. And then … it was like the author just gave up! No resolution to how the experience changed the kids. No explanation for who conducted the study or why. No sign of how the study completed, and whether or not the kids stayed in touch afterwards. Such a shame! Still, excluding the lack of any kind of satisfying conclusion, I enjoyed this fic a lot. Thank you Jason for cataloging it on your site.
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 11 – March
Comment by: critock
Just curious if there was a girl that inspired Madison and a pic of her.
Story: Congratulations!
Comment by: Jason Crow
Thanks Beart! Appreciate it..
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part two
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Minisino, Good to read you're enjoying the story. That really means something to me! This makes me realize what I'm doing it for. The story is coming along way too slow if you're asking me. But me being in a pretty f*cked up accident didn't help things. But hey, I'm back in the saddle and spend a few hours a week writing, so I'm hoping this month. But I wouldn't hold my breath if I was you 🙂 Thanks for the encouragement though! Keep an eye on the website, because I'll post it here first of course... -- JC
Story: The Magnificent Zafar – Part two
Comment by: Minisino
Recently came across this story and really enjoy it. Do you know roughly when part 3 will be released?
Story: Congratulations!
Comment by: Beart
A bit late to the party, but congratulations from me!
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 09 – January
Comment by: Jason Crow
Hi Jeff, I've never seen these chapters, but I'll start a search for it now. Thanks for mentioning it! JC
Story: A Year in the Life of Madison Semmes – Part 09 – January
Comment by: jeff
hey dude ive seen chapters for february and march on a different alex hawk fan site - having trouble finding it now but take a look